ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED updated PART 5 on 16-9-2014/Page 118 - Page 52

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Posted: 10 years ago

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nyc update richu

i tell u grrr ye maan he is sach a fool ass dammbo ...
maan's all family member r so sweet i think their r some resion for sure that's y maan is like that ...
poor geet grr ye maan ye samjhta kiya hai apne ap ko but dadima taking geets side and scolding maan...
thenmaan felt attraction towards geetafter seeing geet in black saree uff they way he ghoorofying her na wid his diwale ke ladoo jayse eyes say i thought eyes saye he geet ko preg... kar dega ...
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koi reason nahi hai chhupa hua aisa hi hai wo bas that is the truth.
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PART - 5



Life is not so simple for her. As he command Geet reached to office on time and Maan overloaded her with work. She had no option but to cribbed and cursed him under breath.



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"o god why you made him like this only? Cant he become sweet like his adorable smile. No a big no. He become sweet only to his numerous girl friends. Unse to kaise sweetly baat karte hai. Mere time pata nahi kya ho jata hai. Subah subah hi itna kaam pakda diya hai,jaise main koi machine hu. Kyu hai ye aise dhush danav types." she babbling while doing her work.


She cant even finish her previous work when Maan summoned her in his cabin for some dictation. She pick up her pen and note book. 'aa gaya hitler ka dusra order. Ek kaam khtam hota nahi dusra or pakda denge.' she pouts and moved dumping her feet on floor.


She asked for permission and he allowed. As soon she enters Maan commands her to write what he is gonna dictate her. He start speaking without even glancing her. He spoke really very fast but she managed to write everything. When he was busy in dectating her,his cabin's door open with a jerk and broke their pace.


Maan is ready to shout on the person who disturb his rythem but,he controlled some how seeing the person. A young girl in a skimp knee length single dress,cut sleeves,halter neck,high heels,having a glossy skin,long lashes entered in an authoritive manner and straight went to Maan without any fear. Both hugged and she kissed him.


'miss me?' She asked seductivly.

'ofcourse. When you arrived?' Maan resciprocate and pulled her closer.


She roamed her finger on his stubbled cheek. 'early morning and see i am here to meet my love.' Her eyes were gleaming till she get the glimpse of Geet inside the room. She turned to her and glared as she saw something dirty. 'dont you have a manners? Cant you see wee need a space? Just get out of here.' She burst on him.


Geet felt sad as she scolded her without any reason. What her fault in all this if she arrived suddenly. She is doing her job only and if she went with out his permission then she too scold by him. Without any reason Geet become target. But she had a lot of patience. 'sir may i leave?' she asked to him and he allowed her.


'who is this stupid girl. I had never seen her before.' She asked annoyingly.

'she is my new secratary,came on the place of Mrs. Maria.' Maan cleared her queries.


'what? Why the hell you appoint her. Maan i know you. Kahi firrse tum...?' she is doubting on him.


Maan really pissed of but pretend to be calm as she is a bearer cheque of unlimited profit. 'you taken me wrong Sameera.' He said casually to lighten her mood.


'Maan fired her right now. I dont want any youung girl around you all the time.' Sameera was really upset with Geet's presence around him.


'o common Sameera. My taste is aint bad. I mean just look at her. Do you really think i falls for her. She is just a mere employe of mine. She is here for office work only. Its all professional.' Maan's patience now give up he cant pretend more sweeter and snap back.


'ok i am sorry baby. But what can i do. Tum ho hi aise. So darr lagta hai mujhe. I cant share you na.' she hugged him and start talking sweetly and trying to seduce him.


'hey genious what's up?' Dev called seeing Geet gloomed. He named her Genious from the day she helped him in one project. She nodded only no and Dev smiled.
'again bro scold you?' he asked and again she nodded no. 'NO?' she nodded no. 'then y this long face?' Dev get confused with her behaviour. Geet told him everything happened in Maan's cabin. 'hmm to Sameera is back from her trip. Hey Genious not bother her. She is bro's fiancee. Uska temper b bro jaisa hi hai.' he trying to comfortig her.


'Maan sir to daante hi the ab unki fiancee se b daant khao. Ye koi baat hai.' she cribbed.


'nai bilkul b nahi. Infact its wrong.' Dev supports her words so she feels good. Same time Meera called him and he asked her to talk to Geet. Meera talked to Geet and make her smile. She feels good the way Meera handle her.


