SS: The Price of Love Part 3 - page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi everyone I'm new to this forum as a member but I've been reading ur ff ,os, ss .. u r simply amazing by ur skills .. actually u r expressing ur ideas by this mean what u actually want in the serial... hats off to u guys.. initially I liked this serial especially I was much carried away by the chemistry of lead pairs but nowadays it's being missed n the serial I feel so.. yesterday's episode was total nonsense . I like to try a short ss on this part... let me try :-)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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continuation of yesterday's episode
Raji: Ennachu Karthik?
He just left immediately without utter a single word but gave a stern look to her. Raji was much confused. He rushed to Susan's home and was shocked by her state. immediately he took her to hospital. actually she was out of danger as she called him at once she had the pills know ;-) so she was fine .

at the same time , in Karthik's home raji didn't know what to do .she tried his phone but he didn't pick up. she was being restless for the whole night. Karthik came home by 7 in the morning . Raji enquired him . he replied what actually happened in extreme anger.

Karthik: ippo unakku santhoshama? unnala ennachu paathiya don't talk to me .
By saying this he just left to kitchen to get oats for Susan. Raji supposed to say something but he stopped her

and says " stop it raji. u have done more than enough . don't ever talk to me . thank god she is safe now . yethavathu avangaluku ayiruntha I would have the guilty feeling for my whole life . I won't forgive u for what u have done . unna love pannenu nenachale cha...".

By saying this , he just left the home . Raji was standing all alone where she was.

In hospital
Karthik was sitting beside the bed of susan . slowly she opened the eyes.
Karthik: Susan u r OK now.
Susan: Karthik.. th...
Karthik: yethuvum solla vendam Susan . just take rest . u will be alright soon

after a while,
Karthik: why did u do this Susan ? ungalakku mattum yethavathu ayiruntha nan end life fullah guilty oda than irunthuruppen. yen Susan ? I have been greatly inspired by ur boldness, professionalism , attitude, ability of guiding others , treating employees friendly , ur skills everything initially when I joined nettech. now why did u become like this Susan?

Susan: illa Karthik...
Karthik: ungaluku intha office illana yen beta office illaya enna ? u have the ability , skills to join any company . u will get a nice job even better than this.

Susan: no Karthik. end mela companies mathiyila black mark form ayiduchu so I can't get job anywhere in this circle.

Karthik: Susan intha circle illana enna u can get elsewhere Susan . may not get immediately but if u retrieve back to old , u can Susan. don't ever think of to do such a crap anymore in ur life Susan . promise me .
Susan : ( after a while) promise Karthik. thank you so much thanks ...

Karthik: it's OK Susan. I have done nothing compared to yours . I've brought oats for u . have this and take these medicines. in two hours doctor will come and examine ur health
susan: I love u Karthik. I love you so much. u r something special to me .

Karthik: ungala intha situational kashta padutha virumbala but I have to tell this . u r my best friend . and i will be . maththathellam apram pesikkalam Susan .
Susan: hmm...( disappointingly)
after she had the oatd she took medicines.

After 15 mins Raji, Lakshmi, Vishnu , David and sales team came . Lakshmi gave sensible advice and gave hope of applying for new job. David also gave his words just like that.
Sales team and Vishnu as usual kalachufies and some piece of advice from their side. By chit chatting for few more minutes they left the room. in the whole conversation raji kept quite while Karthik was standing silently without even had a glance on his friends Vishnu and Lakshmi especially on raji. Karthik also left along with them after they had left , raji came near Susan. Both look each other for few minutes.. then Raji broke the silence.

Raji: Susan how do u feel now?
Susan: hmm feeling better.
Raji: Susan ... I'm really sorry for my act. actually I didn't do that in plan. did it out of emotion only. I can't justify my act . irunthalum I'm extremely sorry. u did this only because of me na...
Susan: ...it's OK Raji. I shouldn't blame u wholly . I should have the copy of the presentation but instead of that I was fully dependent on Karthik. I had lost my sense in these few months. and did many silly acts .. ithukaha nan romba feel panren. God punished me for my acts. actually I deserved this . instead of accepting the reality I had done a great blunder by attempting suicide.
Raji was surprised that how could she open her heart fully to her ... By understanding her surprising eyes Susan continued..
Susan: enna raji appadi pakkura.. ennanu theriyala enaku sollanumnu thonuchu ... I realized my mistakes Raji. sorry raji.
Raji: Susan athellam vidunga ... neenga ellathaiyum marandhutu just move on with ur life... ethaiyum pathi bother pannatheenga u have the stuff u can able to get a good job even better than this..
Susan was surprised by the words of raji which resembled karthik's words...
Raji: OK Susan take care just be relax everything will be alright soon...
then she left along with her colleagues ... before that she asked for forgiveness in her eyes to Karthik at once they look each other ... but he broke the eye contact and went to the room.
hi everyone I know it's not too good but it strikes my mind so post this. give ur feedback whether it's good or bad or too bad :-))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Tried a bit will finish it in next part. Thank you so much.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome SS dear. You should continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hii very nice!!!
Please dont separate raji or karthi in your story let them stay united!!
Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
Thank you so much plily, devils... Definitely won't separate them 😊. I didn't expect such a quick replies . feeling good ... 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kanya it is really awesome yaar
Loved Raji here so much..Expecting KR patchup in next part..plzzz
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one kanya waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi kanya,
very nice screen play and dialogues...👏
far more better than the original office...😃
keep rocking ma..👏
Edited by kalabhas - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one Kanya 👏

waiting to know whats next...

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