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Posted: 11 years ago
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Emotional update 😭 . Can feel Raji's pain. Pls united them soon pa . Waiting for your update dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Really good one yaar

loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3

Karthik was sitting in the park bench near nettech. He was lost in thoughts of Raji. he recalled back what he had said to raji . the thought how she would feel for his words itself kills him alive

His mind voice
" Raji I'm really sorry nan yen appadi pesunanu theriyala . nan unnaya manasarathan virumburan raji nan unna hurt pannanumnu pesala . y don't u understand me Raji . I just helped her as a friend there's nothing more than that. I love you deeply , madly . I love u from my heart . u r everything to me . new enakku romba special . you've changed my life. nqn nichayam appadi pesiyirukka koodathu.. nan unna romba kashtapaduthitten .,. it can't be justified ... ayyo ennaku enna panrathunu theriyala ... sorry sorry raji ...
Without his knowledge he was saying sorry continuously at that time Vishnu came there ...

Hesitatingly he starts the conversation
Vishnu: ka... Karthik...
Karthik back to reality by his voice. on seeing Vishnu he doesn't know what to say .
Vishnu: inga enna panra Karthik?
Karthik didn't reply.
Vishnu: ( hugs him immediately) machan enna manichudu .. b'day appo unkita vanthu pesi unna tension panna vendamnu nan ethuvum sollala machan .. unna hurt pannanumnu antha projectora edukkalada .I didn't know what to do at that time ...

Karthik actually needs that hug for the sufferings he is going on ... after a while
Vishnu: enna machan? onnum solla matengara ... vera enna solrathunu enakku theriyala da..

Karthik: ... athellam onnu illada ... I was longing for ur wish on my b'day ... but u didn't ... nanthan unkitta sorry kekanum ... I should have understood ur situation... nee enna avamana paduthanumnu itha paniyiruka mattenu nan ninaikama ponathu end thapputhan machan. enna mannichudu...

they shared their emotions by hugging each other once again... there we saw the rejuvenation of friendship..

at the same time, in Karthik's home
Raji was totally blank except the words of Karthik ... teats rolled down her cheeks ... she really felt bad about herself ...

she was sunk in whole sorrows ... she made one strong decision and went to have bath...

here in park Vishnu got a call from lakshmi ...
Lakshmi: ( in call) Vishnu unakku raji phone pannala ? I've been trying her for the past three hours she didn't pick it up ... u just try her .. she's been upset for last 3 days

Vishnu : OK lakshmi nan panran onnum ayirukkathu...( cuts the call)

Vishnu : machan raji engada veetla thane irukkanga ...
as Karthik realized his mistakes
Karthik: ( nervously) ah... aamada yen ennachu..

Vishnu: ye..ye iru onnumilla lakshmi phone panna raji phone pick pannalenu athanda ketten yen ennachu ethavathu prachanayada veetla...

Karthik: illada ... susankka dewa project pannathu rajiyalathana sodhupiduchu adhuvum illama Susan vera suicide panna try pannangala antha kovathula kathittu vandhutten...( he explained what he had told)

Vishnu: dei ennada new already avanga unakkaha suicide attempt pannavanga ippa vera new yenda ippadi panna ...( now Karthik gets more tensed)

Vishnu: OK OK onnum ayirukkathu va veetuku povom...

so they rushed to home meanwhile vishnu informed lakshmi to come.

here in Karthik's home
they came and the door was not closed then they searched for her all over the house ... but couldn't find anywhere... they now got much tensed ... when Karthik came to his room again he could hear the water flow in bathroom so he knocked the bathroom door but it was not at all closed ... when he opened the door , he could find raji lying in the floor who was wetting continuously in shower.. he gets shocked and screams" Rajiii...". Vishnu and lakshmi rushed to room.. when Karthik got her in his hands , he could feel that she got much high temperature as she seemed to be in shower for hours. they all were much worried by her state ... immediately they took her to hospital.

in hospital,
Karthik was crying inconsolably... his guilt pricked him as his love is being in such state because of him ... Vishnu and Lakshmi couldn't console him as they even couldn't control their emotions ...

lakshmi: Karthik... onnum bayapadatha rajikku onnu agathu. she will be good ... but I could say that u should have mind ur words... don't u know that she loves u deeply . will she do bad for u ? she did that only out of her emotions...

Karthik: ( who is still crying) aama Lakshmi I've done a big blunder .. yenaku en raji venum lakshmi... ava illama I won't... I'll a nichayama avalukku onnum aagathu onnum aagathu...

Vishnu pays on his shoulder
and says" machan onnum aagathuda intha ... intha paper unga room tablela irunthuchu ...

