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Posted: 10 years ago
part 35
awesome dear...
she trusts Maan blindly...
and Maan likes that and also that makes him more responsible...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part - 36

Geet is annoyed at this introgation...

But Maan needs to now the facts as soon as possible to help Geet...

Maan has already ignored everything which has got Geet to this situation...

He can't wait further, he knows very well that it's going to be very tough for Geet, but he has no other option...

Maan pulls Geet closer and makes her face his eyes...

He looks into her worried eyes and tries to make her feel secure...

Maan: Geeet

Geet is struggling to face him as she is not willing to talk about Dev...

Maan: Geeet, mujhe dekho

Geet looks into his eyes...maneet eyelock...

Maan slowly pulls her into a hug and Geet needed it badly...

She is a little relieved...

Maan: Geet, ab tumme sachayi ka samna karna hai, aaise kab tak baagthe rahogi?

Geet just keeps listening to him...

Maan: socho Geet, ye kaise hua?

Maan pauses for a few minutes and gives Geet time to face the truth...

To gather the strength to fight against the injustice...fight for her survival...

But Geet has lost herself in his hug...jab Geet Maan ke bahon mein hogi toh ussko kaise Dev ki batein yaad aayenge? haina?
Though Maan is always there for her she has to get rid of her fears and recall the facts...

That would help them in the trials...they should be prepared for everything...

Geet doesn't know much or anything at all about such trials, but Maan has seen a lot of such cases...

He has to prepare her to face the council without any fear...

If she has to win she has to fight, there is no other way ...

Maan: muhe patha hai Geet, ye tummare liye bahut mushkil hai, par Geet, mujhe toh ye sab tumme nirdosh stabit karne ke liye hi jaana hai, mujhse achcha tumme kaun jaan saktha? Shayad tum bhi nahi jaanthi hogi?

Geet blushes, kahin Maan ko usske pyaar ke barein mein patha toh nahi chal gaya?

Or does he know about Geet's secret love affair with him already?

Geet: aap kya jaanthe ho mere barein mein?

Maan: sab kuch jaantha hoon

Maan looks into her eyes...Geet bows down...

Adi calls...Maan realizes that they have very little time...

Geet also comes out of her trance...

This is so difficult for both of them...they have a lot to share about their love for each other but they hardly have the time to talk about this Dev...

Marne ke baat bhi ye Dev Geet ko pareshaan karthe hi rehtha...Geet hates him even more...

Maan: Geet, bathao, tum Dev ko kahan kab aur kaise milli thi, aur phir tum donno ki beech hui batein, koi unusual incidents ya koi different behavior

Geet: mein kya koi criminal hoon? Aap toh mujhe hamesha aaise hi dekhhe ho, haina?

Maan: Geeet

Maan looses his temper...

Geet: dekha, aaise gussa karoge toh mein sab kuch bhool jaoongi, samjhe aap?

Geet bahut dar jaathi...

Baabji, najaane mein zindagi bar iss Dhust Danav ko kaise sambaloongi?

Maan: Geet, babaji se shikayat karbe se koi faida nahi, samjhi tum, come on , stop this drama

Geet: kya? mein drama queen hoon?

Maan calms himself down...he has to somehow make her speak...

Maan: Geetm yahan aao, beito

Maan gives her some water...

Maan: pani piya, relax Geet, ye koi enquiry nahi hai

Geet: nahi? aap toh one man enquiry commission ho

Maan smiles to make her comfortable...

Geet: toh aap mujhse itna sawaal kyun karthe? Aap toh Dev ko behthar jaanthe

Maan: par Geet, ab humme Dev ko gunegar stabit nahi karni, woh toh mar bhi gaya, ab toh humme tumme beguna stabit karna haina? Warna'

Geet: warna mujhe phirse jail mein daloge?

Geet bahut darjaathi...

Maan Geet ko aaise dekhke pareshaan ho jaatha...

Maan: tumne aaisa socha bhi kaise Geet? jab tak mein yahan hoon tumme kuch nahi hoga, mein tumme kuch nahi hone doonga, samjhi tum?

Maan looks into her eyes...maneet eyelock...

Geet is relieved...

Maan: Geet, tumme gabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi, jaanthe ho ki insaan ki sabse bada weakness kya hai?

Geet blinks...

Maan: dar, jo dar gaya samjo woh mar gaya

Geet: mujhe jeena hai, Maan, kya mein mar jaoongi?

Geet gets up and holds Maan's collars...she is terrorized...

Maan toh uska dar ko bagana chahtha aur ye toh aur daygayi...

Maan pulls her closer...

Maan: Geeet, mujhe dekho, mere aankhon mein dekho

Geet looks into his eyes...the most powerfull pair of eyes...

With no trace of fear...so determined...never ready to accept defeat...they instill some confidence in her...she keeps staring him...

Maan: mein hamesha sach pe barosa kartha hoon Geet, aur sach toh hummare saath hai, issiliye hum zaroor jeethenge, samjhi tum

Geet ko ye sunke bahut kushi hothi, issiliye nahi ki Maan Geet pe itna barosa kartha, lekhin issiliye kyunki Maan ne tummari jeet nahi hummari jeet kaha...

Ab Geet ko patha hai ki ye uski akheli ladayi nahi hai...koi hai uske saath, MSK...

Ab toh ye MSK ka ladayi hai...haina? aur isse patha chaltha ki Maan Geet ki kitna parwa kartha...

Aur shayad yahi pyaar hai? ab Geet ko kuch kuch samaj mein aatha...

Geet: ab samaj gayi

Maan: kya?

Geet comes out of her thoughts...

