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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

Mohobat

this story revolves around gauri. a muslim girl ~(sorry for those who are offended by it. but i cant change the name. it is necessary for her to be a muslim in order for my story to succeed.) it is a love story which is complete without being complete. (if that make sense. didn't to me.) her love is shiv. (muslim tooo. what can i do it was the story which inspired me was on a muslim girl and boy so i am taking that.)

No one know what exactly love is. its is a feeling which cannot be put into words. To define love, one has to also include the risks and the dark sides. As much as love can incite great poetry, build bonds between two opposing people, and turn a sour old man into a laughing teenager again. It also has it's dangerous after effects. Be it the feeling of desperation when it ends, anywhere from a week to months of sitting on the couch dead in the heart. To possibly getting taken advantage of for being blinded by love. There are always risks involved, that's the whole point of the game.
Is love really worth it. why does one loves another so much that he/she is ready to give his/her life for the loved ones.
Gauri lived only to love and be loved. shiv loved her to no extent. she loved him back with just as much as passion. But will their love story be complete or will it be incomplete.

Every character is from the soap, but will be presented in different way.

If anyone does not like it plz tell me now. sorry if i hurt anyone's feeling. Plz tell me if i should write the story or just leave it.

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Posted: 18 years ago

~~~~~~ PROMO ~~~~~~

I went out for dinner with my bhaiya and bhabhi. they came especially to see me. I've been pikced up from hostel. how could i eat when i saw shashank sitting only two table away chatting with his mates. i was in shock. i never saw him around the college. i have never seen him for three months. which helped me not to think about him. But the last frightening moments and conversation we had scared the hell out of me. The only thing i could do when i remember those words was to assure my self that only Allah will get find a way out of this problem.
i had been staring at the table in which he was sitting with his mates for too long. Bhaiya and bhabhi had followed my gaze. they knew what had got my attention. why i became so pale as if i had seen a ghost. i could not do anything to control my feeling. Then he stood uo paid the bill and left with his mates. i took control on myself but i was scared. Something inside me kept telling me something is going to be wrong. my sister was more worried than i was. Everyone was thinking what can be done about the matter. A million dollar question in everyone's mind. And i was left with only fear in my heart. he had come back into her life. To take what was not his.

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 1

I went out for dinner with my bhaiya and bhabhi. they came especially to see me. I've been pikced up from hostel. how could I eat when I saw shashank sitting only two table away chatting with his mates. I was in shock. I never saw him around the college. I have never seen him for three months. which helped me not to think about him. But the last frightening moments and conversation we had scared the hell out of me. The only thing i could do when I remember those words was to assure my self that only Allah will get find a way out of this problem.

I had been staring at the table in which he was sitting with his mates for too long. Bhaiya and bhabhi had followed my gaze. They knew what had got my attention. why I became so pale as if I had seen a ghost. I could not do anything to control my feeling. Then he stood Up, paid the bill and left with his mates. I took control on myself but I was scared. Something inside me kept telling me something is going to be wrong. My sister was more worried than I was. Everyone was thinking what can be done about the matter. A million dollar question in everyone's mind. And I was left with only fear in my heart. he had come back into her life. To take what was not his.

Her bhai looked at her with concern in his eyes he did not know what could be done now. "gauri why don't you go to khala ji's house (moms sister). Suggested bhabhi. "humare saath chalo" suggested bhaiya. She looked at both of them. She knew they were worried. She had to nake them relax she had to tell them that she will be ok. She straightened herself. Then with control said "mujhe hostel drop kar dein." stating she is not scared. "fikar mand na hon, hostel ki char deewari me wo mujhe koi nuksan nahi pohencha sakta.". They gave up, she was too stubborn. They were helpless they could not do anything so they dropped her at the hostel. Her bhabhi kept on reading ayats and surats and kept blowing on her. "mama app popho pe jado kar rahi hain" said shanti bhai's three year old daughter. She was so innocent it made me laugh. Bhai too laughed but bhabhi stayed quiet she was too worried for me.

