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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
hey girl
you amaze me...you've got such a brilliant writing skills👏
you've depicted every scene and every emotion so vividly that i've cried along with it
keep up the good work😉
and yeah...update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey all am up again with the next part of A DREAM OR A NIGHTMARE...

Happy reading...

Part-27 T-shirt (I don't know why I kept this title but I thought it to be apt lol)

Sanyu made randhir wear his t-shirt.. all this while she was very close to him... randhir could feel her hot breathe on his chest... which were giving shiver down his spine... he was just staring at her... her innocent face.. where as sanyu was also nervous... she had never been this close to randhir like this before...although they have kissed before but the feeling today was different... she was not looking at his face.. she was just looking down... they both were lost into eachother... she finished dressing him...

Sanyu: breakfast??

Randhir: hmmm... tum laga do... am coming...

Sanyu came out of the room and placed the breakfast on the table... randhir came out of the room and took his seat... sanyu was serving him... all this while randhir was just looking at her.. sanyu knew what randhir is doing... his gaze on her was making her more uncomfortable... she finished serving and came inside the kitchen... randhir looked down to his plate and started eating... after having his breakfast went inside this room without saying anything... sanyu came out after 5 mins.. she saw randhir was not there... she was confused... but she was relieved that he had his breakfast... where as randhir was feeling weird... he was confused with himself.. he was going through some weird sensations ... he was worried coz his feelings for sanyu were changing... he was attracted to her.. all he wanted was to be with her.. to talk to her.. to touch her,,, feel her... hug her... he was controlling himself..

After a few hours...

Randhir was sitting on his bed watching tv... but his mind was still lost in sanyu's thought... sanyu was cooking lunch for him... she called him for lunch... he asked to her give him in the room only... She took his plate inside the room and kept it on the bed.. she was about to leave.. just then he stopped her...

Randhir: sanyukta... listen...

Sanyu: hmmm...?? Kuch or chahiye,,,

Randhir: plz yahi betho naa... until I finish my lunch... please (he made a puppy face and smiled...)

Sanyu just nodded and sat infront of him.. he was eating his food and sanyu was just observing him... she was smiling...

Randhir looked at her and smiled back...

Randhir: sanyukta can I ask u one question??

Sanyu just nodded in a yes,,,

Randhir: tum office kyo nahi ja rahi ho?? Bhot din hogaye h... u should go to office now..

Sanyu: randhir how can I leave u alone in this condition...?? u need someone...

Randhir: am fine sanyukta... u just go and join office again... muje kuch nahi pata u are going to office from tomorrow.. and that's final...

Sanyu had nothing to say.. she had to agree with randhir...

Randhir: u had lunch??

Sanyu: no I will have it in sometime...

Randhir: hmm...

Randhir finished his lunch... and sanyu came out of the room... she entered her room and started preparing her lunch.. she chopped a few veggies and made a salad of them...she sat on her bed and she started eating it... just then randhir came to her room..

Randhir: sanyukta I was calling u.. u didn't listen...

Sanyu quickly got up .. she kept the bowl aside...which didn't go unnoticed by randhir..

Randhir: (stepping in looking at the bowl)am sorry I disturbed u.. u are having ur lunch??

Sanyu: its ok.. bolo kya kam h.. u need something.. m sorry muje sunai nahi diya...

Randhir: tum ye kha rahi ho...?? (he frowned)

Sanyu: ha.. me to yahi khati hoo...

Randhir: and the food which u made for me... vo sirf tumne mere liye banaya tha..?? I cant believe this.. tum kesi ho sanyukta... matlab kal be tumne khana nahi khaya...??

Sanyu took randhir completely wrong... she thought randhir is blaming her...

Sanyu: I swear randhir.. me sirf tumhare liye khana bana tha.. mene kabi usme me se kuch be nahi khaya... muje yad h randhir tumhare rules... u have allowed me In ur kitchen so that I can cook for u.. trust me randhir I make my own food here... u can check urself... me esa kabi nahi karunge randhir.. I know u don't trust me at all... I don't even roam in ur house randhir.. mene aj tak tumhara ghar be nahi dekha.. I roam in the areas where u have allowed me... (tears made their way)

Randhir: ye kya bol rahi ho.. u are completely getting me wrong sanyukta...

Sanyu: randhir.. m sorry.. that is why I was saying that let me go from here... u call someone whom u trust.. (she took some hiccups)

Randhir had enough...

Randhir: enough sanyukta... kya soch rahi ho.. I never knew u think like this of me... m not this kind of a person.. me tumhe khana khane se rukunga kya... (he clutched her shoulder) I was saying that why do u make food only for me... when did I say that u will cook only for me.. and sanyukta I trust u.. plz don't think like this.. it really hurts.. m here giving our marriage an another chance and tum or door ja rahi hoo... (he wrapped his arm around her waist and pulled her closer.. ) sanyukta am sorry for what ever happened... I know I have destroyed ur life... u are shattered.. but now I will try to bring ur happiness back... (they both were looking into eachothers eyes... ) this wont happen again sanyukta.. I promise... (he whispered)

Sanyu was still sobbing... she was happy... alteast he took a step ahead... she wrapped her arms around him and hugged him softly...