One month passed Dev is working on some project but he got struck on some issues. Geet arrived to his cabin and found him in tension. She asked the reason and Dev told her. Both discuss the terms and Geet gave him a solution again. Dev asked her to handle this project with him. He even ready to pay for it,but Geet denied. She agreed to help him and both start working on project.


For next whole two weeks,both did so much hard work on the project as it is very important for Maan and he want to crack this deal at any cost. 'thanx alot Genious,if you aint help me then God knows how i will handle this alone.' Dev is very happy. Geet is such a big support through out. But everything is not as simple as that. Only one day is remaining for the meeting and Dev have to leave for Paris. All is set but Meera's health again falls down. He admitted her to hospital. Any time her labour pain can starts. Dev's condition turn worst as doc told there is some complications in her delivery. Dev scared alot for his love and child. He dont wanna loose any of them. Dev decline to go for a meeting in such a situation.


'how could you Dev?' Maan argued. 'last moment pe tum jane se mana nahi kar sakte.' Maan get annoyed with his decision.


'bro main Meera ko is condition me akela chod k nahi ja skta.' Dev told his decision strongly.

'Dev you are not a doc. Meera ko sambhalne k liye yaha doc hai. Zada baat hui main or doc arrange kar dunga par tumhari zaroorat us meeting me zada hai. Understood.' Maan glared him furiously.


'meri zarurat kaha zada ai mujhe pata hai.' Dev to get annoyed with his selfish behaviour.


'o comon Dev dont be act like a fool. Ye deal millions ki hai. And you woked on it. Then how can you leave it like this.' Maan snap back.


'koi b deal Meera se badkar nahi hai.' Dev replied.


'what your use here tell me? You cant even help her.'


'ye aap nahi samjhenge. Jis insan k liye pyar ka koi matlab hi nahi hai wo ye nahi samjh sakta what i am going through this time. Meri wife critical hai. Uski or mere baby ki zindagi dav pe lagi hai or aap mujhse meeting attend karne ko bol rae hai. But what else i can accept a person like you. Who himself going to marry only for sake profits. Yahi hai apki life me bas. Profit or ladkiya. Bro par meri ek baat yaad rakhiyega inme se koi b cheez sachhe pyar ki jagah nahi le skta.' Dev's patience give up as he was already tensed due to Meera's condition and Maan pushing him more so he snap back.


'pyar jaisi faltu ki cheezo se pet nahi bharta. I live my lie like i want and if you dont like then its not my problem. Sameera se shadi kar raha hu hum sabke liye. If her dad's company merged with us then no one can ever courage to stand before us. Samjhe tum.'


'bas keejiye aap dono. Bahut ho gaya. Maan Dev kahi nahi jayenge or ye humara faisla hai. Apko agar itni hi zarurat hai is deal ki to aap khud chale jaiye.' Dadima was viewing silently but her patience broked when she saw no end of their argument. She supports Dev and told Maan that he wont go anywhere.


'dadima mujhe is project k bare me kuchh b nahi pata. How can i handle this meeting?' Maan told his problem.


'apki problem ka solution hai mere pas. Geet.'

Maan's eyes widened hearing her name. 'Geet? Wo chalta firrta disaster. Wo kya help karegi?' Maan chuckled and mocked of his suggestion.


'jise aap itna dumb samjhte hai,usi ne ye project pura karne me meri help ki hai.' Dev said rudely.


'usne help ki hai? Jo theek se bina thuke chal b nahi sakti.' Maan wont believe.



'aap chahe usme kitni hi khamiya kyu na nikal le. Par sach yahi hai wo genious hai. Use samjh hai. Ha par apko kyu dikhega kyunki wo baki stupid girls ki tarah make up doll nahi bani rehti. Bro dont under estimate her. I told you several times before. She is very intelligent. Or usko is project ki har detail malum hai.' Dev mocked of his believes and assured him that only she is one who can handle this meeting.


Maan fumed and left from there. He was so tensed regarding this project and now when Dev denied going there Maan's tension rosed. Seeing no other option he went to Geet and asked aboutthe project. 'Dev k sath tumne wo project handle kiya tha?' he asked in such a threatening way that she start trembling. And forgot to answer. Maan dumped the table. 'kuchh puchh raha hu main?' he shout on her.


'yes sir.' she replied briefly.


'good. Then Paris chalne ki tayari karo. We have to leave as soon as possible.' Maan comamnds her.


'Paris?' she asked in confusion.


Maan leaned over her. 'ha Paris. Any problem?' he is not asking her but threatening her.


