MG_Paathshala #3 _pls check note in new thread, link on page 1

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Part 15 (scroll down pls 😉)



Part 18 (link to blog as IF is not allowing to post)











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(banner by gunjar my sweet sis😊

love u dear)




prologue

there was a girl

all lost in her studies

little kiddish

little mature

and most of all very introvert

still she managed to have gem friends

what happens wen she is about to arranged married her TEACHER..??😲










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Part 15



It was late evening when geet and pari were still at geet's room enjoying their time...
Still not tired of teasing-blushing session...


But geet was done with it... She couldn't take it anymore.. She wanted to divert pari desperately..

But the problem is she was enjoying it also..
Everytime wen pari will mention them as a couple or talk about their time together she will feel different sensations and red color would automatically reach her cheeks.


Geet's heart : automatically nahi aata hai.. when I hear his name... I start pumping more blood... and so you blush.

Mind : oye.. tum apni biology ka gyaan apne pass rakho.. 😡

Heart : 😒

Mind (to geet) : don't listen to him.. and think of some excuse..

Geet : if I will think.. then what will you do..? 😳

Mind : 😒

Heart :

Mind (to heart) : oye... zyada uchhal mat.. Idea aa gaya 😛


Geet : accha pari on serious notes... What do u think I should call him..? I mean i'm not able to call him by name.. And sir toh keh nahi sakti

pari : A-ji , O-ji, suniye-ji...😳😆😆

Geet : what...?? 😲

Pari : toh kya..?? naam lena nahi hai... toh yahi kehna padega like typical bhartiya nari..😛

Geet : pari 😒

pari : haan... idea ..!! 😃

geet : kya..?

pari : firr ek kaam karr pehle apne hone wale bachhon ka naam soch le.. And then call him with their name... Like in a show lady calls her hubby as "tappu-ke-papa", tappu is their son... You can also call like that.


Geet was listening to her very seriously... as she thought that pari has found some great solution to her big trouble... but as soon as her words registered geet's brain, she got choaked on her breath..


Geet : pari 😡 you idiot...


And she started chasing her and pari started to run for her life...

Pari : geet dekh lagg jaaegi...


She ran to other side of the bed..

Pari : abb isme meri kya galti hai... U only asked me.. I'm just suggesting

She climbed the bed and came other side trying to escape her..

pari : ok time please...


They both got tired and fell on bed... And after calming their hard breaths they burst off laughing.
Then finally pari got-up to leave as it was getting late..

Pari : geet mai chalti hu yaar... It's late.

Geet :😒

pari : kal milti hu na... I know u will miss me.. But for today try to miss my hot-shot jiju.😳

Geet : ok bye 😳

And they hugged.

Pari : accha sunn... Call him by name only.

Geet nodded.

Pari : and u will call him and thank him.

Geet : thank u...? For what..??😕


Pari : uff... He made you comfortable while your talks na...

Geet nodded again.

Pari : kya karu mai tera...
Geet dekh... Now u should try to involve urself with him... There's going to be difference on how u see him from now on.. As a life-partner.
So u should make small advancements... Initiating talks... Looking for reasons to call and text... These are going to help you open up.


Geet nodded again... Understanding sincerely what she's saying and wondering ki iss pari me itani akkal kaha se aayi 😆

Pari shook her head at her nodding.. She will always do that when she is trying to go to the depth of some-one's words.


Pari : bass aaj ka gyan on relationship samapt hua... Pari mata ki class kal firr lagegi... Tabb takk jo humne bola hai uspe amal karo bachha.


Both laughed at that and finally pari left.


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Khata jo ho gayi mujhse
toh karna maaf O mere yaar...

Maan was shockked to realise who it was.

Maan (st) : ye abb yaha kyu aaya hai...? Sach me mere romance ka dushmann hai saala... 😳

And then looked at his cell again making bad faces..
He didnt even bother to say a come-in and got busy in starring his cell like it will start ringing again with her call on his staring.
Rahul was at the door which was half close, he was waiting for maan to call him in, not that he needed his permission actually... But the basic courtesy demanded that.

But when he didn't get any answer... The friend in him awaked finally... And he entered inside without waiting more for maan's reply...

He came near maan's desk when maan was busy in admiring his cell like it is the most beautiful thing in the world.

Rahul (st) : isko kya hua abb... Koi reaction nahi de raha bass cell ko ghooor raha hai... Jaise ghar pe geet ko ghoor raha tha..🤢

He then decided to break the silence between them...

