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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Chin2_n

Interesting update👍🏼


Thank you 😳😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
I think zayne is just like raghav as he loves bavli but cannot express still if not zayne choose another guy for babli but not avinash as he is a kapoor n the more kapoor family stay away from kalpi the more I like it
Good job beautiful update
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Sorry Aria. I was out.of town and hence the late reply. I'm as confused as Babli now. Is Avinash this sweet guy or is it a cover? Why is Zayne behaving like a jerk? I thought Raghav will punch him when he pushed Babli. Why didn't he? Loved ragna drunken night. They are so successful and still doesn't know what comes after 4 when they are drunk. Need to thank Gauri for this. They will use Pakhi as a shield if someone attack them. Love you for that! Pakhi needs to be taught a lesson. Hope Babli can do that.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update
Loved ragna part was hilarious
Pls clear babli's confusion dear n hope she choose correct person
Wats wrng wit raghav he was watchng zyane manhandling babli n dnt slap him or scolded him
W8ng babli to take revenge on pakhi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Chapter 29


Avinash and the goons started fighting,Until one of them hit avinash and he fell down,the goons ran away,Babli rushed to him
Babli-Avinash,Avinash wake up
Babli watched Avinash shocked.
At Kapoors Mansion the driver help Babli carry Avinash,Neetu,Sahil and Prem was shocked,Neetu rushed to Avinash she watched babli and pushed her away,Babli was in tears,Prem watched on.
Babli-Let me help i...
Neetu-No! you leave right now!! This is my house
Babli was in tears
Geet-Saasu Maa
Neetu and everyone watched geet.
Geet-I think your'e Forgeting this is my House,And Babli is my bahu she's always welcome
Babli was stunned.
Neetu-But...
Geet-Saasu Maa,Let it be,Babli you hel Avinash to his room.
Babli help Avinash and left,Geet walked up to prem and smiled
Geet- Husband dear please call the doctors
Geet Smirked and watched a Angry Prem,Geet left
At Singhaina Mansion,Raghav quietly looked at Zayne who was working in the house office,Zayne looked up and saw him he smiled,Raghav stood there qietly,Zayne watched him and thought"What's wrong with Mr Singhaina",Raghav sat in his chair,Zayne watched him.
Zayne-Raghav Uncle I Finished all reports so your'e Free to spend time with Mrs Singhaina.
Raghav watches Zayne
Raghav-Why are you hurting my Daughter?
Zayne watched him shocked
Zayne-I...I would never hurt priya.
Raghav was Pissed
Raghav-I'm talking about babli,My daughter
Zayne was shocked he looked away,Raghav walked up to him.
Raghav-Look at me Zayne.
Zayne stood silent.
Raghav-I said look at me!!
Zayne looked at a Angry Raghav,Raghav held Zayne shirt in Anger
Raghav-I had to witness You Physically and Emotionally Hurting my daughter!
Zayne was shocked
Raghav-How dare you!Zayne How dare you hurt my Daughter!How dare you push her.
Zayne was Afraid and Shamed
Zayne-Raghav Uncle,Babli...
Raghav Pushed Zayne away,Zayne was shocked and hurt,Raghav was i tears
Raghav-I had to see my Daughter Cry,Especially for a Idiot Like you.
Zayne-I'm sorry Raghav Uncle,Just Babli likes that freak and...
Raghav-And it gives you the right to Mistreat my daughter!
Zayne Folded his hands
Zayne-Forgive Me Raghav Uncle
Raghav looked at him and held Zayne Face Angerily
Raghav-Warning a very big Warning Zayne!If you Touch or Hurt Babli,I'll Kill you!
Zayne was shocked
Zayne-Raghav Uncle you may lay this rule down,But you can't stop me from touching babli.
Raghav watched him shocked
Zayne-You or anyone!
Raghav was angry
Raghav-She is my Daughter!
Zayne-But I Love her!
Raghav was Beyond shocked and remember Zayne asking for Priya's Hand.
At Kapoor's Mansion
Prem sat down angerily
Prem-Raghav Singhaina's Daughter is always there!
Sahil and Prem Bickered about Babli and Geet,While Neetu watched them calmly and smiled.
Neetu-Chocopie be calm
Prem-Mom whats there to be calm,I wish i known her weakpoint i'll hurt her so bad!
Neetu smiled
Sahil don't you know her Weakpoint Prem.
Prem smiled
Prem-It's clear from her face it's Avinash she loves him
Neetu smiled and sat next to prem
Neetu-Chocopie that isn't Babli's weakpoint
Prem-Then it's Kalpana
Neetu-It's the person she loves more than her Aai,Someone who makes her weak and makes her cry
Sahil-Then who is it.
Neetu-It's Zayne,she loves him she may not show it but she loves him,It's just care for Avinash.
Prem-So what are you going to do mom?
Neetu-I'm gonna Insigate paakhi so she can Insigate Priya.
The Trio smiled,Upstairs Babli cleaned Avinash's Face with and cloth and helped him up,He watched her,Babli sat on the bed and smiled at him,Avinash looked away,Babli sadly smiled
Babli-Avinash i brought you some soup.
Avinash-I don't want it.
Babli-Avinash it's good for you.
Avinash watched her
Avi-I don't want it.
Babli tried Feeding avinash when he pushed her away,Babli looked at him sadly.
Avinash-Don't do this drama of being my wife,You aren't! Now leave!
Babli watched him sadly and thought"You have all right to react like this,I hurt you Avinash,And i hope you forgive me one day"Babli wiped her tears and left,Babli was leaving neetu watched her and called paakhi.
Paakhi-Hello?
Neetu-Pooka,I have some news for you
Paakhi rolled her eyes
Paakhi-Neetu,Aap!What is it and please don't waste my time!
