Important..pls ~ LIKE ~ if u want me to pm my updates

Sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

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http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4093965

This is very hear breaking for a writer

That nobody is interesting in his/her work

I know I started this story for my own peace of mind specially when I felt no interest and connection with show...

But like all humans I also want feed back... Comments , review ... Some support ... Some loyal reader and critics

I tired to pm my friends...but some

Ask me straightly to not even pm them... Most members don't bother to open the pm or post forget about reading, and commenting

Those who want to me to pm them pls like the second comment ...

Those who read my FF ... Pls give me suggestion what can I do ...

Unfortunately my story is not base on love story

It is a family novel on akbar but right now I m still in the phase of pre birth

But pls give me suggestion... Bec I really want to continue but also need motivation and support

Thanks for your time

Sara

This is last update

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4093965&TPN=16

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Sara

@smile.sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Please like this post ...if u wanted me to pm updates for my FF

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Ruthshalini

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Posted: 11 years ago

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aweomes ff plz pm me 😳

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anshita priyadarshni

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Awesome ff plz pm me actually like button not working and truly speaking once akbar and jo are born and u show their bonding and ruling iver hindustan which no other ff acccoording to me in the forum have it will be quite interesting love will be there but king and queen giving decisions solving issues togather will be great to read and readers will read ur story .it jusyt my pov hope i did not hurt u

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mishtidoi

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I've read your story from starting and its so very different. I want the PM.

I've one question: Are all characters taken from history or you've added some fictional too?

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ghalibmirza

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Posted: 11 years ago

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sara, i have read it but will respond once my knowledge in history gets to ur level..keep on writing please!

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bokul

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Posted: 11 years ago

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i love the story dear

please keep writing

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aisha

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Posted: 11 years ago

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arre di!!! i saw your ff couple of minutes ago and i am going to read it very soon but yes plz pm me btw i m aisha😳

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Sara

@smile.sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Hi all I have some problem in replying as soon problem will solve I will reply to all 😃

Thanks for understanding ...

Originally posted by: mishtidoi
I've read your story from starting and its so very different. I want the PM.
I've one question: Are all characters taken from history or you've added some fictional too?

Hi mishti...

Most of characters are real...

Some relation are fictional

For eg

The Amer characters of royal family are reAl except name of Karan Singh bec I don't know the name of brother of raja ratan Singh who was king of Amer before bharmal and assassinated by his brother...

Also Sumer Singh and his story is pure fiction... New character sangram Singh I took from our show jodha akbar ... Remember the earlier episode there was sena patinof Amer army ... His name was sangram Singh he was with jodha and moti in mandir when mughal army attacked in mandir .

Except mother of bharmal all ladies are fictional ... I don't know name of jodha mother ... In movie it's padmavati in our show it's mainawati so I used both name 😉😆

in next chapter there will be a character Mirza yardgar Nasir ...he was nephew of babar ...but in my story he is also brother in law of ( sala ) of Askari Mirza which is fictional relation

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Sara

@smile.sara

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: marshi
Awesome ff plz pm me actually like button not working and truly speaking once akbar and jo are born and u show their bonding and ruling iver hindustan which no other ff acccoording to me in the forum have it will be quite interesting love will be there but king and queen giving decisions solving issues togather will be great to read and readers will read ur story .it jusyt my pov hope i did not hurt u

Than for liking and suggestion ..

Co ruling king and queen looks so attractive specially the thing come in my mind is

The chronicles of Narnia

There also was one high king peter the magnificent ...

My personal fav is caspian X ... I love rough and tough like Aragon , will turner ...grey shades males with soft heart like Damon Salvatore

...

History best example came in mind of co ruler king and queen is queen Isabella and kind fernendis of Spain ... And another one jahangir and nor Jaha ... Still she was not official co ruler like izabella

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In my story

King will be jalal only ... Akbar the great

Ruqayya, Salima , jodha always be his fav and respected queens not more than this ...

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After some time story will move on the tracks of show with my own fictional plots according historical facts ... But surely there will no bhashan, screeching, ott mahanta and Manju giri...I m trying to write very sophisticated story with logic in start and ending of every track

I m sorry if I disappoint u with my own bhashan 😆... I hope u will still continue with me 😳

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