No pm - ch20 pg141 - 22/11 - when love comes calling

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@shahsb_26

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

update soon.. :) eagerly waiting.. :D

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jyothi

@jyothi_cool

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

the prologue is really tempting cont soon

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Kiaraah

@Kiaraah

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Another ff Fuzz? Oh girl, you are spoiling me silly... 😳 Now my whole world revolves around your ffs. Whenever I get free time I read your stories. You started one more. Phew! I'm never coming out of ragna land.

Till now we have seen Rags and Kalpi as similar egoistic and headstrong characters. Now for the first time you portrayed them as opposites. While Raghav is systematic and serious in nature, Kalpi is carefree and lives life to the fullest. Prem is cursing himself for Pakhi and Kalpi's stupid bet. When she comes on dance floor she decides to enjoy herself. Raghav is in a trance watching her. His expression hardens when he thinks that she accepted Prem's money. His anger knows no bound when she does imaginary lap dance for Sammy. He just want to punish her and hence kiss her. What will he think of her when he comes to know of the truth?

Edited by ragna_luv - 11 years ago

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@smileysmile

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

OMG. Kiss in the first chapter and you stopped right there. You are really vicious. I think effect of EMA ,taking revenge from us. First of all you are not completing your other updates and now another one. Every time you keep us waiting for your updates. You know how to make us dance to your tunes ⭐️.

An interesting read, considering its very different from others. Update soon

Thanks for the PM.😃

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Shivanie Ramballie

@Shivanie05

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Love love love it but when would we get the updates lol I guess in weeks sorry for the sarcastic remarks but u know your stories are amazing and then u leave us hanging for weeks sometimes longer so please deary continue soon

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Natasha

@...Natasha...

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

I like that all the character are friends or related to some
Aww Prem is a protective brother
Kalpi completing her bet was awesome lol
Hmm... Raghav is already attacked to Kalpi
I like Kalpi flirting game with Sammy
Oh my! Jealous Raghav is fun
Superb CS and prologue
I can't wait to read more

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@HappySmiles

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

It sounds cool!!! :D
Please PM me when you update!! 😛

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Priya

@priya_remix

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: angelpureness

Lol... Pata nahin kab the stories will complete... Lol

U have to stop writing in Indian or you could translate it too... I did not understand line no3 and also no 2 the second part of the sentence.

Errr...sorry my bad. Just like stories dat flood ur mind, hindi verses come to me spontaneously.

It was impromptu. Frm nw on will add the translation.

Thanks shweta for d translation! 😊

Sumtimes wen u write verses in english I dont get dat feel dat it wud express my thoughts appprtly. Mabe eng is not my mother tongue. Its natural to be biased as one always feels one can emote or express more thru one's own lingo.

But u donno hindi then which is ur first lang?