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When will you update???

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Chapter 5

Asad and Zoya were out on what the family thought was a date. The fact of the matter was that they went out to talk about their breakup plan. Zoya did not want to marry Asad because he was not according to her, her dream man, her Mr. Khan. Asad did not want to marry Zoya because she did not want to marry him. He troubled Zoya on little matters. He may have forced her into doing many little things which she did not like and would be irritated to do them. Asad did have fun seeing her troubled but he could not force Zoya into marrying him. To trouble her for some time just for fun was a different thing but to marry her when she did not want to that he could never do to her. Asad brought Zoya to one of the best hotels in Bhopal. The hotel was atop a hill overlooking the lake. Zoya was mesmerized by the romantic set up. She looked at Asad. Asad can be this romantic! It is so beautiful. If he can make such arrangements for our so called date where we need to talk about plans to stop the wedding toh... What arrangements he would make if it was a real date with a girl. Haye that girl would be so lucky...' Asad was speechless on the seeing the arrangements too. He was even scared to look at Zoya. He did not want her to misunderstand him. He looked at her and saw the look on her face. A smile came to his lips but he wiped it off. "Zoya this was not my idea and I would certainly not plan this for you. Haan if I would bring a girl who I was interested in then I would do this but ye I have not done the hotel staff must have done it. All I asked was a table far away from everyone so that we could be at ease. I did not do this for you."

"Yeah yeah I know! As if main mari ja rahi hoon for you to do something like this for me. I knew it you are not capable of doing anything like this and wo bhi mere liye... Never! If you had planned this I should look for snakes under my napkin. I do not expect anything from you and I don't want you to do anything like this for me. In case you have forgotten I was the one who first said no to marry you." Zoya went to towards the table and stood near her chair. "How can I forget?" Asad took a deep breath and went to the table. He took seat. Zoya stared at him annoyed. "What? You think I am going to pull a chair for you? This is not a date remember?" Zoya pulled the chair and sat opposite Asad. "So Zoya have you thought about any idea?" Asad asked Zoya if she had a plan. She was lost in thoughts. "Hello! Lizzie!" Asad moved his hand in front of her face. "What?" "Zoya I need you to be on planet Earth right now. You can go to your home planet some other time. Kuch socha?" "I am thinking a large non veg extravaganza pizza, diet coke, choco lava cake. Umm jab tak pizza aata hai French fries." "What?" "I am feeling hungry. My brain does not work on an empty stomach." Asad ordered the food. He looked at Zoya eat in the most clumsy way in a fine dining restaurant. Thank God they were alone and no one saw who he was keeping company with.

Zoya began gorging on the fries. After the first handful her brains began to work. She spoke with her mouth full. "Idea!!! We can tell them that you have a girl in your life." "I don't have a girl in my life." "Kyun? Koi problem? Or you like you know boys." "Shut your trap Zoya! Koi problem nahi hai and no I do not like boys and I do certainly not like girls like you. Bas I don't have a girlfriend." "Tch what did you do in London? Ek ladki tak nahi patayi." "I was gaining work experience in London. I did not go there to patao girls." "Toh what about hiring a girl to play your girlfriend?" "Are you for real? Tumhe kya lagta hai that this is some television show? Why don't we do that with you? You must be having a boy in your life. If not le aate hain kiraye ka boyfriend for you." "Excuse me I don't need to hire a boyfriend and I would never. I am a good girl from a good family." "The same goes for me." Zoya began eating the pizza. Her eyes popped as shone like the headlights of a car as another idea struck her. "Idea!!! What if we..." "Kya? Now what have you come up with?" "Asad what if we create a little misunderstanding between dadis? Then see if they don't remain friends they would not want to become family so they will stop this wedding thing. Kaisa laga idea?" "Idea seriously this is what your lizzie brain came up with?" "Why not Asad?" "Stop it Zoya, this is not some 50's Bollywood movie that we should do what you are suggesting! No ways, it can't be done. I know we have to break up but koi aur tareeka socho. Dadis have been friends for more than 5 decades and you want to break that friendship to escape getting married to me. Zoya how can you be so selfish." "I am not being selfish. See when they forget about this marriage thing we will clear the misunderstanding na." "And then we will lose respect in theirs and everyone else's eyes. Main kisi ki nazron mein girkar jee nahi sakta. If you can think of another idea." "You are so mean! You are rejecting all my ideas." "Idea! Why don't we tell our families that we need time? I mean I will settle in my job, you need to graduate and some work experience. So after maybe a year or so we can get married." "Haan and in that time I will also find my Mr. Khan, fall in love with him." "Yeah that too could happen..." Asad and Zoya decided to be straight with the family. They would ask for a year's time to get married.

