Asya OS : The deepest abyss of pain ! 29th august'14.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was painful 😭
those tears resurfaced when shed while watching the episode




very nicely written 👏

Edited by MisHumptyDumpty - 10 years ago
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OH MY GOD. Chandini this was just brilliant 👏
So beautifully you penned Zoya's emotions and her breakdown. How Asad tries to sooth her pain but finally feels his heart being sliced into two with the news of her going back.


I just loved it ❤️


P.S. I have been humming 'Jo bheji thi dua' all evening and just as I was about to sleep, this is what I get to read. Just awesome. What do we call this...
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Beautifully written!!! It was just awesome!!! I loved it!!!




- Sushma
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Originally posted by: MisHumptyDumpty

This was painful 😭

those tears resurfaced when shed while watching the episode




very nicely written 👏



Aww, thankyou so much dumpty ! (ankie right ?)
Glad you liked it ! 😃
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Originally posted by: ChocoBerry

OH MY GOD. Chandini this was just brilliant 👏

So beautifully you penned Zoya's emotions and her breakdown. How Asad tries to sooth her pain but finally feels his heart being sliced into two with the news of her going back.


I just loved it ❤️


P.S. I have been humming 'Jo bheji thi dua' all evening and just as I was about to sleep, this is what I get to read. Just awesome. What do we call this...




Thankyou so much choco ! 😃
^ those comments coming from you mean a lot ! 🤗

P.S : Telepathy happening? Our strong psychic powers connect ! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hay Mona its a Awsome OS dear&I want u to make this OS a TS
Also try to update ur pending SS&TSs
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Thankyou ! 😊
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Thankyou anopama ! 😊
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Originally posted by: -Sushma-

Beautifully written!!! It was just awesome!!! I loved it!!!




- Sushma



Hey Sushma,

Thankyou so much ! 😃

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