OS : JODHA REALIZATION - Page 3

Originally posted by: ngayou

Nice OS, Rima. Kaash if this happens. But no Jalal will dare to utter a few words about what s the damage done & then get bashed himself for stating a few hometruths. But I d really like it if Jo really goes into some introspection & see where she might be wrong being the begum of a Shahenshah that she loves to say 😛 . High hopes, I know 😕 . But it was nice to read atleast what some of us want to see 😊

Originally posted by: Rashmi81

well written Os 👏👏👏

Originally posted by: smile.sara

Rima it's awesome 👏...and don't worry no body can say any thing on fanfiction and this is not even harsh... My heart was really dancing thinking what if any one really dare to tell her all these in show 😆

Originally posted by: sweetystubborn

They wouldn't dare to because Sweety is one among readers of this OS of yours so they better not to ! You're just writing , nor blaming , insulting and outraging over this already butchered naatkiye rupantar's character , still you are trying to make her a more mature and humble character , in short you're trying to redeem in your own way this redeemless character (atleast from my own vision) ! Reading other OS , I have seen worse girl , you can't imagine what they're making Jalal subit in their stories for so called 'PAIN' that Jalal gave to Jodhaa , I sincerely think that comparing to these , JA show is still standable , OUF 😆 ! Jodhaa telling him not to approach her with a dagger in hand , blaming him of MC of twins , treating Mughals as traitors and shameless still their 'version' Jalal is blabbering : "HUMEIN MAAF KIJIYE JODHAA BEGUM , HUM AAPSE BEINTEHAAN MOHOBBAT KARTE HAIN ?" When I was reading that passage , I cursed for the first time my profuse curiosity 🥱 I didn't even know if I should laugh at the hilarious yet courageous gut of the writer or to scream in anger at this outrageous crap , then I was like Tenzin , my girl , inhale , exhale , this is just a pure fiction , hmmm fiction fuuu , none force you to read it hmmm fuuu their my meditation session continued . . . 😆😆 Briefly , you should continue ! Wait , wait . . . What am I saying , you must continue 😈 ! And this speech of Mainavati was IRREAPPROACHABLE without any queries 👏👏👏 I just hated only that interruption of woh nirdosh bla bla of Jodhaa otherwise till the end , it was PERFECT ⭐️⭐️⭐️ I love this mainavati , and you need this my concocting love mate 🤗 of changing the mhaari Jodhaa version Maina into this one 👏👏 I am eagerly waiting for the apologizing scene love 🤗 Update soon 😳

P.S : Rima , see my long comment here 😆 I want you to comment with same length on my stories next time rather then 3 repetitive sweet words , got it 😎 ? Your comments are too sweet , though I love sweetness there is a quote which says too much of sweetness wreck sweetness 😈 So , a pinch of sourness is welcome 😆😳😃

Originally posted by: Dhiya2

Rima good one. Bhadaas nikalne ka achha tarika.

Jalal said all this to her, but the very next day she ran to save Khyber. I am annoyed with this Jodha so much that I cannot enjoy Akdha scenes anymore. I really wish that all wives /girlfriends are not like her. Please continue your OS. I like how Jalal did not bash her this time,it was her parents.

BTW,

Strong female lead = Kashaf (ZGH).

She has flaws but her values and character is so strong, that it makes a man who falls for her even more stronger. I was blown away with that characterization...and that is called women power. Strong mind and heart. but yet she bends down for her hubby sometimes because of love.

Missing ZGH😭

Originally posted by: mandyg

excellent rima! it too hope that the jodha of the serial too mends her ways, though it seems to be highly unlikely!

Originally posted by: sonamrai

awesome story 👏
ys she listen everybody but she did whats her mind told. i dont think she has realised. coz in precap still she is argueing for khy. i think she also loves khy more than jalal. muh me kuch aur dil me kuch aur.

Originally posted by: najma123

really happy you wrote this. though i doubt jodha will ever understand, still it is good. awesome os. they will show jalal begging for forgiveness like every other time. but this should be shown. but jalal deserves it for overtly pampering his wife.

Originally posted by: abhi786

Rima good post. But sorry I don't like her parents in this track, did they understand Jo went they went ahead to marry her off to the person she hates the most ? Did mainavathi understand Jo cuts when they came marriage ? Did they understood her pain when she accuse of ruku pregnancy,nor they came to see after the poison.

I would always prefer HB and Salima as stood by her in ruku prg, fak e preg, tough times in agra ...They are her family and wel wishers and she is mugal bahu and don't,t forget BM used jalaal in shivani marriage, now they are getting respect and love because of her daughter. I would love

HB ans salima her family who can make her understand how much wrong she is...