Jisse main tha bhoolta aaya, Woh wajood mila - An IshRa SS Ch 4 - Pg13 - Page 16

Originally posted by: Luvforever

Ahhh ... Wat a story it was... How I wish it wid hv happened in serial too bt well dey didn't bt still u did put in words many people's imagination becoz I definitely believe dat d confession of love is from heart & is meant by d person & should not be used to just show it to people...

D starting u gave of angry & agitated raman I cudnt think it'll move to dis way bt loved it totally... :-D d way raman was spiting fire & ishita was no less & den d accusations of ishita dat he is same as ashok & shagun... Den his confession abt being baffled & confused, even amused & jealoused wid her bt still she has given him all dat he ever wanted bt don't know hw to get it on his own... She gave him his daughter & her love, his family & importantly his peace...

I won't complete widout talking abt d kiss dey shared it wasnt just passion bt d longing & wishful of both becoz dey both were equal participant... Dey did know dat dey affect each oder bt didn't acknowledge it b4 dat moment & dat made it all d more important & epic moment...

After dat d way raman had a fight widin his heart & mind was so raman bt wen he accepted dat he is falling for her & d happiness was amazing...

Bt it wouldn't hv been dis sweet for me if shagun wudnt hv witness d confession of her ex-husband & his love for his present wife... Ah d jealousy its indeed sweet sometym & d fear of being totally outsider Nw for raman as till Nw she was imp though in hate was in raman's mind & life bt Nw she wudnt & she hated it becoz of d self-centered & selfish woman she is... I loved it totally...

Well ur story actually make me flow wid it & I blabber on wats in my mind at it... & I m blame u becoz u write so amazingly dat I feel I m actually standing in d place where its happening every emotion & character is described so beautifully & precisely dat v can easily understand dem... Simply awesome writer u r & I m sooo happy to read ur work... :)

Prati