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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#61

Originally posted by: PreciousPri
Uz !! Wow back with a BANG
Loved reading this pool side OS

Very sensuous and aesthetically written... I really admire your writing style 👏👏

Pri 🤗 so happy to see you back 😳 and that too commenting here. You and Sia seem to be liking the Bangs ahem. Really glad you enjoyed it

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: Anita.patel
Wonderful... It's amazingly nice ..I felt like I'm actually watching them...
Very well written...

Thank you so much!

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happenstance

@happenstance

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: EkPaheli
Uz, Uz , Uz Lord what in the name of heaven is this gal?
I really had to drink a glass of cold water after this - it was that HOT, sensuous, seductive and just oozed oomph and yep completely Erotic.

Ahem - If I may be so bold... this seemed like a prelude... the foreplay to some serious action ☺️☢️🤣

Good lord girl I am so glad I read this in the privacy of my room, all ALONE - it would have been impossible to hide my flustered cheeks, that smile and that faraway dreamy look I had post reading this for a while 😆

A couple of things you mentioned - I will pm ya about those, I swear if I write them here on the forum openly I would so damage my barely there rep now, not to mention possibly corrupt some naive innocent soul 🤣🤣 cos the words... damn Uz you are a wiz with subtle innuendos, I so know whom to approach for a proofread should I find it in me to tackle these - delicate issues - someday. I know I cant find a better editor if I tried 😛

And I so love the way you ended this - with him finding peace and solace in the mere fact she placed her hand over his heart

Aani next time I will give disclaimers based on the need for water all the way up to ice😆😆 and you can guess yourself what to do with the ice 😆

omg no you are not being bold at all, yes there was a lot of ahem foreplay😳😆 (now you have me blushing🤣 )

Yes yes Aani the pm discussion is not for the faint hearted 🤣 need to keep a leash on it 🤣

Omg yes please write something as discussed, and yes i volunteer my mere self to proof read not that you will need it- your pretty awesome with the subtleness yourself hun (read-ecstasy☺️)

Thank you for truly enlightening everyone this past week🤣🤗

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LoseYouToLoveMe

@LoseYouToLoveMe

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#64

Good OS UZ Dear!Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me!

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Maysha

@A.ShehzadAholic

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#65

Luvly work.i can't express my feelings in words

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Ishraholic_Sim

@Ishraholic_Sim

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

#66

Another wonderful OS. The way you describe emotions and the surroundings, the pool, stars gazing, water splashes etc. is amazing. You describe is so well that i didn't feel i was reading an OS, it felt like i am watching the story live and can hear the sounds you have mentioned.
I have only read two of your OS and i have enjoyed reading every single word of them.