MG~ FF~The Mist -2- Thread-12-UPDATED Pt 77 / Pg 120/ 31st Aug. ......

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Because if i had done one thing differently,

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Thread - 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4024204/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-2-updated-pt-15-pg-110-8th-june?pn=22

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https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4075648/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-4-updated-pt-31-pg-129-7th-july?pn=6


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Thread - 7
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4100200/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-7-updated-pt-46-pg-112-23rd-july?pn=21
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Thread - 10
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4125567/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-10-updated-pt-65-pg-121-15th-aug?pn=16

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Thread - 12

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Part - 74

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4141938/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-12-updated-pt-77-pg-120-31st-aug?pn=40


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Part - 76

Part - 77
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Character Sketch


Maan singh Khurana... 25yrs old.

A businessman , born n brought up in d cradle of happiness * lost his parents 5yrs

back but handled d business with d help of his Grand Mother who is very

precious to him * Very disciplined, rough and high headed person * have lots of

property and business in India and Canada * lives life on his terms * well built

,handsome and dream of every girl but he gives damn to them * loves his college-mate.


Geet Handa... 23yrs old .

A very beautiful , simple, sober and matured girl * an orphan , lost her

parents in her teen age yrs back ,, graduate in comrs ,, eager to get high edu .

Smt. Savitri Devi Khurana... Maan's G Mother , co-owner of KC.

LateYash and Raashi Khurana... Maan's parents , friends of Geet's parents.

Late Mahinder and Rano Handa... Geet's parents , Yash and Ritu's friends.

Daarji ... Head of Handa family ,, Surpanch of d village , very strict .

Pammi and Rajinder Handa.. Geet' tayaji/tayiji .

Brij , titto and Rajji ... Geet's cousins (her uncle or Tayaji's children).

Dev... Maan's younger brother

Nayantara...Dev's wife


Pari... Maan's love interest.


* Arjun Singh Rathod (Geet's Sr)..


* Arjun's Dadi...
* Annie (Geet's Sr)..



Some more characters according to flow of story ...












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For banner credit goes to my dear Priya...🤗


I feel like everything in my life has led me to you . My choice, my heartbreaks, my regrets, everything...

And when we're together, my past seems worth it.

Because if i had done one thing differently,

I might never have met you.


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and storyline they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS. There may be some mistakes plz avoid them coz i'm a novice.


Part - 71

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4134066/mg-ff-the-mist-2-thread-11-updated-pt-71-pg-99-23rd-aug



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The day went busy for Geet n Dadima nd tough for NT ,, her face was hanging bcoz of hunger ,,she tried to divert her mind playing cards with sam but when sam took her lunch she felt growling in her tummy , she was looking at watch now nd then ,, d moon rise time was 8:45 pm nd her condition was poor ,, Dev was boosting her saying that he was also fasting with her ,, Geet helped Nakul in kitchen nd prepared many things for Dinner mostly Maan's fav ,, Dadima was adoring her nd thought that how diff wr d feelings of these 2 girls , one is waiting for dinner without giving any heed for her Husband's choices nd other didn't know d time from how long she was preparing for her hubby's fav .

Maan came nd Dadima told him to change ,, he asked about Geet nd nd Dadima gestured at d kitchen saying ,,, aaj to sab aapki fav ban rahi hein .

Maan: maine to nahi kaha tha ,, aap apne banwa lete .(he smiled)

Dadima: janaab, aaj aapka din hei , enjoy , hum to essi mei bahot khush hein .( Dadima patted his cheek)

Nakul came ,, handed him water nd asked for coffee/juice ,, disappointed Maan looked at d kitchen door nd then to Nakul .

Maan: coffee mere room mei .

Nakul went in kitchen nd Maan to his room ,, d room was lil decorated with flowers nd aroma candles ,, d windows wr open nd d curtains wr moving with cool zephyr making d atmosphere pleasant nd relaxing ,, his dress was neatly kept on d bed ,, a smile crept on his lips ,, he went to freshen up nd d washroom welcome him ,, he smiled nd adored her efforts for making d day special for him.


Nakul came nd kept d tray on d table , his black coffee with walnut cake ,,, Maan came out nd his eyes went on d tray ,, aawww,, now he was totally blown away with her care ,, he wanted to see her nd hugged her tightly right now but he was confused why she was not coming in front of him ,, her gestures wr showing that she was full ready to make everything special nd he liked it ,, he realized how lil efforts cd make d life bful ,, Maan enjoyed his eve with checking his mails on his lappy nd replied them ,, he was waiting for Dadima's call .

Dadima brought Geet with her nd told her to take some rest nd then to get ready , helplessly Geet went to her room she don't want to face Maan ,, she was fighting with her emotions , one side she was doing everything special for him but on d other side she was fearing for d moments when he was in front of her for breaking her fast ,, that wd be a very pleasant moments for her but it was her bad luck that he wd pretend that having someone in his heart ,, what she cd wish for her , nothing nd for him she cd only wish a long life with all happiness.

