Jisse main tha bhoolta aaya, Woh wajood mila - An IshRa SS Ch 4 - Pg13

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Soumya

@baubles

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#141

Glad you put up the index Aani...or I would have missed this wonderful SS.. I wasn't in the forum back then!😳 Absolutely loved all the 4 parts...such powerful, intense dialogues from both of them..loved Raman n Ishita! ❤️

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#142

ok so I feel so silly now. I've mentioned in a lot of your os/ss that this is my fav, that is 1 of my fav... now im gonna say that all your writings are my favourite 😃. I can go back and read them a 100 times over and still have the same stupid grin on my face for the fluffy ones or feel the anguish in the serious ones😭

the way you shaped this 1 was a little unexpected for me... in a good way though😊

raman all happy and then furious. what a high voltage conversation that was...😲

then the confrontation was so damn amazing with each giving their pov and then BAM the kiss... (sigh)

that really was sizzling hot and passionate☺️☺️ (blush blush)

nice how you ended with raman's realisation❤️ and shagun burning in jealousy...👍🏼

loved this one😃

superb hun🤗

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#143

Originally posted by: baubles
Glad you put up the index Aani...or I would have missed this wonderful SS.. I wasn't in the forum back then!😳 Absolutely loved all the 4 parts...such powerful, intense dialogues from both of them..loved Raman n Ishita! ❤️

thank you so much on and am so sorry for replying now, I only just saw it 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#144

Originally posted by: Rozy77
ok so I feel so silly now. I've mentioned in a lot of your os/ss that this is my fav, that is 1 of my fav... now im gonna say that all your writings are my favourite 😃. I can go back and read them a 100 times over and still have the same stupid grin on my face for the fluffy ones or feel the anguish in the serious ones😭

the way you shaped this 1 was a little unexpected for me... in a good way though😊

raman all happy and then furious. what a high voltage conversation that was...😲

then the confrontation was so damn amazing with each giving their pov and then BAM the kiss... (sigh)

that really was sizzling hot and passionate☺️☺️ (blush blush)

nice how you ended with raman's realisation❤️ and shagun burning in jealousy...👍🏼

loved this one😃

superb hun🤗

thanks Rozy glad you liked this one so much 🤗 and its really sweet of you to say you like my works so much 😳

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#145

Originally posted by: ruhanikadhawan
Nice...

thanks dear 😊

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Aditi Sharma

@AditiDoc

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#146

This was really nice to read. I loved the way Raman realised his love for Ishita! Superb!

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ABI

@ABBY92

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#147

I just read all 4 parts. I must say I loved how you took the flashback route for this SS. The flow of the story was perfect from Raman being so touched with Ruhi's speech to him being mad that he can't get to his daughter to him pouring all that angst to Ishita who also gave it back to equally and all of this finally culminating to that kiss they share. Though it happened so fast, there was no holes in the story and everything fitted which I really appreciated.

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#148

Originally posted by: AditiDoc
This was really nice to read. I loved the way Raman realised his love for Ishita! Superb!

thanks Aditi 😊

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Aani

@EkPaheli

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#149

Originally posted by: ABBY92
I just read all 4 parts. I must say I loved how you took the flashback route for this SS. The flow of the story was perfect from Raman being so touched with Ruhi's speech to him being mad that he can't get to his daughter to him pouring all that angst to Ishita who also gave it back to equally and all of this finally culminating to that kiss they share. Though it happened so fast, there was no holes in the story and everything fitted which I really appreciated.

Thanks a lot Abby 😊 somehow the story just came as a sort of FB in my head and hence I wrote it the way I did

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prati

@Luvforever

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#150

Ahhh ... Wat a story it was... How I wish it wid hv happened in serial too bt well dey didn't bt still u did put in words many people's imagination becoz I definitely believe dat d confession of love is from heart & is meant by d person & should not be used to just show it to people...

D starting u gave of angry & agitated raman I cudnt think it'll move to dis way bt loved it totally... :-D d way raman was spiting fire & ishita was no less & den d accusations of ishita dat he is same as ashok & shagun... Den his confession abt being baffled & confused, even amused & jealoused wid her bt still she has given him all dat he ever wanted bt don't know hw to get it on his own... She gave him his daughter & her love, his family & importantly his peace...

I won't complete widout talking abt d kiss dey shared it wasnt just passion bt d longing & wishful of both becoz dey both were equal participant... Dey did know dat dey affect each oder bt didn't acknowledge it b4 dat moment & dat made it all d more important & epic moment...

After dat d way raman had a fight widin his heart & mind was so raman bt wen he accepted dat he is falling for her & d happiness was amazing...

Bt it wouldn't hv been dis sweet for me if shagun wudnt hv witness d confession of her ex-husband & his love for his present wife... Ah d jealousy its indeed sweet sometym & d fear of being totally outsider Nw for raman as till Nw she was imp though in hate was in raman's mind & life bt Nw she wudnt & she hated it becoz of d self-centered & selfish woman she is... I loved it totally...

Well ur story actually make me flow wid it & I blabber on wats in my mind at it... & I m blame u becoz u write so amazingly dat I feel I m actually standing in d place where its happening every emotion & character is described so beautifully & precisely dat v can easily understand dem... Simply awesome writer u r & I m sooo happy to read ur work... :)

Prati

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