Aashiqui ||Kriyaansh SS|| Update Page 50 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
#61
Ahhh Rey & Awww KRIYA she liked him He Didn't considered her good friend too but Reyaansh Bacchu u will get to know KRIYA kkya Cheez hai :p Lollzzz I loved the updated Do update soon I waiting its interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#62
Interesting start.
Would love to read further.
Update soon and pm me.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#63
3 more to go..
ishu update ready rakh
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Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Interesting update...
Like Taani and Kriya's bond...
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
ausome...I loved the story...

Taani n Rey BFFs...

Rey is annoyed by Kriya...

Kriya likes Reys secretely...

Do continue...

Kriya alll girly girly...

Its actually gonna b interesting...

Sorry for the late review...dint had an internet connection... :'(

Do write soon...

Love Aditi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#66
Take the last chapter as the Second Prologue and This one as the First Chapter. Again DON'T complain about the length please. :P


Departure


Finally it was the day , rey was leaving for delhi.
Taani and kria's family stood in front of rey's house , as his parents came out.
They exchanged hugs , the ladies weeped , the men promising to stay in touch.
Rey came to taani , she hugged him , and let out a sob.
"Gosh! Taani , i really think i am taking my BFF with me , you and crying!"
"Shut up! Idiot!"
She pulled back showing her tongue. Rey smiled.
"Waise got something for you."
Rey said , he took out a box , it was full of shells.
"Rey! Yeh toh humne goa mein collect kiye the!"
"Yeah , maine thode saal rakh liye , now it's yours."
Taani laughed and took it. She took out , some latest game cds for rey.
"This is for you!"
Rey smiled.
"Taani! This is amazing , i so wanted these!"

Kria looked at the two best friends , she took out the key chain she had bought for Rey. It was a key chain having the letter RS , which was made specially for him.
She found it too girly and not wanting to give it to him and make a fool of herself , she went and gave it to Anjali , rey's mom.

"Aunty!"
"Yes sweetie?"
"Yeh key chain , rey ke liye!"
"Tum kyun nahi de rahi?"
"G gi girly ha hain na!"

She spoke stammering cutely. The ladies laugh. Taani and rey look there to see what made these crying ladies laugh. They saw Kria , Anjali held her hand and took her to them.

"Rey , yeh kria ne tumhare liye laya."
Rey rolled his eyes , in return receiving a glare from both taani and his mom. He faked a smile and asked what. Kria slowly took out the key chain.
"It's good. Thanks!"
Kria smiled , knowing he said that for formality.
"Bye Rey!"
"Bye Kria!"

Kria went to her mom , sadly. Anjali glared at him and went. He felt a bad hit on his shoulder.

"Dhang se thank you nahi bolna aata! Gadhe!"
"Kya yaar taani! Chod na , accha tu airport tak aa rahi hain?"
"Haan!"
"Voh kria toh nahi aa rahi na?"
"Nahi! And agar tujhe delhi jaate jaate apni aakh kaali nahi karani , toh chup! Waise bhi accha hain. Tu delhi jaa raha hain! Kria ko tere bina peace to milega aur dekh lena jab tu wapas aayega na kria tujhse nafrat kargi nafrat aur tu bacchu! Bahot pachtayega . Kahega kaash maine pehle usse friendship kar li hoti , aaj aise line mein nahi lagna padta use baat karne ke liye."
"Line? Voh koi actress ban jaayegi kya? And does it look like I care voh mujhe hate kare! Ulta i will be happy , shaanti milegi!"
He laughed.
"Actress to nahi , popular toh zarur! Jab sahi mein voh tujhe cut off kar degi na tab you'll realize you missed to be friend a great girl!"
"Haan irritate karne mein popular! Sab bhaagenge usse. And bas karna yaar , jo hoga dekha jaayega lekin abhi toh mein jaa raha hun na! Apne bff ko dhang se bye bol de!"
"Whatever!"

Rey groaned and the two then walked to their parents. Rey saw kria speaking to his dad. She was showing him the new dance step she was taught. One thing he would admit , she was one heck of an amazing dancer!

Kria then bid bye to his parents , she looked at rey . Rey looked at her , honestly he was going to miss this crazy girl a bit , just a bit. He smiled genuinely and said bye , kria didn't reply and marched to her parents , and he could bet he heard taani giggle and give a winning smile. She came from behind.

"It's just the starting Rey!"
Rey rolled his eyes.
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Finally after bidding bye to all , he was sitting in the plane , ready for starting a fresh chapter in Delhi!

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Hope you liked it. :)
Edited by kriyaanshfreva - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#67
res...thank god
unres...
ishu is true to her words...
nxt update ke liye no demands?.? 😆
taani nd rey bond is lovely i must say...their gifts to each other...
chalo..childhood memories taani ke sath nd adulthood kriya ke sath...sahi hai boss...
kriya was actually stammering while passing gift...omg ..the guy then really is a pain in ass...
nd isne to abi popat kr diya rey ka...abi se attitude...i so love it...
eagerly waiting for him to come back...wese are u gonna show sm part of his lyf delhi too or not???
Edited by akankshaArsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#68
lovely chapter
rey is going to be ignored and he is going to find it odd
kria is going to move on
can't wait to see what happens to rey then and how jealous he will come
update soon
lovey the storyline so far
it reminded me of the film muhji se dosti korigi ... (will you be my friend) ... can't write in hindi to save my live
update soon
can't wait
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: don girls

lovely chapter

rey is going to be ignored and he is going to find it odd
kria is going to move on
can't wait to see what happens to rey then and how jealous he will come
update soon
lovey the storyline so far
it reminded me of the film muhji se dosti korigi ... (will you be my friend) ... can't write in hindi to save my live
update soon
can't wait


Hrithik Roshan wali na? :P Na. Uss mein bff fall in love tha shayad. Or i am wrong.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Nice update👍🏼
loved it❤️
u write very well👏
update soon😊

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