Rahul : Maan wo...


At that very moment maan's thumb accidently touched the radio icon of his smartphone and song started playing loudly..

Dost... Dost na raha...

And that was it... Everything else faded and both were shockked to core how well the song fits their current situation.. All the moments from their child-hood to yesterday flashed like a slideshow in their minds... And they became emotional, thinking how a small mis-understanding made them drift apart... So much that they fought for the first time ever... Such clash of opinion has occured before too... But they would sort it out together..


Maan was the first one to come out of that trance he immediately turned the song off...
Rahul sighed in relief as that was no less than a torture for him already he was in a guilt mode for all he did with maan at noon, right now he wanted to clear things between them as soon as possible.


Rahul : maan tumse baat karni hai.

Maan(st) : iska jiju wala natak khatam ho gaya kyya 😳
Kyu...? Koi aur ilzaam lagana reh gaya tha subah..???

Rahul : maan dekho aisa kuchh nahi hai...

Maan : toh kaisa hai..?

Rahul : maan listen to me.

Maan : listen what...?? Did u listen to me in the morning..??

Rahul : maan.. I'm sorry... Pls lemme explain.

Maan : i'm busy right now you can leave.


Rahul : maan...😒


But he stopped him showing his hand and big-big eyes

Maan : pls not now... I'm not in correct state of mind.. Just leave me alone.

Rahul : ok 😔


With that he left cursing maan in his mouth.

Rahul (st) : uff.. He is such a tough nut to crack...
Parr rahul tu b gadha hai na... Firstly u doubted maan.. Who is no less than kalyug ka maan.. Upr se u accussed him.. And fought with him.. Baat karr k bhi toh matter solve ho sakta tha na... Uff
abb kya karu..? How to manaofy him...???


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Geet was alone again.. and back to the thoughts of her fiancee 😳


Geet : should I really call him..?

Mind & heart : haan 😃

Geet : what will I say..?

Mind : ye lo... "thank you"

Geet : and..?

Heart : ask him about kiss.. bhul gai kya...? 😛

Mind : haan.. haan... you said you will.

Geet : sould I..? 😕

Mind and heart : yess 😃

Geet : ok

(me thinking.. ye dono isko fassa kyu rahe hai 😡😆)


And she picked up her cell... still contemplating whether to call him or not..
Then finally decided to give it a try.. she scrolled through her contacts still in two minds and sure at the same time..
And finally reached his number..

It was so hard.. just one swipe away from her first ever phone-call to her fiancee... uff it made her senses tingle.. all the "sir thing" was long forgotten.

She waited with abated breath when the call got connect... waiting for him to pick it up also praying that he doesn't pick. So contradictory her emotions were at this point of time.. she felt helpless in the hands of her beating heart.

It was just two rings and it already felt soo lond waiting to pick it up.. when suddenly the call got disconnected.
She looked at her cell... thinking what happened..?
Check if the tower went down suddenly.. or she cut it herself accidently... but none of it was correct.
It took her few minutes to realize that he disconnected the call.. she frowned...!! Contemplated again if she should redial.. but then he disconnected it...!! How could he..?

Geet (st) : subah toh itni meethi-meethi baatein karr rahe thhe... aur mera first call pick bhi nahi kiya 😒

She twisted her lips complaining about him to herself.. somehow she didn't feel like complaining to her babaji about him.. not today atleast.. it was their engagement day today.. he's exempted today..
She chuckled at her own thoughts "exempted".. how come all the words coming out for him are tax related.. she shied...
ye kya ho raha hai mujhe.. she thought, then fell thud on her bed purposefully.. all lost in his thoughts and decided to wait for his call..


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Maan reached his house late... he was still waiting for geet's call, and other side his mind was on Rahul... yes he had asked him to go away.. but now himself was feeling restless, and decided to patch-up with him the first thing to do next morning.

He saw his mom waiting for him..

Mana : mom.. I'm not hungry.. you go to sleep.

Avantika : but dinner..?

Maan : mom pls..

Avantika : ok.. will get milk for you.

Maan : ok..!

He agreed half-heartedly as she will not leave him without that.

He moved to his room, kept his lappy on the table and straightly moved to washroom to fresh-up ingoring Rahul sitting on the bed.

Rahul (st) : ready ho jao.. aaj toh mission manaofy maan successful ho hi jana chahiye.😉

Maan came out and saw Rahul sitting on his bed.. reading some magazine.

Maan : Rahul...!

