Dreams come true with maaneet- updat link on 1-dec 11

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gunjar

@gunjar

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#31

mahi i am back on commenting...😃

missed u all alot...

Awesome updates mahi...

timepass-haayeee...maan ko dhak dakh karne lag😆

journey-bechari geet...coffee kaise degi apni maan ko😆

fate- hayye happy happy times😃

uljhe-mereko samjh nahi ayya as i have one update pending i will read it and then comment on the teaser ok...

eagerly waiiting for the next updates mahi...

love u🤗

about new story mereko dono hi acche hai..

wich u feel comfortable u go with that dear...😊

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kabslocks

@kabslocks

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

beautiful teasers, any one of the stories you can start, but i would like to read both. so you can write one by one

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

sorry i cant update today
busy with guest
so now update on Monday
till than enjoy teaser

Fate

geet just cried her heart
babaji yo cant do it to me
please , maan maan wake up
maan who lost his hosh
and not giving response
to geet voice geet just took
gun in her hand and empty all
bullet in...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Uljhe

geet just took baby in her hand

baby oh you are so sweet

just like your mama
someone say and geet look to that
person and ...

next moment she wake up from sleep
tear just fail down fro her eyes
babaji ku aise sapane dikha rahe
ho jo pura a nahi honge ku

she look to toy and put
hand on her tummy and mummer
sorry baby apke aur apki mama ke sath
koi nahi hai koi nahii...

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

3 🤣

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fate

aap ko hamesha ek hi kaam hume rulana 😡 😭

but i know ki kuch nai hoga

maan bikul safe hoga ...😉 😆

Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Time pass

maan just get her ear ring and he want to
go but saw geet face turn white like
she saw some ghost he fallow her gaze
and saw shakal and before he say anything he heard
geet mummer baba yaha

now maan et shock of his life
kya yaar he shakal to apunka
hone wala sasur nikala
and some sound start to Eco
in maan ear dushman dushman

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago

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uma

@umamaaneet

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

4🤣 🤣

time paas

🤣 maan ki band baj gayi...maan upun ka shakal dekho na aine mai...🤣

new story

what ever maan is saying was some what correct for me...but i feel they do share some past...😕

Edited by umamaaneet - 11 years ago

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Mahimaan

@Mahimaan

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

new story

maan - so geet handa
geet - just geet called just geet
maan give angry glare to her and
geet give him same

maan so geet tale apke sath rape hua
tha kya , app bhi waha enjoy karne hi
gayi thi na , you get it na what was
i saying

Edited by Mahimaan - 11 years ago