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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: viji2111
You write so well.

A mother's love for her child is like nothing else in the world. It knows no law, no pity. It dares all things and crushes down remorselessly all that stands in its path.

thank you!!

yes indeed.. a mother's love is something very special!! @bold: u said it perfectly!!

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Gayatri

@FeistyQueen

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: riti4u
Beautiful piece of writing dear.You brought tears in my eyes.Would love to read further.
Right now thru mobile...will update this comment with my likes...

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Loved how you brought his fear regarding shooting star.. 😊..a beautiful piece of writing..so deep that I could see him looking up and having this inside him...

Loved how that big mighty warrior was finding solace in his mother's lap..I wished to read further on his fears... and his asking her to ask something from him...

I am glad that my lines got you inspired..coz this is surely very beautifully written my dear...Come on update soon..😛😳

Thank you so much riti...!! 🤗

weneva i want to write about karna I wnt it to be the best!! so it is taking time for me to bring out the next part!

am so happy that u could visualize the scene of he looking at shooting star!!

ua works are really inspiring... ⭐️

and ua comment is really encouraging... thank you so muchh!!! ❤️

PS: I wish you could continue writing more..on Karna