Next day...

sanyu woke up.. she saw randhir was sleeping next to her... she got up from the bed and quickly got ready for the office... she cooked food for him and went to room and shook randhir...

sanyu: (in her soft voice) randhir... randhir wake up...

randhir twisted and saw sanyu... she was looking very pretty in her pink kurti and white patyala... he yawned and sat on the bed resting his back on the pillow..

randhir: itna jaldi kyo utha diya tumne muje...?? (looking at the watch)

sanyu( folding the quilt) : I have to go to the office in an hour.. so I have to make u ready... now.. I have already cooked food for you...

randhir was happy to hear that she will make him ready... he became excited...

randhir: ok to karo ready... ( he said mischievously)

sanyu looked at him in confusion...

randhir: drop me to the washroom sanyukta...

sanyu: randhir ek bat bolo...??

Randhir: hmmm...

Sanyu: u plz take care of urself.. kal be tum pure ghar me ghoom rahe the... that too without any support.. if u want something muje bolo... why do u have to get up...?? M here to take care of u only...

Randhir: correction sanyukta.. u are not here to take care of me "only" (stressing more on only)... u are here to be with me always coz u are my wife... (he stood up)

Sanyu skipped a heart beat... she was just looking at him...

Randhir: now why are u looking at me like this.. come here and drop me to washroom... I cant control it anymore...

Sanyu came out of her trance ... ran to him .. kept her arm around his waist... where as randhir kept his arm around her shoulders clinging on her intentionally... just to get closer ,... sanyu dropped him to the washroom and went to kitchen...

after 15 mins he came out and saw sanyu arranging microwave near his bed... he was confused...

randhir: ye microwave yaha kyo rakh rahi ho... this is not kitchen...

sanyu: randhir I know.. ye me yaha isliya rkha h so that u don't have to get up and tum yahi se khana le lo...

randhir: oh,,, (he was impressed by her intelligence) thanks... now come here... and help me in removing my t-shirt,,, I need to bathe.. tum chali jaogi fir...

sanyu just nodded and helped him removing his t-shirt and supplied him his towel and other garments... he took them and went inside the washroom to bathe... mean while sanyu arranged everything for randhir so that he doesn't have to get up.. everything will be available for him on the bed only,..

he came out after half an hour and asked sanyu to help him in wearing his t-shirt... sanyu came running towards him... but suddenly she lost her balance and collided on randhir s naked chest... she kept her hands on his chest... they both were shocked.. breathing heavy... randhir with no time slide his right arm around her waist... puller her closer.. they both were lost in eachother's eyes.. randhir leaned down towards her lips... but before he could do something sanyu pushed him... she knew randhir very well... this was not the first time he was losing himself.. she knew what he was feeling now... she really needed to stop him.. his hormones were going out of his control...

sanyu: (looking down in embarrassment ) vo.. am sorry... I .. I lost my balance..

randhir: its ok.. (looking at her.. he was feeling something very weird see her turning pink)

sanyu: vo t-shirt...

She moved forward and made him wear that t-shirt... this time she maintained a little more distance from him... randhir could sense her uneasiness... he didn't force her to come closer to him...

Sanyu: mene sara saman waha bed k pass rakh diya h.. u don't need to get up for anything...

Randhir: ek chees k lye to I have to get up...

Sanyu: tum kissi be chees k liye nahi uthoge.. mene sab kuch yaha rakh diya h.. fir be agar tumhe kuch chahiye u can call me.. me ajayungee... (she paused... she remembered that randhir doesn't have her no.)

Randhir: sanyukta first of all If I have to go to loo... muje hi waha jana padega... and... (before he could complete)

Sanyu: (interrupted) can I get ur no. and take mine too... u can call me anytime.. don't get me wrong randhir.. ye me apne liye nahi mang rahi hoo.. its for you.. I swear me tumhe kabi be phone karke pareshan nahi karungge... pakka... its only for u (she said with a tinge of tears in her eyes)

Randhir : tumhara no. kya h...??

Sanyu: kya??

Randhir: wat is ur no. sanyukta.. I need to save it in my mobile... jaldi bolo u are getting late...

Sanyu: hmmm... its 987654XXX

Randhir: saved.. mene miss call diya h.. u too save my no. and yes.. u can call me anytime... I wont get irritated... (he smiled)

Sanyu smiled back and left for office... randhir on the other hand was hurt by sanyu's behavior towards him.. specially with two incidents.. one that food one and another this mobile one.. she still thinks that he was binding her rules... she was still following those rules which have no meaning now.. he wanted her to be his wife.. not his maid or nurse..

Hours passed... randhir was missing sanyu a lot... he wanted to be with her.. he had his food and medicine as told by sanyu...

It was 2:30 pm...

Sanyu came to home.. she entered his room... he looked at her in surprise...

Randhir: tum itne jaldi agayiii...?? (he got up from his bed)

Sanyu: ha,, vo,, mera kam hogya tha.. so I came early...

Randhir was finding something fishy about her... she was indeed lying to him.. he could clearly make out this from her voice.. her face was pale..