Last two night had been horrible for me. There were no other girl in the hostel except for me. It was night. I tried to sleep but the fear got to me. It kept me awake. Maybe It was just my imagination I kept hearing the sounds of the knock on the door and the window banging into each other. I thanked Allah when I saw the sun was out it was bright outside. For the two days I have been scared as if someone is going to kill me. As if I a kill threat. The hostel warden knocked on the door. I opened the door. "mr shashank aap se milna chahte hain. Inhe app se zarrori kaam hai. Unho ne kaha hai ke unho ne principle se ijazat li hai." after saying this she left. I was shaking as If a leaf would with the wind. I could not understand what to do. Everything was messed up. Why did he came here. The fear got to me again. I said no to meet him he would stop me any where in the way on my way to airport. What could I do meet him or not. Meeting him here was less risky than meeting him outside. I gathered my courage and sorted my hair. Then I put on the my dupatta really tight around my head it was covering my body up to knee. There was no one in the hostel today and I was scared. The visitor door was completely open there was no sign of the warden. I entered the room and went to the centre of the room where shashank was standing. Making sure I stay back enough for him not to touch me. My head was bowedd do I could not see him. I hated his face. I hated him. I heard him moving. I looked around to see that he had locked the door. He gave a very poisonous smile.

I took hold of the sofa that was next to me when I backed away as he was coming towards my. Even though I had support it did not mater my mind and body left my side. " miss gauri." he gritted out the words. "you do know I can do whatever I want with you now. Warden won't come in as I told her that we love each other. You scream and no one will be able to help you. And even if someone hears it only you will me defamed not me. Everyone will call you bad. They will question your character not mine." I felt a slap on my face. I knew he was right. I was trembling with fear. This could not happen to me. "please shashank leave me let me go. Please" my trembling voice made him happy I was begging that is what made him more happy. He gave away a victorious smile. "tum andaza nahi laga sakti ke paise me kitni takat hai. Me chahon to tumhe kahin pe bhi le ke jane ki zarorat nahi hai. I can stay in this room with you for a month because of the holidays and no one say any thing. I can do what ever I want with you. Or tumhare maa baap ke farishton to bhi pata nahi chale ga. You know that don't you."

I was crying. I was apologizing. I was begging in front of a stone to let me go. My ego, my self respect everything disappeared. At that time I was only a girl. A girl who's pride was at stake. Standing in front of a man who could do anything as he pleases. I was begging.

To find out more keep reading and commenting either I should cont or not. Hope I did not bore you.

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He came forward and held me by my shoulders, taking my face near his own. His heated breath made my face burned. (how different I felt. The same moment came between me and shiv. That day I rejected and my heart wanted it. Today my heart did not want it but I could not do anything. I felt bad and insulted.) My request had not been accepted. I became dumb.

"Gauri….. Gauri……" He touched her ears with his lips. the small reaction echoed in her ear. she felt insulted. he brought the lips near her neck. she felt her life drifting out of her body. No one had the right to touch her. She was helpless, scared. "tumhe khuda ka wasta hai mujhe maaf kar do, mujhe chor do." I had no other way out of it then to plead. "me to tumhe kharab nahi karna chahta, poray jaiz tare key se tumhari khuwahish ki hai. Lakin abb agar tum ne meri neeyat pe shak kiya to tumhare barey barey poster India ke har sheher ki deewaron per laga don ga. Aur yeh khubsurat tasaveer nahi balke achi kisam ki tasaveer….. Jin ke liye mujhe iss tarhan ka mooka phir hasil kar ke thori rakam or kharch karni pare gi." After finished talking he pushed me to the floor. He opened the door and left.

I sat there for ages and cried. And thanked Allah that he kept me safe. No harm came to me. I combed my hair with my hands. I went to the wash room and washed my face. Then I started walking fast and came back to my room. I locked the door after entering. I packed my things without lloking. I was in a hurry I needed to get out of here. I came to the airport one two hours before the flight. Even at the airport I was scared. I did not feel safe.