Neetu-Pooka calm down,why are you so tense?
Paakhi-It's that Babli she's just a big problem in my daughter happiness,I just want to ruin her and make raghav hate her and kick her out!
Neetu smiled
Neetu-Pooka what if i can make that work?
Paakhi-Meaning?
Neetu-Babli just left from here,She met Avi she was so worried for him.
Paakhi smiked.
Paakhi-For once Neetu you made me happy.
Neetu smiled
Neetu-Now listen
Neetu kept talking to Paakhi and Insigated her against babli and told Paakhi her plan.
At Singhaina Mansion
Raghav-What did you say?! You love Babli!!What about Priya!
Zayne looked down
Zayne-I don't love her,I never did
Raghav was shocked
Zayne-Raghav Uncle I respect you but I can't stay away from Babli and I will Ask her soon to Marry me.
Raghav was shocked
Raghav-What about Priya?
Zayne-I'll talk to her,She'll Understand.
Raghav-I won't let you marry my Daughter!
Zayne-You have no choice Raghav Uncle,Babli loves me,Isn't Babli Happiness your Happiness?
Raghav watched him shocked and stunned
Zanye-I love her,I admit i hurt her alot Physically and Emotionally but,I'm Jealous and Possessive about her.
Raghav watched him
Zayne-And I'm sure if one day you made a mistake that cause hurt to Mrs Singhaina would'nt you want her back at any cost,if you betrayed her,would'nt you want her back and want her to forgive you,If you see her with someone else wouldn't you feel angry and jealous.
Raghav looked away feeling gulity
Zyne-Thats how i feel,Babli's mine and you cant take her away from me Raghav Uncle.
Raghav watched him
Raghav-Fine,If babli tells me she loves you then you may take my Daughter away and Marry her.
Zayne Smiled Happily
Raghav-But..If she tells me No,You will leave this house and My Daughter's Life and i will find someone Better that you.
Zayne was shocked,Heartbroken and Pained.
Zayne-Okay Raghav Uncle
A shadow stood by the door and heard everything,Raghav watched Zayne Sternly and left,Zayne was Heartbroken.In the Road Babli was in deep thought"Zayne going Marry Priya,What I am going to do,Then Avinash Hates me, am I that unlucky with guys,I am Beautiful right"Babli twisted her face"Raghav singhaina is hot...Ewww what did i just say,I just said my Dad's hot eww,ewww,Well Aai is lucky"Babli smiled,she turned and saw a ice cream cart babli went over and brought one she sat and ate it then remember Zayne and her she smiled.
FLASHBACK
"Zayne and Babli was walking and holding hands
Babli-Zayne soon we'll Tell Aai about us
Zayne-Marriage already
Babli watched Zayne and frowned,Zayne smiled
Zayne-Let me buy you an Ice cream
Babli-But I'm Angry
Zayne-So you want chips
Babli smiiled
Zayne-Ice cream for me?
Babli-Okay
Zayne and babli went over to the Ice cream chart
Zayne-Vanilla and Chocolate
Zayne and Babli sat and ate the ice cream,Babli quietly ate her ice cream and had a few glances at Zayne,Zayne watched her and deliberately messed his face up,Babli took a quick galnce and watched zayne and laughed,Babli took a napkin and wiped Zayne's Face,Zayne watched her with love
Zayne-I'll marry you one day Babli,and you'll be mine
Babli was shy
Babli-I thought you didn't want to marry me?
Zayne-I will one day,even if i have to go through many test,I'll marry you
Babli smiled and hugged Zayne,
Zayne-Won't you kiss me?
Babli Watched him,and quickly walked away,Zayne smiled and ran after her
END OF FLASHBACK
Babli smile faded,she watched her phone "Babtterys dead,It's late now,Aai and Raghav Singhaina will be worried"Babli left.
At Singhaina Mansion,Everyone was tensed,Paakhi watched on and smiled.
Gauri-Raghav did you call Babli
Raghav-10 times
Zayne came,Raghav watched him sternly
Zayne-Whats going on?
Gauri-Babli isn't home
Zayne was shocked,Raghav watched Zayne and was pissed.
Kalpi-Maybe she's in trouble?i can't bear it
Aditya comforted Kalpi
Adi-Mom babli's tough she'll be home soon.
Raghav watched them and thought"I hope she isn't with Avinash"Babli was in the elevator and remembered how Zayne hurt her many times she wiped her tears and went into the Singhaina Mansion,Babli watched everyone.
Babli-Aai?
Everyone watched Babli,Kalpi ran to babli and hugged her,Raghav was relived.Paakhi was pissed.
Kalpi-Where were you babli?
Babli watched Kalpi not knowing what to say,Paakhi smirked and thought"Time to make trouble and Raghav will kick that Girl out of here"
Paakhi-I don't want to be intrusive But,Neetu called and told me Babli was with Avinash.
Everyone was shocked,Babli closed her eyes,Zayne watched her.
Raghav-Avinash!The Kapoor's Son!
Babli looked down.
Paakhi-Why would you be so careless?Babli perhaps do you Love Avinash.
Everyone was shocked,Babli watched Paakhi,Zayne was shocked and Paakhi smirked
Kalpi-Babli,you love Avinash?
Babli-Aai..I
Paakhi-You what Babli?
Babli moved away from kalpi
Babli-I cause Alot of Pain to Avinash and he saved me today, so i took care of him,I'm the reason he was hurt today,And anyone who thinks my Decsion is Wrong then,I'm sorry.
Kalpi smiled at babli and hugged her
Kalpi-MY baby it's okay just be careful.
Kalpi watched Raghav
Kalpi-I'm going to bed are you comming
Kalpi watched him and left,Raghav smiled
Adi,Gauri and sammy left,Raghav walked up to Babli,Zayne watched him
Raghav-I'm proud of you Babli and is Avinash Alright.
Zayne was shocked
Babli-Yes Raghav Singhaina
Raghav-Go to bed
Raghav turned and watched Zayne and Smiled,Zayne was sad,Raghav left Paakhi watched Babli angerily,Zayne watched Babli and left,Babli watched him left she thought"Now i Finally see the Big Difference Between,Zayne and Avinash"Babli sighs,