Karthik reads it... it was written by raji
"Karthik ... nan unna romba kashta paduthitten. enna evalu thooram nesicha neeye qppadi patta varthaya solar alavukku unna kashtapaduthitten I love u Karthik nqn unna hurt pannitenu nenachu end melaye enakku veruppu vanthuchu . unkitta intha moonu nala pesanum pesanumnu try pannen aana nee vidala... therila Karthik ennala u have lost ur patents I didn't make any steps to convince them...but definitely I'll say avangalakku in mela enrha varuthamym ippa irukkathu their ego only stop them definitely they will come to u soon ... I'm extremely sorry sorry for what I've done to u ... nee enakkaha neriya vitukoduthurrukka but naa atha purinchikkala instead of that I've hurted u many times ... nan atha nenachu romba kashdapadren Karthik.. nee wnna veruthu pesuna antha nimishame nan seththuten Karthik... I won't try for any suicide attempt because I've promised u. I'm going to kovilpatti . I don't want to disturb u , don't want to hurt u , don't want to torture u( cute smile appears) ... ithellam sympathy create panna sollala Karthik unna kashta paduthunathukku nan mannippu kekka irukkura ore vaippu... nan unnoda principles maths try pannatha ellame thapputhan Karthik... unnoda inrha principles good characters, helping tendency ellathaiyum parthu love pannuna naane atha Martha try pannathu romba periya thappunu purinjikitten Karthik.. atha unkitta sollanumnu rendu naala try pannen mudiyala... and karthik vishnukitta pesidu don't ever lost it pure friendship... love u Karthik love u mayal kannan love u so much... bye :-)
tears fill Karthik eyes ... he gulped hard ... he prayed once that his love to be safe and wished to come to torture him ... of course it will be azhagana avasthai... after writing letter she just left to have bath only but the sorrow she had been undergone she forgot everything and had been under shower for more than three hours and she fainted...


doctor came out and says " I think she has been showering for hours from ur words... so she got high temperature.. need to take rest for two days then only the temperature will calm down... now she will be back to conscious in 15 mins.. then u can see her" ... Karthik thanked her...
after 15 mins,

all three entered the room . in few minutes raji slowly opened her eyes.. she saw Karthik sitting beside her... tears rolled down in 4 pairs of eyes.. Karthik hugged her tightly and says" I'm really sorry raji... nan thappa pesitten.. "

raji closes her mouth with her hands and nodded 'no'.. and she was about to say something but Karthik did the same and says" enakku theriyum raji new enna solla porenu nan letters pathen ... love u raji...( saying this he kisses her forehead)

raji: love u Karthik...
Karthik: love u Karthik ah madam vera yetho u have written in the letter... and smiles naughtily

raji: (blushes) love u mayal kannan...

Vishnu: ayyo mudiyalada intha love birds tholla...

raji surprised... Vishnu eppa vantheenga ? neenga rendu perum pesiteengala?

Lakshmi: ennathu eppa vantheengala sarithan ...raji antha kathaiya apram solren now take rest

after 2 days, before discharging that came to doctor ,

doctor: now u r fine raji neenga aanq ippadi romba overah showerla nanaiya koodathunga( smiling) ..and Karthik neenga insist panna mathiri unga wifekku Ella checkups um panniyachu...u have told me that she is taking medicines for her stomach ache , u have even given those reports know...

Karthik: yes doctor.. is anything wrong?

doctor: no no nothing ..actually when I went through the report I could know avanga severe ulcerla irunthirukkanga as she had taken heavy dose of particular sleeping pills ...as u have taken regular medicine as per doctor's advise she is now perfectly alright... nothing to worry ...and raji don't mistake me entha situationa irunthallam never loose ur hope confidence ... ethirthu porada murchi pannunga OK va. ... just like to tell u as u r my age ...

Raji: sure doctor. actually now realized my mistakes ... and moreover won't do this in future since he is my soul and my great support ( seeing Karthik with her usual smile)

doctor: that's good raji... and one more thing guys investigation pannathula one good news for u ... ( all four r surprisingly looking at her what it is) ... u have ur PRICE OF LOVE... yes she is pregnant... ( smiling)


on hearing this both raji and Karthik blushes and their sparkling eyes met each others and their joy knew no bounds as their bonding of love has going to be strengthen much more by the new blossom... in addition to KR the two souls were also in happy mood as a new soul is going to be a part of their bonding...


hi guys I know that it's a lengthier part but after this I don't have time so posting this at once ... thank u all for ur support and encouraged me ... first time I tried to form story and I think have ended this not so bad... once again thank u all.😳😊
Edited by kanya13 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Great yaar
Love it...Hope KR patchup will be emotional in real too..


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very emotional update . KV patch up , Karthik thinking about Raji and feeling sorry for what he said. Raji guiltiness on her action and Karthik & Raji united in emotional way with surprise .Very nice portrayed 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Hi kanya,
Short and sweet. Nice ending. Your KR is the first Jodi in this forum to give that good news of their never ending love. Congrats. Best wishes for future writings.






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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
Nice end... I like the quick patch up :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Very nice!!!so glad to see karthi and raji together :) i hope they reunite soon in the serial!! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Kanya, welcome to the Office forum, your SS was lovely taking the current situation of the show. I liked the last part it was emotional and touching, the ending was cute. Nice how you made K and V talk to one another again. The letter was a great part to your story.

My question for you is, when is your next writing going to be posted here, I'm waiting to read more fan fictions from you!
Edited by Smiles-20 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi kanya,welcome to the forum.😊...

wow..wow..wow...ur story is very beautiful yaar..👏.loved it to the core...loved the way how karthik n susan talks...loved the way how K feels bad for raji...loved the VK patch up...loved the KR scene at last...very touchy n brilliant one...hats off👏...

will u write another story??...am waiting eagerly😳

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