Geet: jab tak aap mere saath ho mujhe har ki koi dar nahi

Maan: that's the spirit, come on Geet, try to remember what happened

Geet tries to remember the past...

She is reminded of her first meeting with Maan...

And he has not changed a bit...he is still full of attitude...

But now she loves that...that means Geet has changed...

Maan: Geeet, bathao

Geet: aap ko yaad nahi, hum pehle bar hummare apartment ke neeche mille the

Maan also remembers that...though he had carelessly moved away, the glimpse of that beautiful face had never left his mind till he met her at sam's place...

He constantly kept warning himself from getting distracted whenever Geet was around and he had to focus on his case...he had to wear that angry mask to keep himself focused for it was impossible to avoid Geet as she always accompanied Sam anywhere and everywhere...

Maan then comes back to reality...

Maan: Geet, mein Dev ke barein mein pooch raha tha

Maan raises his voice and tries to be strict...warna ye apni prem kahaani shuru kardegi...

Phir Maan bhi apne kaam ko bhool jayega...

Ye kaise musibat hai, apne hi pyaar ke saath aaise akehle milthe bhi pyaar ke baat nahi kar sakthe...

Geet is angry that he is not amused by her love story...she vows to herself that she won't talk to him about it here after...babaji, ab mein inse sirf kaam ki baat karoongi aur kaam ke seva aur koi baat nahi karrongi, ye mera wada hai, MSK pe...

Maan: Geeet, tum kabhi bhi serious nahi hogi? Issiliye itne sare musibat mein pasgayi, ab mein yahan tummari madat karne ki koshsih ker raha hoon aur tum abhi bhi apne aap se batein kar rahi ho?

Geet: nahi mein bas yaad karne ki koshish kar rahi thi

Maan: teek se yaad karo

Geet: haan

Geet is aanoyed...no matter how hard she tries to remember Dev she only remembers her encounters with Maan...how he saved her from the goons...then too he was just as mush angry as he is now...

Geet looks into his angry eyes...

Geet: ye toh kabhi nahi sudrenge, haina babaji?

Maan: Geeet

Geet: aap samne honge toh mujhe kuch bhi yaad nahi aathi

Maan: kya?

Maan gets angry...she keeps blaming him as always...

But Geet only knows how difficult it is to focus on anything else except MSK when he is infront of her...

This MSK doesn't understand her feelings at all...Dhust Danav...

Maan: toh phir mein chaltha hoon Geet

Geet : nahi

Geet holds his hand and stops him...

Maan turns back and looks at her worried face...

Geet leaves her hold...and she steps back...

Maan: mein Adi aur Manisha ko bhejtha hoon, mujhe lawyer se milna hai, tum unse sare batein bathadena, that's better for me too

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, tum toh mujhse itne darthi ho ki mere samne tumme kuch yaad nahi aathi, haina?

Geet: haaan

Geet thinks...hare buddu, ye dar nahi hai...aap toh kabhi nahi samjoge...

Maan: Annie tumme dhoondh rahi thi, tumne breakfast nahi kiya na?

Geet: nahi

Maan: toh aao, saath mein BF karthe hai

Geet is little angry...sirf Annie ko meri chintha hai...

Geet: aap jao, mein badh mein Annie ke saath nastha karloongi

Maan: kyun? Mere saath nahi kar sakthi?

Geet: aap ko dher ho jayegi

Maan looks at his watch and yes, he is late...

Maan: haan, mein chaltha hoon, aur tum nastha karkke phir yaad karo Dev ne tumme kaise ullu banaya tha, aur mein bhi kaise ullu ban gaya tha?

Geet: kya?

Maan: kuch nahi, Geet, ye bahut zaroori hai, koi galthi nahi, samjhi?

Maan becomes serious...

Geet nods her head...hmmm

Maan leaves...Geet keeps thinking about the past...about her encounters with Maan...

Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
see now only unresing it 🤣



simply amazing update dear!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏


i truly loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😛


writing style i like it !!!!!!!!!!! in serious matters u suddenly do comedy!!!!!!!!! 🤣



poor maaneet both love each other ad facing same problem remembering their past with each other!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭


pata nahi when u make them realize !!!!!!!!!!!!! gurrr!!!!!!!!!!!! 😡😆




waiting for next!!!!!!!!!!!!




do cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




Love





Uma... 🤗


Edited by umamaaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: umamaaneet

i unresed prvios one

happy ganesh chaturti dear 🤗

ha ha ha... just got to that post and thought to remind you that you unressed the previous one but forgot this...just when I quoted the post I got to see your edited post and got confused...😲 why I couldn't see the comment and only it's visible in the quotes? then I realized that you just edited it...😆 will be waiting for you to unres this soon...🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ghsp2fan

ha ha ha... just got to that post and thought to remind you that you unressed the previous one but forgot this...just when I quoted the post I got to see your edited post and got confused...😲 why I couldn't see the comment and only it's visible in the quotes? then I realized that you just edited it...😆 will be waiting for you to unres this soon...🥱



hahaha i unresed it 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
kuch nehi ho sakte hai iss geet ki...woh toh sirf maan k barein mein hi sochti rehti...

wonderful update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
maan trying to make geet remember her past with dev but geet ko toh sirf maan yaad aata hai😳😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 36
awesome dear...
oh Geet tell him everything and then start ur romance...
bechara hes trying to set things right soon...
and Geet is not making matters easy for him...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update, geet in this story is really stupid.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
Maan dev ke baare mein poochta hai...geet ko maan ke baare mein yaad aatha hai😆
Geet maan ko dev ke baare mein bol payegi ya nahi...waiting

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