A SanDhir OS: 'You Look Like Something That's Mine' - Page 4

Originally posted by: randhirsanyu014

omg...this is breathtaking, awesome...this is ur first attempt?...ok then u r an amazing writer dear...i can't explain how heart touching this os is... pls write more

Originally posted by: coolishparul

beautifully written

Originally posted by: crazy_sweeto

nice one👍🏼

Originally posted by: aleena.1884

gosh this was pure beauty... just.. amazing..
write more yaar. u're good.

Originally posted by: PhoenixRadar

Hi Sweets!

Hello Annie.

You captured my heart the minute I started reading the story. Beautifully written.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

And to be honest, their love is not 'unspoken'. Because the minute they said the last few words to each other was their way of saying "I LOVE YOU".

You don't always need to say those 3 words when you're in Love. These two don't need it, when they can express it well through their actions.

Exactly that I meant. You din't need to say those words as action speaks louder. That's why it is "unspoken" but assured one.

Thanks for sharing this beautiful and elegant OS. And thanks to Gujjupari for forcing you to publish this here!😃😃😃

Pleasure is all mine having such beautiful reviews. Pari should definitely be thanked.

Annie

🤗 from Swagata

Originally posted by: Dewdrops.ShaKun

Bful work...

Originally posted by: gujjupari

"When two people are meant for each other, no time is too long, no distance is too far and nobody can keep them apart" (unknown)

This OS is just entrancing! The way with you pen down situations is amazing! BUT, its the way you related these situations to the character feelings is mind blowing! Those sentences like:

Some stories only have a beginning. No matter how much you beg for an end these stories never die. Were never meant to be written In the first place...the way they begun...has no end. Those are the stories of eternal love.

This reminded me of the quote: "Maybe two people are destined to fall in love but not to be together in the end" (unknown) and I was like, "Is Swagata writing a sad OS!?😲😲 Don't get me wrong, I love sadistic writings (Idk, they hold a special place in my heart😆) but you never seemed like the type who would want to make people depressed via reading... So I ruled out that scenario!

Aha touche! I love writings with a sadistic note in it but never sad stories..that makes a already hard life more sadistic. I believe reading is an escapade from daily traumas so it must have a tinge of happiness in it.

Their souls are bonded in an unspoken unity and harmony. A spark of love was there but they ignored it unconsciously and undeliberately.

Nothing says love like a spark that is lit but ignored! Alas, such flames never lose power until fully extinguished! Your writing is amazing Swagata! These profound statements just made this OS top notch! Lemme go find one more😆

😳😳 Thank you.

The person you took for granted and left waiting in the shadows, to fall back on, might quietly walk off someday. Fall on your back then. We all have our private paradise. It's called solitude and often lonely. Be sure before you long for this.

I need not say any more😳

When you descibing their current emotions it reminded me of another quote (idk being weirdly profound today😆), "Sometimes two people have to fall apart to realize how much they need to fall back together." (unknown)... The entire writing from "She was unattainable" to "wishing him around herself" was just a masterstroke! I don't want else to say😳

I actually know why you felt relating to some unknown quotes...thanks to my voracious reading habit. That is the only thing prevents me from writing...probability of unconsciously lifting other's thought. You must already know what happened to Hellen Keller's first writing..she was charged with plagiarism. Same here though I am not daring to compare me with her but the scenario is same. Whenever I want to write something or read it reminds me of something. So my story must have reflected some borrowed wisdom.

That ending though <3

I need not say anything more! I have already typed out an essay! It was just magical and very realistic! Nothing drmaatic or over the top! Just a simple ending where both realise the need, the want to have each other in their lives again. To make an incomplete complete! Beautiful it was!

Yes I wanted it that way. Remember "Simplicity me ek advut shakti hai"...my personality gulped that thought and made it hers. I am glad you liked that. And thank you for essaying your thought.

Swagata meri jaan! You didn't need any persuading to write! You are a natural and plus it's in your blood! You just need to write more! That's it! I am not taking no for an answer! I just typed out an essay for a comment, you cannot ignore this now😈

And even the "jaanta" agrees with me😎

Don't kill me with expectation...I always have an issue with that. If I am able to write again it will definitely because of you and Jaanta. Definitely I can't ignore this and have to think hard again. See I told you I am a girl with expectation issue.

I love the way you write girl! Especially those profound statements! They are like the cherry on top! I think I need to stop writing now😆

Love always,

Pari 😳

Thank you Pariii for such a long and nice comment. You made my day.

Originally posted by: gujjupari

Unres'ed @ page 4

Btw, I feel SOO special for the dedication!

THANK YOU SOOO MUCH🤗🤗