Paro come back - an alternative storyline

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Posted: 11 years ago
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If Paro is to be killed then I have a brilliant and different idea for a serial. It won't work if she is just going to get lost' due to memory loss. It will also give SI a different character to play.

Only giving a brief sketch - got to let the CVs do some work 😆

Hope you guys like it and as I am not active on facebook or twitter if someone could please pass it on to people who would be interested (many many Thanks ⭐️) - no credit required.

Rudra, we know will become a Devdas 😡. During the daytime I want him to be still doing his BSD job half-heartedly/only slightly sober (VK gives him unimportant stuff now), nights he spends drunk and getting into scruffles (no Lailas!).

Paro 2 is a street smart fast talking fraudster from a big city (Delhi/Mumbai so definitely smart to have survived there). She has a tough no-nonsense side & a hidden soft side. She is educated but circumstances turned her to this life. For 'easy' jobs she also picks pockets. She has to leave the city due to some reason and lands up in Chandigarh. (SI can have her western make-over 😆)

She talks her way into a lot of things including a place to live,etc and lands up in the same area normally visited by Rudra. Targets him and picks his pockets a few times, once he catches her and actually gives her the wallet 😳 . They have on-off encounters but she doesn't know he is a BSD officer. She eventually ends up stealing a briefcase with important papers and ends up on the run. Somewhere along the way drunk Rudra ends up with her. So begins their journey - who looks after who is open to question but we do see Rudra slowly turning back to his original avatar as a Jallad/protector. Lots of taunting between them with Paro talking them into/out of problems and Rudra providing the physical power & brains (after gradually giving up on the drinking 😆).

Only when they land at one of the BSD outposts does she realize he is an officer. Imagine her 😲

The rest I leave to the CVs. ⭐️

In between we can see short stories about any child (adopted by Maithili & Samrat) and the rest of the household including Aman, Shadbadi & Mohini still having evil/comical outcomes 😊

So what do you all think ? Coming back from London/Canada/Mars 😉 is just so ...so... same as the rest!

Thanks in advance for any comments.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: binimoti

what about their child?

I just gave a very broadline to base the story on. Any child's story would be worked in, for example the child is very likely adopted by Maithili and Samrat.

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