I became ill after reaching kolkutta. Two or three days passed with my in a bad condition. I did not know what was happening around me. It was like I was unconscious all the time. All the family members thought it was because of heat and tiredness. But only I knew it was not that. When I got better I thought I will tell my mother about it at the first chance I get. After all it was a big thing abu ji should know about it. My mother called few of her friends over because I got healthy again. Everybody was praising me I felt embarrassed . I got up form there and came to my room. I stood there in front of the mirror. And started observing myself. I just got better from illness. My colour was a bit pale. But there was a certain attraction that made the other person look twice at me. With my right hand I touched every feature on my face, my nose, my cheek, my eyes, my chin and my forehead. i was enjoying myself. This was the first time in my entire life have i saw myself like this in the mirror. Then i saw shiv standing beside me, bending his head. The distance were about to be finished. but then shashank came there. i saw the bitter reality. All the moments spent with him in hostel came back to haunt me. I was so ashamed thinking about all this. I covered both my hands and was about to scream. When my cousin entered the room. Both the figures disappeared. "api chalien na bahir kitna acha mosam hai." I came out of my hallucination. But I was still shaking. My cousin who saw my condition made me lie down on the bed and one of them went outside to call my mom.

Today I felt better again. Kaya made me sit but made sure I was comfortable. She made me drink soup. Every one in the house was worried. Mama kept reading ayaaats and baba gave sadka's. when ever mama's friends visited they told my mother. "app ki beti ko nazar lag gayi hai" they did not know what happened to me. I knew It was nothing to do with black eye. It was a alive beast that had gotten me here. My brother and sister were worried for me. I was supposed to make them happy while I was here but instead I made them sad. I will have to do my level best to make them happy again

For that I would have to try to forget everything that had happened. So other people don't get effect. In the evening I sat with them in the lawn and I drank tea with them. While the kids were playing. Some on cycles some running around. I was smiling watching them play. While mama and baba were so happy seeing me smile. They happiness could be seen clearly on their faces.

I could not tell mum abut it. Seeing them happy made me change my mind. If I tell mama about those circumstances would she be able to stay happy? Could I see the happiness on her face?. I knew the answer it was clear. Only I had to bear it. I would be alone. I can't tell anyone. If I tell bhaiya about it. He will get angry and god knows what he will do. Now that I think about it if I tell anyone would they believe it. Would they believe that shashank had gone that far just to threaten me. If I tell mama would she believe me. Would she believe that shashank had only threaten me. Would she believe that I am stil the same gauri. Untouched. That I am pak. Would she not question me about it. Would she not think that shashank did more than just to threaten. Would she not think that I am not pak anymore. Would she not think that shashank raped me that is why I was so ill. All those thinking led to me to stop telling anyone about it. I had to stay quiet for my own good. I had to just let It go for now. Right now I could not tell anyone.

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maria

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~
great story continue soon

thank milly 😉😉

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: lovely_girl
i like it already plz cont soon. so emotional. 👍🏼

thanks lovely_girl

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Posted: 18 years ago

part 3

I was back to my hostel. I was so scared my room mate and my friend, my coz still not came back from her holiday. I saw shashank again with his girl friend. Who knows what he might do now. I will try my best to come in front of him. And secondly I would try not to let any of my class fellow find out about it. If they find out I will not be able to live with the accusations.

Asalam-o-alikum ami and abu jaan

I am fine here. I know that you both are worried for me. You don't need to worry I am enjoying my self here. My temperature had run away. Looks like it only wanted you to take care of me while my stay in kolkutta.

Ami kaya astha and riya had grown up so much. And they are really good friends. Maybe I have changed that is why I cannot adjust in the house. I feel like a stranger. And when you treat me like I am special I feel odd. It makes me feel like I am not one of you. Mujeh ajeeb lagta hai. One thing which I noticed while staying in kolkutta. One thing which had worried me is that none of the girl wear dupatta. I did not say anything to them because they might be offended. Please ami mind na karna lakin un ko meri taraf se nahi balke apni taraf se samjhaye.