They reached home at around half past 11. The entire family was waiting for them in the hall to know about their date. Asad and Zoya looked at each other. They took a deep breath and went to Sabreen and Noor. They kneeled down before the two of them and took the hand of their own dadi in their hands and both spoke together. "Dadi we are ready to get married but we need a year." Najma pouted. Humaira became extremely sad as if someone had ripped her heart out. Gafur, Raiza and Dilshad, Rashid were happy with the decision. Asad and Zoya saw that Noor and Sabreen did not approve of their decision. "Dadi I and everyone would like for me to support my wife in every manner. Dadi right now I can't support Zoya financially. I need to get a job and I will need a year to settle completely. Dadi ek saal kit oh baat hai." "Yeah dadi Asad is right I too need to graduate. Dadi I don't know the first thing about being a wife or a bahu. Dadi I had thought of working before getting married. Main college mein hoon I know I will get to study after I get married and I know ki no one will stop me from working but dadi I have set some goals that I want to achieve before getting married. Please dadi ek saal."

"Haan ammi, khala the children are right in asking for a year's time. Rashid what do you have to say about it?" Gafur looked at Rashid. "Ammi, khala maan jaaiye na please. They kids aren't asking for too much." "Jee jee." Dilshad and Razia both smiled and agreed with their husbands to the children's demand. Noor and Sabreen looked at each other. Asad, Zoya and their respective parents looked eagerly at Noor and Sabreen. Sabreen put her hand on Asad and Zoya's head. "Alright as you children wish. Humaara kya hai we are now old what does it matter what we want. If your daddus would have been alive toh pata nahi kya karte to fulfill our wish. Khair you children are old enough to think what's best for you and your parents' agree too toh kya fark padta..." Noor pat her hand and blessed Asad and Zoya. "Tum bacchon ki khushi mein hi humaari khushi hai. It is important what you want to do with your life hum kya chahte hain kya nahi let it be. Ok you two can get married next year. We will bless you hum chahe iss duniya mein ho ya uss duniya mein. Bas we thought ki marne se pehle if our life long wish would be granted but chalo ye tassalli toh hai ki humaare jaane ke baad it will happen." Noor wiped the tears which were about to fall out of her eyes. Sabreen sighed. "Noor we had such beautiful dreams about Asad, Zoya and their little AsYa babies. Jannat mein rehkar hum iss duniya par inki jannat dekhkar khush ho lenge." The two old ladies got off the couch with the others support.

"Dadi..." Asad and Zoya both wanted to stop their dadis but could not. "Ammi, khala, why are you saying such things?" Gafur and Rashid followed their mothers trying to support them. Dilshad and Razia both came to their children. "It's ok beta dadi will understand. Kal subadh tak all will be well. Now it is not that you two have completely refused to the nikaah. Hmm? Go and get some rest. Jao chinta nahi karo." They went to their own rooms as they knew that their husbands unki ma ke ladle would change their mind about agreeing with the children's decision after getting a huge dose of OTT drama from their mothers. Asad and Zoya were both in the living area. They looked at each other and then went to their respective rooms. "Ye ladka meri ma ki jaan lekar rahega. I know it is all Asad. This is his idea to postpone the nikaah. He knew that he could not make Zoya agree to this decision at home iss liye ghar se bahar lekar gaya. He must have scared her into agreeing with him." Rashid came to the room. He sat on the bed. He was furious with Asad. "Rashid please calm down. Asad and Zoya made this decision together. Kuch nahi hoga ammi ko. Don't worry." "Don't worry? Seriously you are asking me not to worry about my mother whose lifelong dream was crushed by your son? Yeah of course why will you worry Dilshad she is my mother not yours." "Rashid how could you even say such a thing? Do you think I don't worry about ammi just because I agree with our son's decision? Itna hi jaana aapne mujhe itne saalon mein?" The same scenario was in Gaur and Razia's room. Gafur too like Rashid accused Razia of not caring for his mothers well being. "This is what you think of me? Ammi ka aapke saath sirf ek rishta hai are you forgetting that she is not only my mother in law but also my only phoopi. Nothing will happen to ammi or to khala. Have faith in Allah." "I have faith in Allah but not Zoya. Ammi loves her more than life itself but wo ladki she can't give this one khushi to my mother?"

