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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

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I so wanted something like this, but on the wedding night itself. At Tannu's place when Pragya saw Abhi there. Would have ended everyone's mess.

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Vanilla.Sky

@Vanilla.Sky

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

You're amazing, Mina! I love everything that you write! You are just wonderful~

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shivaniaroraji

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

superb very nice

update soon

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greenbutterfly

@greenbutterfly

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

awesome please continue 😊

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Mina

@-mina-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

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Originally posted by: rbb1
Wow another great os Mina, please continue I want to see what happens next and I hope Abhi goes and apologies to Pragya and her family, Aaliyah needs to pay for what she did and Tannu as well for getting poor Puneet involved in all this.

Thank you for your comment!! Hah I want to make Abhi apologize too, but I'm not convinced Pragya should forgive him. 😛 Definitely dragging innocent Puneet into all this was just too much and there should be consequences! In fact I was almost going to title this story "Consequences" 😆

Originally posted by: -Martinski-
MINAAA!!!!!! THIS IS BEYOND AMAZING!!!!!!
thats all i can say!

Like WOW

Ishaa my love this comment makes me grin in delirious satisfaction every time. Thanks for your enthusiasm 😉😃

Originally posted by: suhasini2727
Very well written. ...please continue. ..n thankyou 4 such a nice os...👏

Thank you so much! Will try to continue. 😊

Originally posted by: .SajnaVe.
Nicee os

Originally posted by: illa8
awesome

@Sajna @illa Thank you for reading and commenting! Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: devil.bunny890
Plz continue...all 3 dummbos should get slappings in any way..because we will never get in near future in the TV...SO write up in such a way that they get slappings and scoldings plz plz plz...

Haha thanks for your comment! I will definitely try to write some more scoldings, but slapping is not really my way. But yes all three must face consequences for their bad deeds and idiocy 😡

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries
Dearest Mina,
Another superb OS from you. I love your Pragya... 😊

Loved how she thought enough is enough. And Akaash offering his car was a nice subtle touch. Unexpected kindness from an unexpected source, exactly true to the transformation he is currently undergoing. Great going. Loved it..keep writing and please PM me when you write next.

Love
Kshithi

Thank you so much Kshithi!! Glad you liked it. House points for noticing kind Akaash! I definitely see him making a positive transition...at least in my headcanon, if not on the show 😛

Edited by -mina- - 11 years ago

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Mina

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: vivkriti
Amazing Mina. Loved it. Please continue soon

Thank you dear I appreciate the comment! Will try to figure out how the rest of the story should go...

Originally posted by: MissAsian
Omg if only u were one of the writers of the show
this scene was excellent

Oh my gosh I'm so flattered!! Hugs to you for saying this 🤗 Unfortunately if I was a writer on the show the show would be so boring because I don't know how to come up with crazy nonsensical drama 😆

Originally posted by: renukha871
OMG?? What is this perfection?? This is amazing beyond words. I loved how you included Purab because he was missing during that scene and I was like where the hell is that guy? He always MIA during the important scenes. I would love you to continue but I understand your frustration towards Abhi. Anyway, I hope you'd give them happy ending!! 😉

Renukha, this comment means so much to me! Thank you so much for saying all this, I appreciate it a lot. And yes I think it's high time for Purab to step up and make good things happen!!! He needs more strength of character. Thanks for understanding about Abhi, I am so furious with him for lying about being outside the room 😡 But I do hope to be able to continue, we'll see!

Originally posted by: .logs
amazing yaar... do continue...

Thank you my friend, glad you like it and so nice of you to comment 😊

Originally posted by: -Laiba-
that was awsome and i want the " may be continued " to be " continued" right now xD

Love, Laiba

Hee hee, thanks Laiba!! I'll see what I can do...😊

Originally posted by: daisydee425
Amazing
Please continue

Thank you for reading and commenting!

Originally posted by: -Tia-
I so wanted something like this, but on the wedding night itself. At Tannu's place when Pragya saw Abhi there. Would have ended everyone's mess.

Ahh yes, no matter when the truth comes, it will have been too long coming. Still, the longer it takes, the more dramatic heft it has, right? Thanks for your comment Tia dear :)

Edited by -mina- - 11 years ago

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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Yeah I think Pragya should make him beg before she forgives him

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nitarata

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

I also can't think of a way to get Abhi and Pragya back together from where your story stops.

You said in the end, Abhi was frozen, he sure would be. All he can do is to sincerely apologize to Pragya, offer to compensate her financially for a divorce (the compensation, she would not accept). What else can he do? She wouldn't need him to to anything for her other than keeping himself off of her life.

Abhi is not in love with Pragya as of now. But the bigger point is, she is not in love with him either. So, I can't think of a reason why they should get back as husband and wife. If you make them meet again and fall in love, it wouldn't be convincing.

This is why I think the creatives will not have Pragya walk off from the wedding. Unless Abhi falls in love with her and she also with him, she can't walk off, as demeaning as it would be for her and so many others.

I can only hope that the story makers will come up with a way to show Abhi-Pragya love is beyond all this. It needs to emerge convincingly against all odds. The creatives need to build that up. I sometimes think, that's the point why they are making Abhi-Pragya relationship go into gutters, so that they can rejuvenate it from the abyss. The wedding night itself was enough of a low, but they didn't stop there!

I think they want to show how Abhi and Pragya will fall for each other amidst all this nonsense. They will find the most beautiful connection. But that doesn't change the reality that's shown right now. Abhi's guilt would be mammoth when the truth comes out. And he will be making up for the longest time.

Let's be positive and think that the creatives are aware of the lows they are taking this story because they want to take it equally higher later on!

Edited by -Tia- - 11 years ago

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Gauri Sharma

@gauri92

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Posted: 11 years ago

#19

Would actually love you to continue because I too am curious as to how Abhi can possibly redeem himself in any way...

Maybe by getting Purab and Bulbul married, bringing Rachna in as Aakash's wife, trying to earn forgiveness from both families and then perhaps go to Pragya to lament...

but you are right...at this point even I do not know how Abhi can redeem himself...im very angry with his character and the CVs as well...