Th#6 AsYa FF Across The Shadows - Chapter 18 to 20

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--Bubble007--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#731

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treasure11

@treasure11

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Posted: 11 years ago

#732

unres

Ich liebe dich❤️

How I wish Humeira and Zoya to be as before 😒

Do things that all sibblings do ,run around the house ,tease each other with their boyfriends ...

But their life styles are soo different ...Zoya is soo different for her now *sighs*

It pained when she thought Humeira was a perfect girl any guy would love to marry 😭

Only if she knew she was more thn perfect for anyone

And what a romantic chapter ☺️

She blew air on his hairrr...I love whn he does it but zoya doing it was soo cuteee😳

Can u get him to do it once 😳

And the kiss was soo passionateee☺️specially bczz it was in the jungle

Were you inspired from Twilight ?😳

Everything was perfect besides his DIRTY mouth 😲Tell me what else did he say ☺️

First a jealous Asad and now a Jealous Zoya 😳

But the waitress got a lot of screen space 🤔

And finaly she confessed 🤗

Both are soo passionately in Love ❤️...I dunno what strom is gng to come in their lives

Thank You !!!!

Love ya ❤️

Edited by treasure11 - 11 years ago

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-AppleOfMaEye-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#733

res

so here comes frst unres of weekend,..😆

Well frstly that sisters bonding,..
Humi just knows th old Zohurra,..who got scared on any small happenings,..
this Zoe is new fah her,.. who may live ina huge house,..ALONE,.. wdout getting scared,..
cox she has gone through much harsh things in her life,..
now she is rigid and harsh,..
felt sorry fah that ona side,.. while on other side am proud she did manage to come out,..
Bravo,..👏

aww,..sucha cute n fnny zoe,..😆
blewing a puff full of air on his face when he is about to kiss,..🤪
and why does she endup in forest each time?? 😲
and when i read that Everything was perfect besides his very dirty mouth,,, then i was all ☺️ fah time being,.. and then realized that you were just mentioning his old habit of using German fah praising her,..😆😆

One thing,..thas so clear till now,.. that her insecurities from past are not letting her to trust on AAK and tell em everything,..
i wonder if he has came across any such news during flipping vdeos and old ivs of her,..

and that waitress part,..🤣
she is all jealous,..and that reminded me of the Edward-Bella scene when they were having a meal @ LaPush,..
i dooon know why these all Men are extravagently gorgeous,.. dying on their lady loves,..and these women getting insecure of th other women,..😆

and here comes th frst confession,..from Zoe's side,.. and that too hybridized,..😆
"Ich liebe dich --- too."

i just loved it,.. Amazing,.. ❤️

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Edited by -Maliha- - 11 years ago

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961111

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Posted: 11 years ago

#734

Res

unres!! (Ch 20)

Awesome work Bubba!!!

Truly amazing!!!👏

the conversation of Zoya and Humeira was so so nice!!

her concern for her lil sis was clearly visible...😳

and for Saiqa... it's true that History repeats itself... and no matter what, you have to pay for your wrong deeds someday!! she is exactly doing that!!

and the forest scene!! ☺️

i love the way Asad claims her lips, and she turns red...☺️

i loved the way she blew air on his face evey time he was about to kiss her ☺️

and then the jealousy element!! ☺️

that was awesome!! 😳☺️

my cheeks a re hurting now after blushing so much! ☺️😳

last but not the least, confession from Zoya's side was wonderful too! ☺️😳

Fantastic work Bubba.. carry on with your amazing work!! 😳👏

and this story is going to be another best work of yours!! 😳

for sure!! 😳

love you!! keep rocking!! ❤️🤗

Edited by BeYourself - 11 years ago

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#735

Bubble i hate you why u r such an awesome writer yr...u always hooked me with
Ur stories...

Awesome fabulous beautifully written 👏 👏 👏

Miss ur ff always when i can't come on IF ..u & juliet dii na

Dono ko kidnal.krna chahiye for writing such awesome stories

Loved it

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kalyani

@kals82

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#736

res

unres..

that was wonderful update and also at a nice steady pace..

love the progress in zohu and also in asya...

zoya in forest... kind of confused... with her life.. totally logical...

selfish... who wont be at that stage...

she is scared. what her past push him out... and look down at her... very valid... from her POV...

i think asad should know that she is not a virgin.. what matters is her heart...

waiting for more...

loved zoya jealousy and confession at the end...

update soon

Edited by kals82 - 11 years ago

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Amulya

@Amulya9

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#737

awesome update bubble
zohu met again..HumeIRA is such a nice gal..
OK HuHa also happened..good going
Zoya is thinking of asad 24/7.. thats a gud sign.. 😉
aww pls don't say he had bad mouth...I love d way he flirts with her, n say ILU in German..he's only relief in this story
Zoya u have 2 marry asad bass..
dark forest me ASYA kiss 😳 ...
OMG he booked whole restaurant.. 😛 banda is not only rich bt he so gud at heart
do such men exist in real life 😕 nahi I think
I love jelly zoe 😆
finally she said it..yayyy..
continue soon..
bubble 🤗 fr itni jaldi update k liye

Edited by Amulya9 - 11 years ago