Najma and Humaria were speaking on the intercom from their rooms. "Everyone is unhappy just because of aapi and Asad bhai. Aapi bhi na I don't know kiska intezaar hai unhe. Can't she see that Asad bhai has all the qualities she wants in her husband." Zoya and Humaira were very close as sisters. Zoya shared every inner thought of her with Humaira. She was standing on the door when she heard Humaira speak with Najma. "Humaira dadis can't stop crying. Ammi - abbu, chacha - chachi are fighting. I will never speak with bhai even if he gives me chocolates. It is all because of him he does not want to marry Zoya." Asad too stood at Najma's door. He had made hot chocolate for the two of them. He wanted to share his feelings with her but she did not want to speak with him. Zoya came to her room and tried to sleep. She tried for an hour but could not sleep. She had this feeling of restlessness. Her ammi abbu and dadi were sad and so was her baby sister. She was loved by Rashid Dilshad and Sabreen more that they loved Asad. Najma was her qoobee, she always took Zoya's side and Zoya caused her pain too. She may have hurt all of them at one point or the other but right now it was something else. Her restlessness was not because of them it was something she just could not get it... She got off the bed and went to check on Noor and Sabreen. They were her two grandmothers straight out of fairytales. Cute and loving. Najma and Humaira too were sleeping but they had dried tear marks on their cheeks. In Humaira's room Zoya saw her photo frame turned towards the wall. Najma was not wearing the friendship band Zoya had tied on her wrist. Gafur Razia, Dilshad Rashid who always kept their doors locked at night had not locked the doors. They were sleeping facing away from each other. They had locked their hearts.

Zoya decided to speak with Asad. She came to his room but he was not there. "I hope he did not run away. Chachu bhi na why does he get so angry with Asad as if saari galti usi ki hoti hai humesha. Tch, where do I look for him?" She searched in the entire house he was not anywhere. She came out to the garden to look for Asad. He was not there. His car was there in the parking and so was his bike so he was somewhere in the house. She palm smacked her forehead. "Of course he will be at his secret place." Zoya went out back to the garden. On reaching a particular spot she looked up. Yes there was light. She climbed up the tree. "Grrr girls and Lizzie not allowed. Asad ki toh main chutney banakar pakodon ke saath kha jaoongi." She knocked on the small door. "Asad open up let me in I know you are here." "Go away you know you are not allowed." "Asad open up or else." "Or else, what will you do? You will huff you will puff and blow my house away?" "Asad ab toh ladai chodo. I know why you are here. We are sailing on the same boat. Let me in." Zoya spoke very sweetly. Asad opened the door and let her in. She crawled inside his tree house. "Ro rahe the?" "Tumse matlab." Zoya gave Asad her handkerchief to wipe the tears. He looked at her asking if it was clean. She rolled her eyes, took her handkerchief back and wiped his tears. "Asad look at me bolo na kya hua? Asad main soch rahi thi..." Before Zoya could say anymore tears began to flow from Asad's eyes. "Zoya I can't do this. I can't hurt dadi. For the first time she asked me to do something for her and main itna bhi nahi kar sakta unke liye. Zoya my dadi is everything for me I can't hurt her. I know you don't want to..." "I want to. I can't hurt dadi. For the first time she asked me to do something for her and main itna bhi nahi kar sakti unke liye. Asad just like Sabreen dadi is everything for you my dadi is everything for me I can't hurt her. I think we should..." "Yeah we should. Kal subah we will tell them that we are ready to get married. Now go before my tree house falls because of overload."