11 September ko delhi me sameena ki mangani hai.she really insisted me to come. Irfan bhai will come to pick us up. I am going there.

Say my salam to abu ji. I wil send him the books he asked me about. Ami abu is bar mujeh bohot kamzor lage take care of him. I don't want to become old so soon. Say salaam to every one.

Dua go
App ki beti
Gauri.

11 September came. My leave for three days was granted. I was brushing my long hair, When the cleaner came "ji app ke bhai saab aye hain. Shayad lene aye hain jaldi kariye please." I put everything that I did not need in the cupboard and locked it saying bye to other friends, I picked up my bag and walked out. The car outside was not irfan bhai's I looked here and there. The face in the car was not the one I haven't seen before. Finally he came out of the car and said salam. Everything came back to me. "shiv" yes it was him. I had been foolish as I was standing there staring at him. One year, one month and 16 days…. Yes thats how long it was since the last time we met. He was totally a different man. He was not shiv she remembered. His bear had grown a bit. Dark circle around his eyes. He was not the same shiv who's touch, who's heated breath made me loose myself. He read the question in my eyes. "irfan bhai told me to pick you up." I stood there like a fool. And handed my bag to him. He put the bag in the boot and opened the lock for three doors. I stood there troubled. Then without making fool of my self again I opened the front door and sat. Shiv too sat inside and read bismiallah. And started the car. "shukriya gauri shukriya." he said in such manner that she could recognise in millions. I was becoming restless to hear that from him. But today there was a certain disappointment in his voice.

We took the exit for the motorway. When tears came out from my eyes. To hide them I bent down and started doing the straps of my shoes. Which was not even needed. And my open hair were scattered all over shiv hand who was about to change gear. I gathered them quickly and I put them in a bun and with my second hand opened the bad to get the band. When shiv stared at me with such passionate eyes which made me shiver. "gauri." he said in a husky voice. "my love.. Leave them open."

"shiv" I said while taking control on myself. " time has taken away everything. Now we are not the same people. We don't know each other anymore. I trusted you when I sat in the car. Mujhe yakeen hai ke tum koi aisa kadam nahi uthao ge. Ke jo keeerchiyan me ne itne samay me apni palkon se chun li hain unhe phir mere kadmon me bikher do."

"yeh to mohobot ke wo sitare the jo abb bhi tumhari palkon par chamak rahe hain. Kiya hum ne koi aisa kadam uthaya tha. Ke jis se humare zameer pe khalsh ho." he questioned. "where were you" I tried to turn the topic. "sawal ka jawab sawal nahi hota" he smiled but did not bother hiding the tears at the end of his eyes. " anyways I was in middle east. I work for a oil company. Tum sonao kaisi ho. Koi mangani wangani. Or khush to ho na." I beard the tears. "hmm" was all I could say. "khabhi yaad aya" he looked me into my eyes. And I could not bear it any more. "nahi" I I put my head on my knees and started crying. And cried for a while. The car stopped we were on a abandoned road. He looked up to him he was worried. He handed me his handkerchief I took it with hesitation. And wiped my eyes. "khabhi bhi nahi" he asked me in shock. "kyun"

"is liye ke yaad to un ko kiya jata hai jinhe bhool jate hain." I said while looking at him. "really" he put forward his hand in front of me which I ignored. I just gave away another " hmm" "yeh to koi jawab na hoa gauri" I looked at him we were in a an abandoned road what would any one else passing here would think. "please shiv chalien yahan se." "waise jab tumhari zuban se mra naam atak atak ke ada hota hao to is ke mani badal jate hain." he started the car but I knew he was angry with me.

They reached the house. She went with sameena. And tried to avoid shiv for the rest for the day which she managed by helping out sameena mum. In the night they went and sat on the roof. "shiv thore arse ke liye wapis aye hain" said sameena "in hope that he will get what he wants. He is going to try his luck again. And maybe this time your dad will agree as now he is well settled. Hopefully there will be nothing wrong this time." I sat there shocked. So that is why he came back.

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