Arshi SS :: House Of Cards#2 last Part up on PG96(30/08) - Page 39

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Hope khushi will be fine.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ok loved it
first part was hilarious till de were shopping
after dat
damn dat idiot swine shayam
thx for de pm plsss continue soon
loved it
Hope arnav find's khushi
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hope kushi will be safe
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Posted: 11 years ago
G,
This update started with happy n lovely moments between Arshi,
Loved their little nok jok about anything n everything for their unborn child.
And suddenly this hopeless cunning cobra appeared n kidnaped Khushi ?
I want to kill him bas.
Loved the way Khushi talked with him.
She is in danger...
On the other side Arnav's helplessness n worries for her n their child..
Agam poor soul was blamed for the crime which he didn't know.
And in the last part the Call with extra surgery poisonous Voice.
What will they do ?
Will Arnav be able to save both of them ?
Agam will go with him ...

Sorry for the delay in comment,
Thanks for the pm,
Waiting for the next part eagerly,
Take care,
Love n hugs.
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Posted: 11 years ago
everyday i come here and check ifever i missed the update...🥺
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: march2011

everyday i come here and check ifever i missed the update...🥺


i will update today 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will update tomorrow, guys!
By evening ,... sorry for today

Shivi
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Posted: 11 years ago



Part 27





This voice never held the power to terrify him. But now as he stood, his feet too cold, listening to this voice, all he felt was fear. Fear of not seeing that face again, fear of not staring in those loving orbs again, fear of not holding her again, fear of again going back to a life where he will not have her.


"Saale sahab? I hope you heard what I said? You have just 1 hour. Your little lady is safe only till then. " his voice traveled and sent tremors down Arnav's body.


1 hours ... safe ... safe ...


Nothing processed in his head, his mind no longer supporting him. He needs to save her. Save her.

Agam looked at Arnav as he stood still, clutching the phone to his ear. And as he saw, his face grew paler and paler, the phone slip from his hold and a tear rolled down his left cheek. Something pained inside his chest, making him gasp for some air. It felt like ... like his pain had traveled to him.


"Arnav .." the word slipped out of his mouth even before he can command his brain.

Arnav looked at him.

"Khushi ... Shyam... he had Khushi .. I have to reach her .. he can't hurt her... He can't ..." Arnav knelt down immediately to collect the pieces of his phone. Assembling it again with his trembling hands, he got up and ran towards the door.

"Arnav! Wait!!" Agam called him.

But not paying any attention to his call, he saw Arnav running, and was out of his sight.

Agam's hand immediately searched for his phone in his trouser's pocket.

"Agam?" he heard the surprised voice of his sister.

"I... I mean ...An... I mean Di,..." he raked his finger in his hair. "Arnav was here... he was asking about Khushi ... He thought Khushi is with me ... and then he received a phone and he... he looked afraid ... and then ran out of here ... .. What is all this? Where is Khushi?" Agam asked.

Anjali closed her eyes and swallowed the lump in her throat.

"Agam ... Khushi is missing from hours ... They have gone for some shopping ... And Khushi is missing ... Arnav is very tense ... he is scared for Khushi ... I don't know why he went to meet you ... You said he received a phone ... Who was on the phone?" Anjali asked.

"I don't know ... he was telling he needs to save Khushi ... he was also taking someone's name ... Shyam or something ..."

"Shyam ji?" Anjali's shocked voice reached to him.

"You ... You know him?" Agam asked.

"He ... he is behind all this? Hey Devi Maiya...khushi ... Agam where is Arnav?" Anjali asked, too scared.

"He is not here, he left my place." Agam replied, not knowing what is happening.

"Agam, can you come here? When it comes to khushi, Arnav becomes very vulnerable. It's really hard to control him ..." Anjali requested.

"I .. I am coming ... where are you?"

"Police station..."



"I don't know. It's your work to find out. He just called me. Trace the number and tell me where he is. FAST!" Arnav bellowed, the fear clouding his heart and the want to see his wife in front of him, safe and sound the only reason keeping him up on his two feet.

"Mr.Raizada , the team is doing their work. The shouting will not help, so I suggest you to calm down. The kidnapper had not asked for any ransom as you told, so his reason for kidnapping is not money. And we know the danger in such cases, so please co-operate." The cop, though irritated, tried to handle the enraged husband calmly.


Danger!

That word resonated in his mind, flaming the fear more. She is in danger. His Khushi is in danger but he can't do anything. He again felt like the helpless 14 year old boy. A helpless boy, standing in one corner and just staring as his whole world came crashing down in front of him, and he was unable to do anything. And this time too, he is just standing here, when his whole world is at stake, in danger.




"The call is traced, Mr.Raizada. And it seems like ... Like ..."

Arnav's eyes jerked up to meet the cop.

"Like what? You traced the number. Just name the place, I have to reach her as soon as possible..." he stood an inch away from the cop.

"Mr. Raizada, either the kidnapper is too dumb or ...or.."

"Or WHAT?! CAN YOU QUIT THE STAMMERING BUSNINESS?!" His loud voice echoed in the cabin.

"Or he wants you to find the location. And I can't understand why a kidnapper would want that. So I assume that..."

"Place! TELL ME THE PLACE! FAST!" Arnav demanded, his demeanor frightening but heart thudding with fear, palms getting sweaty.

"Old Delhi, a decrepit building behind jaanki multiplex. " the cop replied. "Don't worry, Mr.Raizada, our team is on their way ... we.."

Before the cop's assuring word fell on his ear, he was out of the cabin, running towards his car.







Anjali looked at her brother as he ran pass her . She looked at Agam through her damp eyes.

"Agam please go with him. He needs someone..."

Agam nodded his head and strode behind Arnav.

Arnav opened his car's door and took the wheel. As he was about to start the car, he caught some movement on his left side.


"What are you doing here? Get out of my car,NOW!"

"Don't waste time, Arnav. Start the car." Agam closed his side of the door.


Arnav clenched his teeth as his hold on the wheel tightened. Not wanting to waste any time, he looked ahead and started the car.



The car came to a stop in front of the building the cops had located. And he was out of the car even before the engine died.

Agam followed him.

Arnav ran inside the building, which looked like it will collapse any second. His heart raced like a burning engine as he looked for his wife behind every door. He pushed open every door, the wooden door giving away easily.

Reaching the second floor, he pushed opened the door he saw first.

Fighting the darkness, he entered the room, only to stop dead in his track. His legs remained glued to the floor, his face pale. Nausea washed over him. And it was not long before he fell on his knees.



Was...was he late?









I am sorry ... very sorry ... again sorry for breaking my promise three time😆Sorry again and now I hope you liked the update.

Do share your views :)


Edited by shona_arhilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
😛

My heart is beating fast not because of any romance but because of the fear ...dhak dhak dhak dhak..
Gudiya didn't I told you not to give us a CHHOTA PACKET but still you gave this deadly cliffhanger WHY?😡😳

loved it very much ab next part mein der mat karna warna tum pachhataaogi ..kaise tumko maaloom he.😳😆

thanks for the pm,
love n hugs..
NO KISSES FOR THIS Cliffhanger bas.

Take care.
Edited by Divyahet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finaly I kept my promise after breaking it three time😆

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