She entered in d room nd shunning herself she moved to her study but got a pull nd bumped with a hard frame nd next moment she was pinned with wall ,, she knew who was he?


Maan: chup rahi ho sona , hummm .

Geet looked at Maan who was looking at her naughtily ,, she nodded in a no nd lowered her face.

Maan: thanks for making everything special ,, feeling tired , come take rest for some time.

Geet: nahi wo have to get ready for eve rituals .

He brought her near d bed nd made her sit there with him ,, he held her hand in him .

Maan: udas lag rahi ho , kisi ne kuch kaha ?

Geet: Nahi , wo kitchen mei kaafi der se thi bas .

Maan: Geet u r free to reply them , I trust u .

She looks at him nd he nodded with a blink to assure her ,, she faintly smiled at him nd thought that her prob wr not other but their incomplete relation ,, there was a clash between her mind nd heart ,, Maan knew that she didn't has a drop of water from mrng nd busy in work ,, now it was a matter of few hrs.

Maan: Geet , bas kuch der aur ,, hum ,, now smile , udas acchi nahi lagti ho ,, go nd get ready .

Geet: aap ko bhi ready hona hei .

Maan: I know , lekin abhi time hei .

She went in , took a relaxing bath nd then wore her lahanga which she prepared for d eve ,, Maan was blown away seeing that beauty ,, from mrng she was giving him tremors ,, he came close to her nd took a selfie giving her a sweet smile.

She went for d pooja , a pandit came ,,,he told KC katha , Geet nd NT did their pooja ,, NT was in a saree ,, Sam ,Dev nd Dadima wr sitting there too ,, NT was not in good mood coz nobody praised her nd her dress ,, if she went to club there wr her new found friends to whom she cd show up , but here in KM , useless ,, she was making faces at Dev who was clicking d pics.

Maan too came down nd joined Dadima in living room ,, now all wr waiting for Moon ,, Maan went in his study after lil chitchat ,, he was not interested in those ladies talk ,, even he felt odd how NT's sis Sam was looking at her , but he was adoring Geet from distance , she blushed when she find him looking at her ,, Dadima was very happy thay after yrs her family was together ,, she took many pics to store these bful moments ,, she sent all to take some rest saying that she wd call them when moon appeared in d sky ,, she went in d poolside nd checked all d arrangements .

Geet was in her room ,, opened d jewellery box which Dadima gave her ,, it was a very bful gold set , she admired that ( Dadima gave jewellery to NT nd Geet after pooja nd told them to wear at d time of final ritual coz the jewellery was from Ruchi's jewelleries as her blessings ) then went on terrace to pass d time ,, maan came there after some time ,, he saw d open box of jewellery nd then search for Geet ,, he find her out lost in her thoughts near d parapet ,, he came nd from behind nd placed his chin on her shoulder making her startled .

Maan: kahan khoi ho , eve se dekh raha hu chup ho , kya hua ?

Geet: kuch bhi to nahi ,, aapka kaam ho gaya , dadima ke paas chalen ?

Maan: ku mere sath accha nahi lag raha ?

Geet frown: maine essa kab kaha ?

Maan: fir chup ku ho ?

Geet: kisse baat karu , sab busy thy , abhi bola na Dadima ke paas chalty hei .

Maan: OK chalo , bas Dadima chahiye tumhe , aur koi nahi .

He held her hand to go but Geet stopped him ,,he looked at her why she stopped him ?

Maan: kya hua ab?

Geet: aaj kaha hei , aaj ke baad nahi ki mujhe bas Dadima chahiye aur koi nahi ,, haan ye sach hei ki baaki log bhi mujhse kahin na kahin jude hein lekin mujhe sabse pahale Dadima ne apnaya , samjha , vishwaas kiya aur support kiya mere future ke liya ,, itna to meri family nei bhi nahi kiya kabhi ,, haan Dadima mere liye sab kuch hei , aapse bhi badker aur unke liye mai kuch bhi ker sakti hun .

Maan sensed her pain nd realized that she was right ,, it was only Dadima's love for her otherwise what she got from him to survive in KM or to keep this relation alive .

Maan: I know , nd sorry if my words hurt u .

Geet: don't say sorry , it was u who said that Dadima's happiness is above all for u .

Maan: haan, bcoz she bore a lot nd cocooned me when we lost everything .

Geet: then don't taunt me again .

Maan: sorry sona ,, ab chalen ,,aur wo jewellery ku nahi pahani ,, that is bful .

Geet: wo aapki Mom ke hain , Dadima ne diya mujhe aur NT ko as her blessing .

Maan: to pahano na , come i'll help u .

He brought her in ,, made her sit on d chair ,, removed her pre set nd helped her to wear d new one ,, he set her necklace nd maang teeka ,, he cupped her face nd pecked her forehead saying happy KC ,, she entirely shook with his gesture .


Precap ----- Geet hurt ...

Geet , these Kangan belong to my Mom ,, u r insulting them..

Honge , but u r posting them at wrong address ..

Part - 73





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