Zoya did not budge. She hit Asad with her fist. "Zoya, I am going to be your husband you should learn to respect me. I will not tolerate your misbehavior." "Oh yeah toh what should I do? Do you want me to follow you around saying jee huzoor and doing what you say? Main itni farmabaddar biwi nahi ban sakti. Why should only I respect you? You too should respect me. In fact we should write down the T and Cs of this nikaah." "For once I agree with you too." "Haan toh nikalo pen and paper." "Pen hai paper nahi." "I will get a paper. Zoya opened the door of Asad's tree house and tore off the paper on which Asad had years ago written girls and Lizzie not allowed. "What did you do?" "You will not need it now. I am a girl and I am Lizzie too. As I am your to be wife so it is my right to come here." "Let me write it your handwriting are horrible." "Fine you take notes waise it is nice abhi se habit ho jaayegi to take instructions from me." Asad glared at Zoya. "Clause no 1, Asad will respect Zoya's wishes and her personal space." "Right. So will Zoya in Asad's case. Clause no 2, Zoya will learn to cook." "Cook kyun? Asad ammi and chachi do the cooking at home toh main kyun?" "Zoya please at least learn one sweet dish. I know that ammi and chachi do the cooking but nikaah ke baad you will have to do your pehli rasoi. What will you feed your in laws on that day?" "Yeah I will learn for Sabreen dadi, chachu chachi and Najma. Tch I will not have my distant relatives in laws say ki ma ne kuch sikhakar nahi bheja. I will learn to cook for my in laws. Clause no 3, I will use the washroom first." "Oh hello washroom first kyun?" "Dodo we will have to live in the same room na. I will use the washroom first because my college begins at 7 am." "Oh toh phir I will use it first. I go for a jog in the morning at 6 am." "Theek hai whoever wakes up first will use it first. Clause no 4, I will sleep on the bed you on the couch." "Why should I sleep on the couch? We can take sides na." "Share the bed with you! Eewww! You sleep all nangu. Nahi chalega." "Oh yeah it is ok when you move your hands all over my nangu body but not when you have to share the bed with me. I will sleep on the right side." "Accha hai I sleep on the left side." Asad and Zoya continued to write down the tiniest of details for their post nikaah living together in the same room.

"Mm ammi coffee please..." Asad stirred in sleep as the sunrays hit his eyes. He tried to get up but there was a light weight on his left shoulder. He looked and his eyes popped. He got up with a jerk. "Ouch! Mera sar." Zoya opened her eyes and looked around. She was with Asad in his tree house and it was morning! She tried to get up but her head hurt. Asad helped her sit and he rubbed on her head. "I am sorry wo I saw you and hum dono raat bhar yahaan..." He tried to get up forgetting where he was. He was too tall for the tree house now. His head banged with the wooden frame. "Ouch!" He sat down rubbing his head. Zoya at once got on her knees and looked where it hurt him. She blew on his injury. "Theek hai?" Asad was staring at her. She did not get an answer so she looked down at him. Their eyes locked themselves with the other pair and time flew by. Asad looked away and broke the eye lock. "Ek kaam karo you go first and no matter what don't say you were with me." Zoya nodded her head like a bobble head toy. She got out of the tree house and went to the house. Razia was pacing in the hall. "Where were you beta?" "Ammi I wo actually... I went for a morning walk." "You went for a morning walk?" Zoya nodded her head like a bobble head toy. Razia was not convinced so Zoya told her about falling asleep in the tree house. "Zoya you know Asad ..." "Asad! Razia bhabhi Asad aa gaya kya? I don't know where is this boy? Rashid is already angry with him and ab iska koi pata nahi hai." Dilshad was worried as Asad was missing. "Oh haan Rashid scolded him na toh tree house mein hoga." "Dilshad Zoya bhi abhi aayi hai she was in the three house toh Asad wahaan kaise ho sakta hai." Just then Asad walked in. "Asad where were you?" "Tree house mein ammi." Dilshad and Raiza both had shocked looks on hearing that Asad was in the tree house when Zoya said that she was there. So they both were there? "Ammi please send some coffee. Raat bhar theek se soya nahi hoon main." Dilshad and Razia looked at Asad and Zoya's messed up looks. Zoya ran away to her room and Razia followed her. "Zoya what's going on? You said you were in the tree house and Asad bhi wahaan tha. Tum raat bhar uske saath thi? Zoya you don't want to marry him but he turns you on and you spend the night with him. Why is your kajal all smudged?" Asad too went to his room and Dilshad followed him. "What is going on Asad? What is this? You said you were in the tree house and Zoya too said the same. Uski aakhon ka kajal tumhaari shirt par kya kar raha hai?" "Ammi nothing happened between us." Both Asad and Zoya told the same to their mothers.

