SS: Somewhere Only We Know - UPD: Chapter Four - Beautiful Lie, p. 11

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: Angellic_doll
Thanks for pm... Loved it... But couldnt understand which place they are in? Is it tejawat's haveli? Waiting for the update

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Glad you liked it.. Sorry it wasn't clearer - it was the old Ranawat haveli they were in. Hence why Rudra kept having images of their times there - wedding, teej and all that.. :)

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anisa79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

winderful update, shes hopefully slowing remembering everything

Edited by anisa79 - 11 years ago

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Brishti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Reading this, I felt so bad for Rudra. All those lovely yet painful memories of his past. Love how you incorporated previous scenes. Dying to find out Myra's connection to Paro. Is it related to her nightmare? Thanks for the PM.

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Pixiepixel11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Awesome loved it so much.

Tfd pm.

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zanayaforever

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Posted: 11 years ago

#65

So m=p! great...but so many doubt's remaining..yet to get connection btwn d last two chapters ..waiting waiting...

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Originally posted by: anisa79
winderful update, shes hopefully slowing remembering everything

Thanks.. Yes, she's starting to remember, but at this stage she doesn't realise these are memories, not visions for what her wedding should look like.

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#67

Originally posted by: brishti84
Reading this, I felt so bad for Rudra. All those lovely yet painful memories of his past. Love how you incorporated previous scenes. Dying to find out Myra's connection to Paro. Is it related to her nightmare? Thanks for the PM.

Glad you liked it.. Hopefully the next chapter should make all the connections clear, and make way for the present story to unfold. Only a few more chapters, I think..

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: _Ms.Foxy.Angel_
Awesome loved it so much.
Tfd pm.

Glad you liked it.. :)

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Bibliobibulus

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Posted: 11 years ago

#69

Originally posted by: zanayaforever
So m=p! great...but so many doubt's remaining..yet to get connection btwn d last two chapters ..waiting waiting...

Hopefully I'll tie up all the loose ends in the next chapter, and start on the story in the present, and work on resolving the story. Just a few more chapters to go.. :)