He came close to her... she walked away from him.. avoiding to make an eye contact with him... she went to the bed and started assembling his things..

Sanyu: did u eat something??

Randhir: hmmm... yes I did... and u?? (observing her)

Sanyu: yes... U had medicine??(she said hiding her tears )

Randhir: hmmm... tum itna jaldi kyo ayi hoo...

She avoided her question and took his plate and started heading towards the kitchen but randhir caught her arm and took the plate from her hand and kept it on the side table...

He pulled her towards him and made her stand in front of him... sanyu was looking down trying to hide her tears.. randhir pushed back her hair locks behind her ears...

Randhir: tell me kya hua?? (he asked in his soft voice)

Sanyu: kuch nahi... (still looking down)

Randhir: look at me.. (he cupped her face and made her look at him... he could see her wet eyes..)

Precap: randhir and parth threaten vardhan sir..

So guys this is it... I hope u all liked it... plz plz plz leave ur precious reviews below and ppl who res their comments unres them soon.. also who wants pms send me buddy request..

READ MY OTHER STORY TOO I JUST WANNA SPEND MY LIFE WITH YOU PART 5 HOPE U ALL LIKE IT TOO
Edited by samridhigoodiez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Ress
So like emm Who's the Boss..!😎
🤣🤣🤣
Yaa i know its bandar🤣
Moi first moi first partyyy...!!!!!
Yaahooo...🤣 🥳
Whattt😲
Rd changed TOTALLY changed🤣
My bhai is soo great...!🤣
Moi want to know what happens next😎
Sanyu abhi bhi rd ko galat samajti hai😭*sobs*
Had hai kitni mehnat krni padegi abhi rd ko🤣
usne bhi galat kia tha phle🤣
Jaise kaaroge waisa bharoge🤣
Sanyu ko kisne rulaya *while folding my sleeves up*
nhi chodungi uss nalayak ko*pouts*
Accha abhi taye taye
Next soonish ok🤣
Bandar😎
Edited by Sheron13rokerz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
👍🏼 wowwewv superb update
Edited by mahdin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#95
Res
Unres
Yipee moi 3rd!!!! 😃
Wht a fab chappy!!
Beautiful!!! It ws sooo cute...
Wht happened to sanyu??
I m eagerly waiting fr nxt!!
This ws a cliffy!!
Y u end it there?? I m dying to read the nxt
Plzz update soon... 😳

Well today is an awsm day
All my fav writers hv posted their wrk!! 😛
Sb me sandhir in action Bt real sandhir kb hoga 😕
I ws damn upset abt ystrday epi
Bt everyone's update hs mde me happy today

Edited by ayu13rockzzz - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96


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Diii fab fab fab update
Ok aapke upda
te ne mujhe dukho k ocean se baahar nikaal back to pritha mode me daal diya
Aiyyyooo ye sanyu ko kya hua (kewal ffs waali sanyukta ko hi sanyu kahungi show waaali gandi sanyukta ko sanyukta hi kahungi huh)
Haiii😕😕😕 vardhaaan ko threaten ye rd k dimaag me kya chal raha h
Ab vd ne kya siyaaappa kiya yaar dont tell me k wo bhi sanyu k piche pad gaya😆*moi ko back in my mode me dekh k mumma khush *
*moi become sad no more chocoltes*😭
*update padh k moi started dancing ye wala update full of sandhir yaaay*
*update khatm back to devdas mode*
Sanyuktaaa main tera khoon pi jaaaungi😡😡😡
O teri ek cheez to bool hi gayi
Rd naughty naughty hormone locha haaa abhi apne hormones pe control karo yaar teri hi wify hai
T shirt 😆
Coming to my serious business
Sammy di *puts my gun on her head*
Me : di aapne mere saath accha nhi kiya
Socho kya accha nhi kiya
Soch liya
Abhi tak nhi
Jldi mere paas pua fin nhi h
Abhi tak nhi socha
Thik h nxt update me bata dungi
Puri jaankari k liye kripya update jld se jld karne ki kripa karein
UPDATE SOON VERY SOON
AUR TAB TAK YE DOCH K PAAGAL HOTE RAHE K AAPNE MERE SAATH KYA GALAT KIYA BUT KUCH TO KIYA HAI JO MOI ASPKO NXT UPDATE ME HI BATAUNGI
Edited by pritha072angel - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97
Ress

Unress

The update was mind blowing so awsme di what hppnd to sanyu n precap vd Sir ko warning intrstng

Totally luved it

Srry for such a Chotu cmmnt bt I m not feeling well.next tym pakka bada wala cmmnt

Do updte soon wtng

Keep smiling di 😊
Edited by newmoon18 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98
it was so cute! t-shirt. lol.. why was she crying? She lost her job??????
love
samyuktha😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#99
hii samridhi
u r jst awsm..n ur ffs just u me,i jst wanna spend life with you,drmz or a nightmare oo god i m speechless😊❤️👍🏼.i was a silent reader of ur all ffs till now.
superb update👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
two things1...tshirt...!!!!.. Like it...lol
2...precap: verdhan sir ko threaten...plz don't tell me now he also hit on sanyu..nahhh... May be he fire her????
nice part

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