It was time for breakfast. Noor and Sabreen came for breakfast after a lot of pleasing from their sons. Humaira and Najma were sitting next to each other. Najma dropped her spoon and Humaira's mouth formed a wide smile. Everyone looked in the direction they were looking. Asad and Zoya were standing next to each other holding hands. "We are ready to get married when you say but on one condition."

A/N: Dear readers, Hope you enjoyed reading it! The next chapter is more exciting so please read it! I will upload it soon! Please do not forget to hit like and comment if you are loving reading it / have suggestions!

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow that was superb !!! 😃 loved it totally !! 👏
But is it me or its being unfair with Asad ? i mean honestly its sure that Asad has feelings for Zoya because he's always there for her and isnt ready to spoil her life by marrying her without her consent even though he wants to ! 🥺
Then there is also Rashid who is also all the time blaming him even though he did nothing !
It seems that Even Zoya treats him like a good for nothing ! 😭
I almost cried for him in this chapter 😭
But still i loved it !! My favourite part was when they were writing clauses ! 😆
And so finally they r ready to get married but on what condition ? 😕
Wondering and waiting for next chapter !! Please update soonish !! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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when I read update,only thing came in my mind is:
how adroable a man can be
Asad wanting to marry Zoya but doesn't wants to force her&crying because hurting his dadi(aww cho chweet)
tree houce brilliant idea
So finally AsYa ready to marry eachother
and the tearms&condition part is just Amazing

well I love it
Try to Update Soon
Edited by -ABI- - 10 years ago
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Amazing update dear 👏 🤗 😳

So finally both agreed for the sake of their Dadi s... 😊

Waise seriously how adorable Asad is... Crying because he cant hurt his Dadi 😆 😳

Asya's convo was tooo cute 😆 😳

So finally they announced tht they want to get married... And everyone's shocking faces 😆 👏

Scratching my head while thinking wht can be their condition 😃

Loved the whole update dear 🤗 ❤️
Edited by yumna.imad - 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Asad & zoya on date to make a plan for cancellation of their wedding. He doesn't want to marry her bc zoya doesn't want. He likes to irritate her bit doesn't want to impose on her. They announced that they need time & both dadis did emotional drama. Fighting between parents & they hurt their siblings. Zoya was restless & wanted to talk to asad. She tried to find out but asad was nowhere. She then realised where asad supposed to be. Asad & zoya decided that they will marry as both doesn't want to hurt their families. Nice T&Cs. Both slept in treehouse. Both felt each other pain when their head hit the wood. Mothers enquired what happened as both came from treehouse. Both said nothing happened. Wow they told everyone that they were ready but on one condition. Waiting for next update soon plz. Thanks for pm
Edited by asifiqbalsh - 10 years ago
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Black mailing dadis- no like!! :-(
Leading to an Asya wedding- Like!! :-)

Im sure the fun is going to begin now!!
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lovely update..the tree house was an amazing idea..waiting for tree house romance...
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Dhamakedar update Chahat 👏

Enjoyed reading it very much

Zoya's ideas were hilarious 😆

I swear Sabreen and Noor are most dramatic grannies ever 😆 I love them

I love how Rashid sides zoya and Gaffur sides AsAd

Treehouse no girls and no lizzie 😆

The whole scene was lovely 😃

T and Cs were cute :)

Loved the update very much

Waiting to know what's the condition 😃

Please please update soon :):)
Edited by potternerd - 10 years ago
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Awesome
Dadi kitna drama kari hai
They have a tree house
That's cute
Asya ke bacho ko bahut maza a ayega apni mom dad ki stories tree house mein sunne ko
Continue soon

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