SS : Main Toh Haariyan ( I have lost) Part 2A Page 5

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

SS - Main Toh Haariyan ( I have lost)

"My close ones get angry, others get angry,
The beloved shouldn't be angry..
Dreams break, promises break,
The heart shouldn't break..
Even God can get angry,
but I shouldn't get away (from my beloved)
Sacrificed on you, O Lord, I am all lost.
My broken love, just get me that.."

- translation of Allah Waariyaan ( credits to bollymeaning.com)

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I welcome you all to join me on my newest endeavor , this SS.

I am a silent visitor of KKB forum and very few of you may have seen me post a couple of times. But I simply could not stop myself from writing an SS on this beautiful couple AbhiGya .

Prologue is below! Enjoy and feel free to comment / like😃
Remember an Allah Waariyan a day keeps Tanu away 😆

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Edited by -Ishana- - 10 years ago

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

Prologue / Intro

Abhi entered the Arora household with sheer anxiety written over his face. He looked to his left and saw small groups of women and children all ages around, everyones face was twinkling with laughter and they were sparkling due to the excessive gold and crystal Kundan work on their traditional outfits. As if that wasn't enough bling, the house had glittering Rajasthani mirrors embbed into colored strings tied all over with multiple fresh red and yellow roses descending down staircases and walls. Over to the right on a makeshift stage decorated with pedestals and red shimmering cloth a girl equivalent to an angel sat down clad in a simple yet beautiful white sari accompanied by nothing but a simple gajra hanging over intricately woven parandi hair piece. He took into notice her exquisite eyes which rarely was noticed under her glasses, lined with deep black kohl. Her intoxicating smile and her tender soft hands that could melt that hardest. He managed to smile through his tears as he watched the other women smear haldi (turmeric) over her shoulders feet and face. He looked keenly at her palms for the henna that used to adorn his name and he couldn't help but let the darn tears flow as the henna on her palm read "Arhaan" .

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smala

@smala

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Posted: 10 years ago

Loved the intro so much, it was beautiful and poetic .
Loved the way Abhi admire Pragya' s beauty.
Looking forward for the next part. Why is Pragya is marrying Arhaan?.
Please do update soon.

Edited by smala - 10 years ago

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FhatTheWuck.

@FhatTheWuck.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Wow! Beautiful description of everything!!! Arhaan! Love the name !

Cant wait for more!

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@rbb1

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Posted: 10 years ago

Nice prologue can't wait to read the story I'm sure it will be great

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Nitya Suresh

@TheAutumnFizz

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Posted: 10 years ago

Ooohhh... Nice storyline!! Looking forward to it!! Update soon.. :)

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columbia

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Posted: 10 years ago

Do you have an update schedule? Once a day or once in two/3/4/5 days? Becos writers update after so long it becomes difficult to keep a tab.

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Isha

@tereliyex

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: columbia
Do you have an update schedule? Once a day or once in two/3/4/5 days? Becos writers update after so long it becomes difficult to keep a tab.

Unfortunately, I do not. I recently got back to school so Im kinda busy. But I will try my entire best to update by Saturday 5 PM ( Eastern time)