Rahul : maan look.. now I'm talking and you are listening.

Maan : I..

But rahul cut him.. you'r not allowed to speak.. only listen to me.

Maan nodded a yes..

Rahul : maan I'm sorry.. for all that happened in the morning.. I know I over-reacted.. we could have discussed rather than fighting for nothing. I don't know what happened suddenly that you were behaving weird.. but still i should have talked.. and more than that shouldn't have accused you.

Maan : so..?

Rahul : I'm sorry...

Maan didn't say anything still

Rahul : sorry yarr.. pls

Maan came forward and hugged him tight.

Maan : I'm sorry too..

They squeezed each-other in hug..

Maan : I over-reacted too... specially in the morning.

Rahul : in the morning matlab..?

To that maan gave him a foolish smile..

Rahul : no...

Maan nodded in yess still smiling

Maan : tujhe kya laga.. only you can pull dramas...?


Rahul nodded in no and hugged him again.. too happy to say anything, still some words came automatically..

Rahul : I love you..

Maan : hmm...
But I love geet.

Rahul : hmm...
Wait.. WHAT..???

He broke the hug and looked at maan... maan nodded in yess..

Rahul : no

Maan : 😳

Rahul : MAAN 😳


Maan became serious.. and nodded again.. and ran for his life. Rahul ran behind him..


Rahul : maan tu toh aaj gaya.. rukk ja bass tu..

Mana : pehle pakad k dikha..

He teased.

Rahul : maan you.. you made me mad in last 2 days.. tum dono k beech mai pagal ho raha I was soo worried for you both... and this was cooking all the while and I didn't know..

They kept running still..

Maan : and did u tell me ever that u have a sister..

Rahul : why will I tell you that..? but you could have told me the name of girl you love..

Maan : did you ask..?

And finally Rahul caught him..

Rahul : YOU... 😡 abb tujhe maar bhi nhi sakta... I hate you.
Why did you not tell me about this..?😡

Mana : maine tujhe bataya than a ki I took my proposal back from Mr. Handa tabb teri akkal grass khane gayi thi kya..?😳

Rahul : tabhi mera dhyaan nahi gaya..

Mana : achha... aur section 56(2)(vii) abhi takk yaad hai..?

Rahul : haan.. wo toh tumne itni ache se padhaya tha.. how girlfriend and fiancee do not come under relative as per that section.

Maan : haan... tujhe aur kya yaad rahega 😳


And their talks continued... it was just few house of their fight still it felt that its been ages they talked soo freely.

Finally Rahul left home... as it was too late.


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Maan was lying on his bed sleep had ditched him tonight. She didn't call back still...

Mind : gadhe she's girl.. still she called first and you disconnected it... she must be waiting for you'r call

Heart : really..?

Mind : haan..


On that he sat up immediately on bed.. picked his cell and dialed her number..


Other side..


geet was soo much confused with her own emotionz.. anger, sadness and many more... as he didn't pich her call, nor did he call back.. 😡 she waited enough... now her patience was giving up.
Same time her eyes didn't leave her cell... she still expected his call... although it was late night... and then suddenly her cell rang..

"Maan sir calling"

she got scarred and her cell slipped from her hand... and fell down, the back cover opened and battry came out. (do i need to say the call got disconnectd LOL)

she picked her cell instantly... and restarted it.
She was about to dial him back.. but something striked her mind..

She edited his contact from "Maan sir" to "Maan"

She smiled at her silliness.. and dialed him this time fully determined to talk to him.



Precap : talking finally... and meeting too.. what do u say 😉

ps : u can xpect another one before sunday 😳

ps2 : pls read my note in next post 😛
Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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~~~NOTE~~~

Well...

The thing is.. I'm thinking to start a.. no 2 new stories..

one ia as SS very small 10 parts by max..
and another an FF...

pls do tell me if you'r in for it 😳

I'will post the title and intro for both based on the response😛
Edited by mirror1521 - 10 years ago
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congrats for the new thread puja 🥳
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

congrats for the new thread puja 🥳




meri jagah la li 😭
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan




meri jagah la li 😭


meri place bhi gai na uljhe.. k new thread me 😔
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Originally posted by: Mahimaan




meri jagah la li 😭

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Originally posted by: p_OO_ja


meri place bhi gai na uljhe.. k new thread me 😔

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apne hi thread me tumhe kyun jagah chahiye 😕
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Originally posted by: goldenmoon

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na moon she talking about my story hi

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