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@WarriorGirl-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Halo Folks!!!! Kaise hoo

Hmm mere mind mein ek story aa rahi hai so thought of sharing in this dead place😛

yeh meri pehli try hai...lets see it turns out to be good or bad😆...so anywayss

PROLOGUE

Aaliya goes to the hospital...doc takes blood test and tells her reports will come day after

tomorrow...

Meanwhile in Barkat Villa...Surraiya realizez her mistake with Aaliya,calls her home and

apologizes to her like anything...Aaliya gets emotional accepts her sorry and Suri tells aaliya to live here again but Zain still dosent forgive Aaliya and tells her to live in seperate room...

Suri sees this and vows to get them together😛...but not forcibly...She calls whole family except ZaYa and tells we will go on a family picnic together but tell ZaYa to come seperately and after the whole family leaves Zaya will come in their own car...everyone agrees

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I know bilkul bakwaas tha naa...par mein kya karoo i was getting quite bored

Do you want me to continue anyways...if yes and u want pm..then buddy me

Plss comment and rotten tomatoes and chhapals are welcome

Picnic ka disaster shayad next part mein hoyega

Mission 670+ Forum ko jagaoo

Lots of love

-Alina

Edited by Beintehaa_ZaYa - 11 years ago

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ramita94

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Posted: 11 years ago

It's a nice FF. Aise kabhi nahin hoga that Suraiyya will be positive. This FF reminds me off the Picnic sequence but no one can replace mamu jaan and his matchmaking.

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@craziness05

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Posted: 11 years ago

Your prologue sound interesting but are u sure tum ek FF likh ho...bura mat manana par tumhara prologue dekhkar nhi lagta it is going to be FF...I am sorry again plzz bura mat manana...!!

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Originally posted by: craziness05
Your prologue sound interesting but are u sure tum ek FF likh ho...bura mat manana par tumhara prologue dekhkar nhi lagta it is going to be FF...I am sorry again plzz bura mat manana...!!

Lol...mujhe khud hi koi idea hi nahi kii main ek ff,ss ya ek os likh rahi hoon😆...mujhe bas ek story aaya bas FF mere mind mein aagaya toh FF bana diya😭...mujhe koi bura wura nahi laga so chill

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ramita94
It's a nice FF. Aise kabhi nahin hoga that Suraiyya will be positive. This FF reminds me off the Picnic sequence but no one can replace mamu jaan and his matchmaking.

Yeh bahut diff hoga...aage aage dekho..

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Aastha

@craziness05

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa

Lol...mujhe khud hi koi idea hi nahi kii main ek ff,ss ya ek os likh rahi hoon😆...mujhe bas ek story aaya bas FF mere mind mein aagaya toh FF bana diya😭...mujhe koi bura wura nahi laga so chill

Thank god *sighs relief* FF fan fiction mein 20 chaps se zyada hote hain ss, os is one shot, ts is two or three shots and ss is a short story...I hope this information helps😳 and itni choti baat mein nhi rote😆

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zayalove

@zayalove

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Posted: 11 years ago

Dear it sounds interesting plzzz continue

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: craziness05

Thank god *sighs relief* FF fan fiction mein 20 chaps se zyada hote hain ss, os is one shot, ts is two or three shots and ss is a short story...I hope this information helps😳 and itni choti baat mein nhi rote😆

Thxxx a lot aastha...mein abhi FF se SS banati hoon😉