HUSNAA - AR SS note pg 10

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REDWINE

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: gaurikajen
awesome prologue
and i so loved the song
continue soon

thank u

mee too😃

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REDWINE

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Stunner

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Credit : Aichuu

Chapter 1
In a master bedroom,a man is singing a song lost in the memory of his love who are no more with him and the room is full of the girls's sketches which was made by the man himself.
"wo saari duniya se pare bas apni husna ki yaado main khoya hua"
Lahore ke us pehle jile ke do pargana mein pahunche ,Resham gali ke duje kuche ke chauthe makaan mein pahunche,Aur kehte hain jisko dooja mulk us Pakistan mein pahunche,Likhta hoon khat main hindustan se pehloo-e-husna mein pahunche Main to hoon baitha o Husna meri yaadon puraani mein khoya Pal pal ko ginta, pal pal ko chunta beeti kahaani mein khoya Patte jab jhadte Hindustaan mein yaadein tumhari ye bole Hota ujala Hindustan mein baatein tumhari ye bola O Husna meri ye to bata do hota hai aisa kya us gulistan mein,Rehti ho nanhi kabootar si gum tum jahan Patte kya jhadte hain Pakistan mein waise jaise jhadte yahan o HusnaHota ujala kya waisa hi hai jaise hota Hindustan mein haan o HusnaWo Heero ke Ranjhe ke nagmein mujhko ab tak aa aake satayein Wo Bulleh Shah ke takriron ke jheene jheene saayeWo id ki eidi , lambi namaazein, sevaiyyon ke jhalarWo diwali ke diye sang mein baisakhi ke badalHoli ki wo lakdi jinmein sang sang aanch lagayiLohdi ka wo dhuan jismein dhadkan hai sulgayi O Husna meri ye to bata do lohdi ka dhuan kya ab bhi nikalta hai jaisa nikalta tha us daur mein wahanDhuen mein gulistaan ye barbaad ho raha hai,ek rang syaah ke ijaad ho raha haiHeeron ke Ranjho ke nagmein kya ab bhi sune jaate hain wahan o HusnaAur rota hai raaton mein Pakistan kya waise jaise Hindustan o Husna
ANd the other side in the same house his sister (Geet Khurana) and his friend cum B-I-L (Maan Khurana) are sad to see her brother his friend and their rockstar India's youngest business tycoon 'Armaan Malik' like this .
"tuta hua beekhra hua"
Geet:maan main armaan ko aise nhi dekh sakti.nhi dekh sakti apne bhai ko apni zindagi aise barbaad karte hue.
Maan :main bhi nhi dekh sakta geet armaan ko aise par kya kare geet hum kuch nhi kar sakte armaan ne apne aapko poori tarah se band kar liya hai ab uski zindagi main sirf wo hai aur uski husnaa ki yaadein
GeetGeet :plz maan us ladki ka naam bhi mat lo aaj mere bhai ki jo haalat hai wosirf us ladki ki wajha se hai na hi wo armaan ki zindagi main aati na hi armaan ki haalat aisi hoti
(she said with so much hatred & anger in her eyes & voice)
Maan :par geet usmain uski koi
Geet : plz maan tum uski tarafdaari karna band karo tumne toh use apni behan maana par kya kiya usne chali gyi na sabko chod k apne us mangetar Ali Zafar k saath...nafrat hai mujhe usse us din se uski yaadon se wo aayi aur humari zindagi badal di wo gyi aur humari zindagi firse badal gyi armaan armaan nhi rha ab koi hai toh bas husnaa ka aashiq nafrat hai mujhe un dino se
Maan :plz geet un dino ko yaad mat karo bhul jao wo sab
Geet:bhul jao kaise bhul jao ..itna easy hai wo sab bhulna wo happy moments jo humne us k saath jiye wo bitter memory jab wo hume chod k chali gyi kya kabhi bhi usne humse pyar nhi kiya armaan se wo toh apni jaan se jyada pyaar karta tha karta hai usse meri toh wo best friend thi usi ne hume milaya tha aur tum toh choti behan maante the use ek baar bhi usne humare baare main nhi socha chali gyi un logo k saath
Maan :geet wo uski family hai is baat se hume jitni bhi takleef ho but ye sacha hai wahi uski family hai and hum uske kuch nhi
(tears were flowing from their eyes and next moment geet started crying maan onsoles her and thake her in his embarace after some time geet stopped crying maan look at her and found her sleeping and then he make her lie properly on bed and kiss her forehead )
Maan :(in his heart)tum jitna bhi dikhalo tum usse nafrat karti ho uske saath bitaye har din se nafrat karti ho but main jaanta hun tumhare liye bhi wo days life k best days the.
Precap :past

so howz the update guyz

updates will be short and slow as my whole concentration is on SNS

so DON'T complain about the length please

-kriti

Edited by Devil_kriti - 10 years ago

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megha bansal

@megbans

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

awsume...superb dear...

can't wait for next update...

it'll going to open the past...

plzzz.plzzz. ...update soon 😊

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REDWINE

@Grey-licious

Stunner

+ 17

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: megha_kajen
awsume...superb dear...
can't wait for next update...
it'll going to open the past...
plzzz.plzzz. ...update soon 😊

thanks

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

awsummm part di..!!!

loved it..!!

a whole new concept..!!

i am so eagerly waiting to know what happened..!!

plz try to post soon..!!

take care...!!

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gauri

@gaurijw

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

awesome starting

oh god the song is so emotional i love it

waitng to know what happened in past

post next part soon

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ritika malikk

@Yudkbhislove

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

abhi kuch clear nahi hai kon hai husna? kesi hai? kyo hai ?kya kiya usne ? buri thi ya achi ? galthi thi uski ? yeh sab toh tum h batogi na ... acha chalo update karthi rehna mai comment karthi rahogi