OS : JODHA REALIZATION

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Jodha kept staring at Jalal. Finally she was with her Shahenshah. She smiled at him . But he was just glaring at her. It was apparent that he was furious . " Shahensha ..." she began " Jodha Begam abhi hum kuch sunna nahi chahte. Filhaal aap ko araam ki sakt zaroorat hai . Aap chaliye humare saath. Kal subha hum Agra ke liye niklenge " Jodha understood that it was futile to try to talk to him . She went with him to the place where they had put up their tents . Some common people were gathered near their tents .They saw her with a strange look . She could not understand why they looked at her so strangely . She was too tired now and she just wanted to rest . She had her food and laid down on the bed . She thought about all that had happened in these days . She did not know when she fell asleep .

Next morning they started for Agra . Jalal had a solemn face on the entire journey . Soon they reached Agra . The guards announced their arrival there . After they went into the castle she saw that her parents had come . She was very happy to see them . She went and greeted them . But they too had a serious look on her face . She found it strange . She asked Bharmal " Bapusa Ma aap log yahan ? " " Before Bharmal could answer Jalal came to them and greeted them as well . Then Bharmal asked Jalal " Shahenshah kya hum apni beti ke saath akele mein kuch baat kar sakte hain ? " Jalal said " Zaroor aap jaiyye " Bharmal and Mainavati took Jodha to her room . Both turned to her . Jodha asked " Bapusa aap itni pareshan kyun hai ? Amer mein sab theek to hai na ? " Bharmal told " Theek kaise ho sakta hai ? Tere hote huye sab kuch theek kaise ho sakta hai " Jodha frowned and said " Bapusa main kuch samjhi nahi . Aap spasht karke boliye aap kya bolna chahte hai " Mainavati told " Main kehti hoon Jodha . Maan Singh ne hume sab kuch bataya . Teri ek ek kartoot . Jodha aaj pehli baar sayad hume itni pachtava ho raha hai ki tu humari beti hai . Hume lajja aarahi hai ki tu humari beti hai " Jodha asked in a painful voice " Ma aisa kya kiya hai maine ? Aap hume aise shabd kyun bol rahe ho ? " Mainavati in a steely voice said " Kya kiya hai tumne ? Yani ki tumhe kuch bhi hosh nahi hai ? Tum ne Shahenshah ko unke pure praja ke saamne lajjit kiya . Tumne unhe sab ke saamne neecha dikhaya . Tumne sab ke saamne unka sar sharam se jhooka diya. Tumne ek gunhegaar ko azaad kiya. Tumne Shahenshah ki virudh gayi . Tum ne apni marzi ka kiya . Tumhe jo theek laga tumne wohi kiya. Bina kisiko pooche bina kise se kuch kahe tum ne aisa kaam kiya jo tumhe kabhi bhi karna nahi chahiye tha " Jodha tried to stop Mainavati " Par Maa Khyber to nirdosh tha isiliye..." Mainavati interrupted her " Jodha jab main bol rahi hoon to chup chap suno . Tumhe laga ki woh nirdosh hai . Isiliye tumhari jo marzi hogi wohi tum karoge ? Tumhara kartavya hai apna pati ko samman banaya rakhna . Par tum ne apne hatho se unka samman mitti mein mila diya . Poori praja ke saamne tum ne ubka mazak bana diya . Ab praja Shahenshah par haste hai ki unko apne Jodha Begam ki marzi ki hisaab se chalna padta hai . Log tarah tarah ki baatein kar rahe hain . Unki kabiliyat par shaq kar rahe hai in sab ke liye sirf aur sirf tum ho zimmedaar ho . Us danav ko bachana ke liye tumhe pata hai kitne nirdosh logo ka katil huya ? US danav ne kitne logo ko maara tumhe andaza bhi hai Jodha ? Tum ek danav ko bachane ke liye kitne massom logo ki jaan li hai ? Tumhe kuch pata bhi hai ? Tum ne us danav ke saath ek raat bitayi ek kamre mein . Iske liye log tarah tarah ki baatein bana ahein hai . Tum he zara sa bhi andaaz hai yeh sab sunke Shahenshah ko kaise lag raha hai ? Unko kitna peeda ho raha hai ? Unko kitna thes pahuch raha hai ? Nahi tum yeh sab kyun sochogi . Tum to bus sirf apne liye sab kuch socho . Tumhe kya karna chahiye tumhe kya achcha lagta hai tumhe kis kartavya ko nibhana chahiye . Tum to yeh bhi nahi sochti ki tumhare is kartavya se kisiko nuksaan to nahi ho raha hai . Tum sirf apni man ki karo . Shahenshah tumhare liye kitna kuch kiya hai kitna kuch kar rahe hai tum unhe aise saza de rahe ho ? "

Jodha was just stunned hearing Mainavati . She could not even imagine how she had done all these blunders . She realized that she had committed a series of errors . She also understood that only for her now the awaam is mocking taunting making fun of Jalal now . She could now understand the strange looks of all the people . She hung her head in shame . She wanted to disappear from the earth now . She realized that she was too headstrong and foolish till now . She understood that to save one person she was the cause of the death of so many innocent lives that too in the month of Ramzaan . She understood that she had to mend her ways . She had to correct herself . She had to more more responsible and mature . She decided what she had to do now . Apologise to Jalal.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome ! 👏 I am so glad you decided to write this ... It will take a third person to help Jodha reflect as Jalal's anger makes her miss the point ... maybe her parents ... Salima is also a potential option 😊

Also, I liked how you made Jodha perceptive of how people were looking at her
The small detail of Jalal acknowledging that she needs rest first
And of course, her decision to apologize
Edited by divyavm - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyavm

Awesome ! 👏 I am so glad you decided to write this ... It will take a third person to help Jodha reflect as Jalal's anger makes her miss the point ... maybe her parents ... Salima is also a potential option 😊

i made it her parents as they are the ones whom she cannot defy fully 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

i made it her parents as they are the ones whom she cannot defy fully 😛



Agreed- but she didn't listen to them in the Sujamal fiasco either 😆

I added a few more comments as I re-read and liked a few more details
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyavm



Agreed- but she didn't listen to them in the Sujamal fiasco either 😆

I added a few more comments as I re-read and liked a few more details

thank u for the additional comments😃
i basically wanted it to have only bharmal maina n jodha convo
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

thank u for the additional comments😃
i basically wanted it to have only bharmal maina n jodha convo



I loved it that way ... if its Jalal she just sees his anger 😆

See, I am glad you wrote this
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Rima.. 👏
Are you continuing further?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: divyavm



I loved it that way ... if its Jalal she just sees his anger 😆

See, I am glad you wrote this

yes no words of jalal go to her head
i know😊
i am now ready for the backlash 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hemakeerti

Rima.. 👏

Are you continuing further?

not sure actually
people will bash me 😆
glad u liked it dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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waah rima ... lovely OS ... i guess much needed to show the mirror to stupid jodha ... waise iss track mein kya ho raha hai i dont have much idea .. lekin itna pata hai ki ..jodha has been favouring khybar by over-riding jalal's words ... which she always does ... & I hate her for this to such an extant that I dont even feel to watch the show anymore ...
but this OS was just amazing ...👏 btw kaash mainavati usko 4 thappad bhi lagati 😡
Edited by varshaakulkarni - 11 years ago

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