Asya OS : The deepest abyss of pain ! 29th august'14. - Page 4

Originally posted by: jas91

Brilliant OS Chand👏

rula diya tune mujhe😭

so beautifully written👏

amazingly awesome⭐️⭐️⭐️

I miss Kabhi😭

Originally posted by: cale

very nice os
emotional one😭😭
u have beautifully penned zoya's emotions...and how asad tried to calm her down

Originally posted by: AsyaManeet

Very emotional one😭...
Beautifully penned!!
Zoya's emotions her pain , her breakdown!!!
Asad trying to comfort her!!
Feeling her pain !!!
Fearing to loose her!!
Deciding to stop her!!
Loved it chandni!!

Originally posted by: Malavika7CLT

l loved it..

Originally posted by: mayurchan7

Hi...Mona..actually this is the first time iam commenting on your work and i must say they are fine piece of work...about this os..well what can i say this os brought back all the memories of the Q.H1 so special moments and your images also helped a lot in reliving those memories..just awesome work..though ended on a sad note...but a great one ...

Originally posted by: yumna.imad

Chadni... Its beautiful... ❤️ and at the same time its emotional 😭
Loved it 👏 keep it up 😊

Originally posted by: Asyaaa2910

Emotional

Originally posted by: aseelashah

dear its so touching

i had tears dear by reading this

thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh

Beautifully written OS
Zoya hold zoya & tried to calm her
Zoya announced that she was leaving & that hit asad
He felt his heart was ripped.
He has to do something to stop her.
Well written emotions
Thanks

Originally posted by: mona12345

hi mayur,



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