A zaya os| Numb - Page 7

Originally posted by: Loquacious_Aash

Really beautiful. I loved how u took us through several emotions in such a short span.

Aaliyas realisations, be it her ammi's death or Zains importance in her lfe was prefectly penned down.

People think that we dont know whne we loose someone near to us, but sometimes we do, but we dont want to get it confirmed n so act along as if everything is alright. but at some pt we have to accpet teh truth. denial doenst work.

Thats exactly what happendn with aaliya n kuods for putting it down⭐️

Plz PM me next time u write something😊

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover

nice os dea!!

Originally posted by: jamespunked

I loved it to the core..it was so realistic!!!!!!! 😃 awesome os! I was literally numb..:')

Originally posted by: musicxolover

Wow Sanika...that was beautifully written! And no, I don't think it's lame, shush. -_-

You've totally captured ZaYa's essence in this story; they'll always be there for each other no matter what.

I could literally feel exactly what they were going through, loved the way you described their emotions! I think I went a little numb too when Aaliya found out that her mom died.

And...maaaybe I teared up a little bit too! :(

You are so sending me a PM every time you write something now.😆Keep it up! :)

Originally posted by: chocolatymelody

Amazing. You wrote this for Niharika's mom right? In school?
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