Geet nodded no.



'good. Now go home and bring your bag as soon as possible. I am waiting for you.' Maan commands her and she nodded without any arguement.




HEY GUYS I KNOW YOU HAVE MANY DOUBTS. SO WANNA CLEAR THEM


1.Many of you have a doubt that Maan's nature is weired because of some hidden past or reason.

Ans. So wanna clear it he is only like this. There is no hidden story and reason behind his behaviour.


2. Who is Maan's swetheart?


Ans. Maan have numerous girlfriends or we can say his bed warmer,so its just one of them,not specific one. Wanna remind you he is a Casonova and spend his nights with different girl. And beacuse of his this habbit he live alone and far from his family.


I HOPE I CLEARED SOME. WAITING FOR YOUR COMMENTS AND LIKES 😊 thanx to my all loyal readers ❤️
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Yipee me 1st to comment
Loved d whole ud baby loved d way geet was cribbing abt her dusht danav boss
So finally sameera came into picture so maan is getting marry fir d profit sake
My poor geet again got scolded frm sameera pehle maan kam tha ke uski fiance bi aa gi
Yes geet is a heinous wat a name dev had given to geet
She helped him in d project
Meera needed dev nd d way bursted on maan was mind blowing each nd every word was correct maan is only going to understand their emotions when he is going to fall in love nd I think which is not possible in this birth
So both going to Paris let's c wat is going to happen there
Lov u sweetheart for this lovely ud u make my day lov u nd god bless u
Pls give d next part soon can't wait
Edited by lovemaaneet90 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
maan beta geet se toh apko pyar hoga jitni marzi abi insult kr do
u will love her unconditionally
maan attitude towards love is ridiculous
how can he give more importance to work ratber than life
hope he get lesson of that
lolz bechari geet sab se dant khati hai widout her fault
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Posted: 10 years ago
Bechari Geet uski Babaji toh tak jayegenge 😛😛
Wow Geet helped Dev in the project. Loved the way he gave back nicely to Maan but its not easy make a person like Maan to understand

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part di poor geet hw much wrk she hv 2 do maan😡
chipkali came nd startd her job seducng maan nd scolded geet witout any reason😡 maan is marryng sameera 4 profit😲
dev nd geet wrkd on project👍🏼
meera's health is nt gd nd dev wants 2 be wit her bt maan mocked dev nd dev ansd him very well👏
nw geet is gong wit maan 2 paris bechari ko aur kya kya jelna padega
waitng 4 d nxt part di
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet has to bear sam too now
sam wants maan to throw geet out
but he says its truly proffessional
only dev finds geet as genious
she helped him in completeing the project
dev denied going to paris as he want to stay with mera
he gv a long ;ecture to maan on love
which he didnt accept
finally dadi told maan to go n dev saying geet know about project
now maan n geet to paris
will he come to know how genious she is
nice part
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Originally posted by: lovemaaneet90

Yipee me 1st to comment
Loved d whole ud baby loved d way geet was cribbing abt her dusht danav boss
So finally sameera came into picture so maan is getting marry fir d profit sake
My poor geet again got scolded frm sameera pehle maan kam tha ke uski fiance bi aa gi
Yes geet is a heinous wat a name dev had given to geet
She helped him in d project
Meera needed dev nd d way bursted on maan was mind blowing each nd every word was correct maan is only going to understand their emotions when he is going to fall in love nd I think which is not possible in this birth
So both going to Paris let's c wat is going to happen there
Lov u sweetheart for this lovely ud u make my day lov u nd god bless u
Pls give d next part soon can't wait

congo baby and love you too :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
again a treat on this day cool
Grr ek maan kam the
Now we have Sam too
Does that woman not know her fiance is not just hers
He never can be
Can he really stick with just one woman his whole life
I doubt it
Wow geet is genius
Really Sam stop being silly
As long as he stays away from geet better for him and you of course
Possessive types huh Sam
But he isnt is he
Will there a time come when maan has to deal with same situation as dev
I hope not or his wife will suffer
By that I mean. Sam
Geet maan ki pyaari baatein are all rubbish
That's not him
He can't be lovely types
Always will be dusht danav only
Or as you also call him Hitler
Well must say even though he keeps changing woman at least he pays attention to. Business too
Thank God for that
She isn't that bad geet
In fact much clever than you think
Hope meers shall be okay
And their baby
Maan and geet to Paris lord this is gonna be good
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