Precap
Singhaina Mansion
Babli walkes up to Paakhi
Babli-You told Zayne,How low can you stoop?
Paakhi-Lower than you think!
Babli watched her and thought"Smirked and Gloat as much you want I'll make sure Sammy Uncle throws you out"
Babli and Pakhi watched Each other Sternly.


Morning
in Priya's Room
Paakhi watched priya
Paakhi-Priya Just do as i say Babli will take away Zayne from you
Priya watched her.
Priya-Tell me.
Paakhi smiled


Raghav and Kalpi were in there room bickering as to who got who drunk,Gauri peeped and smiled at them.


Babli was in the kitchen when she saw a rat,Babli screamed and hugged Zayne,tighly who smiled at her,Priya and Raghav watched on.


Finally done 😊 hope u all like and pretty please leave your comments😉 forgive me for my mistakes





Edited by ariarai - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update!! Raghav is a very protective dad for his daughter which is adorable. Continue to write😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update. Loved the way Raghav as protective father and warning Zayne. Babli should get Zayne. Pakhi out of Singhania mansion. Waiting for ur update pls update soon don't make wait long.
Edited by Cinderella81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update!
Ohhooo!!!!Zayne Avi Zayne - Avi ye confusion kab tak chalega??

Does Avi really love babli then why doesn't he give one more try!?

I felt Raghav should have given one tight slap to Zayne rather than just warning him! He deserves it! Raghav n Kalpi had a very deep relation how can he compare that with his n babli's relation!??

And Raghav never questioned Kalpi's loyalty to him or forced himself on Kalpi ever!!!!

I dunno what others think but somewhere deep inside I feel Zayne does not love babli enough to respect her or her decisions!

If he would have even thought that he would give Babli the freedom to choose between him n Avi and he would stick to her decision I would have fought for Zayne to be in Babli's life!

But I find him sick and MCP playing with innocent Priya's emotions and mishandling Babli as if she is his personal property!!!

And after all this he has the audacity talk to Raghav in the way he did!

Ridiculous he is! I dont mind if Babli does not end up with Avi but please please I dont want her with Zayne unless this Man learns to behave!!!! I hope she shares her confusion with Kalpi and she helps her!

Please update soon. I love this ff!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb update! Finally Raghav reacted to Zayne! But I expected more from a father than a mere warning. A slap, maybe! It's a similar triangle of Avi-Babli-Zayne in the place of Kalpi-Raghav-Pakhi. History repeats itself. But here Zayne is hurting Babli which is not justifiable. He should learn to behave if he really loves Babli. Also he shouldn't have played with Priya's feelings after knowing she loves him. But I'm yet to be convinced that Avi is a nice guy. Somebody get rid of that Pakhi and Neetu. Even though Priya is Pakhi's daughter , I don't think she will go against Babli and Zayne. I don't know why, but I feel so. She may fake it to fool Pakhi. I hope Babli throws Pakhi out of the house soon. Please don't give such a long gap between the updates.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update my dear loving it very much

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