IshRa SS : bye bye the couch! (part 9 FINAL- 2nd august) - Page 7

Created

Last reply

Replies

205

Views

103.5k

Users

58

Likes

982

Frequent Posters

Divi.C thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#61
its good... Some times anger, fight r neede to blossom the love..
yhmfever thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#62
haha i loved it !! Lol Raman undressing himself in front of sheila just to see , Lol ishita had a bad timing !! or else sheila would have a good one !!
Loved it continue soon !!
madhavimanish32 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#63
emotional update update soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soonupdate soon
RheaSh thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#64
Superb 😊 Plz update soon.
.Rajji. thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#65

Hi guys!!! 🤗Part 5 of the story is finally here.

Sorry if it's not as good as the previous part : i've written it at 2AM 🤢🤢😛


note : Buddy me for PMs

Not proof read + english is not my mother tongue


Part 5 : Raman and Ishita take a few days apart from each other!

As soon as Raman slams the door, the anger that is burning in him disappears and he gets filled with guilt. Not long after his marriage, he had promised himself he would never mention Subbu in front of Ishita. It was HER past, and he, Raman, had no right to dig in it. He never told anyone but he really felt bad for Ishita about her broken engagement, because if he had a bad marriage himself, at least Shagun and himself gave a chance at their marriage, while Subbu never looked back at Ishita and broke their engagement as fast as he could.

He wants to go back inside and apologizes but he is afraid of facing her right now. He can imagine her crying, because of what HE said. He doesn't want to see it so he decides to leave.

Toshi sees him about to go outside : "Raman? Where are you going?"

Raman : "I... I need to see Mihir. We have a important meeting to prepare for tomorrow and I can't do it by myself. It'll take us all evening so I'll not get back tonight, I'll sleep at his place. Also tomorrow I'll go at the office directly from Mihir's."

Toshi "But raman..."

Raman "Amma please. I don't have time to discuss right now. Just... tell Ishita to not wait for me for dinner."

---------

Meanwhile Ishita is in the bedroom : After some time she stop crying. She realizes that Ravan Kumar didn't mean what he said, he just got carried away like she did. She should never have compared him and shagun.

She goes to freshen up and then goes in the living room. She looks for raman but doesn't see him.

Toshi : "if you're looking after raman, he's not here."

Ishita : "He's not here? Where did he go at this hour?"

Toshi "he just left to prepare meeting with Mihir. He said he's not coming back tonight."

Ishita looks disappointed.

Toshi tries to makes things better: "You know how he is. There is nothing that matters to him except work... Anyway, his loss! Tonight I am making special dinner for everyone. Come ishita, help me!"

Ishita spend the rest of the evening with Toshi. Just before dinner, her phone starts ringing.

She hurries to pick up, thinking it's raman.

Ishita : "allo?! Raman?"

Mr Iyer: : "No beta, It's me."

Ishita : "oh... Is everything alright?"

Mr iyer : "yes beta, don't worry. I just called to tell you that we've received a wedding card invitation at your name."

Ishita : "a wedding card? Who is it from?"

Mr iyer : "Yes. It's from Priya. She is getting married this week end"

Ishita : "ayooo this is such good news! I'm very happy for her, I'll make sure to cancel my appointements this week end and go! She still lives in the south right?"

Mr iyer : "Yes. By the way beta, there was a letter with the card. It says that she wants you to be part of all the preparations of her wedding. You are one of her best friends from high school, she considers you as family. In the letter she asks you to come the 24th july"

Ishita : "But the 24th... it's tomorrow!? I don't know if I can make it appa... I'll think about it tonight and tell you tomorrow morning. Alright goodnight appa".

Toshi has heard the conversation. Ishita asks her if she can go to the wedding ; she'll leave on Thursday and come back monday.

Toshi mocks her a bit as usual (it's her way of showing love):"Arre who do you think you are? I'm taking care of this house for more than 30 years. That won't make no difference even if you go for once month! You can go!"

Ishita is happy. She calls her colleagues and asks them if they can take her patients for the next few days as she has to assist to a wedding in the south. They says they'll manage and that she can go without a worry. They say that since she never takes vacations or days off, there is no problem, they'll do as she ask. Ishita is very happy and goes to prepare her suitcase. Then she thinks about Raman. She feels a bit sad thinking about their fight but she decides to call him to inform him about the wedding.

--------------

Raman arrives at mihir's place.

Mihir : "bhai? Aap yahaan? Is everything alright?"

Raman : "will you take me inside or do you plan on taking my interview at the door? Stupid."

Mihir : "sorry bhai. Come on in"

Once they are installed in the living room, mihir asks what happened once again.

Raman :"what? I can't come and spend the night at my brother's?"

Mihir : "you know it's not like that. My house is your house. But since you've gotten married to ishita you never came to spend the night here. Did you two fight?"

Raman is about to answer when his phones rings. It's written "Incoming call from ishita". He decides to not pick up. Mihir sees it and believe the situation is serious : raman never fails to pick up ishita's call.

Mihir : "you should have picked up bhai... it's not right..."

Raman angrily : "what I should do and shouldn't is my own business. Anyways, she was probably about to give me lectures about not drinking and I'm not in the mood for that"

Mihir decides not to try to understand what happened. He prepares a few drinks and they chill for the rest of the evening.

-------------------------

Ishita is half sad half angry that Raman didn't pick up the phone. Who does he thinks he is this ravan kumar!? Not answering my phone call... Unbelievable! What if I had something urgent to tell him? What if something had happened to ruhi!? Whatever." She throws her phone on the bed and gets her suitcase ready.

--------------------------

In the morning, ishita says goodbye to ruhi. Ruhi is very sad but Ishita promises her to bring her lots of gifts when she'll return. It makes ruhi feels a little better.

She says goodbye to the bhallas then she goes at the iyers to do the same.

Mrs iyer asks : is raman okay with you leaving ? you did tell him right?

Ishita : "amma don't worry about him. He is a big boy and can take care of himself. And I did call him to tell him, yes!" (she doesn't say that he didn't pick up, so it's a white lie)

She goes at the airport and gets on the plane.



Please do comment to tell me what you think (your feedback is important to me👍🏼) and press the like button if you find my story worth it. ❤️😳



Part 6 : raman misses ishita 🥺

Edited by rajji-cutest - 11 years ago
rutu83 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#66
"subbu is back"- is that good or bad?😕
both of them na...🥺
hope you update soon
ABBY92 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#67
I'm happy that Raman regretted what he said and that Ishita too understood that Raman did mean what he said and was just carried away. Though it's Raman's fault that he didn't pick up Ishita's call, I wonder how he's going to react when he finds out that she has left to the south for a couple of days and even more so with the precap that subbu is back.
shifajoomun thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#68
Gosh !! Plz dont take so long !! Was waiting for yr update since two days. Awesome !!! Subbu is back ?! God : this gonna be n interesting scenario !! _
shaayne thumbnail
Fascinator 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#69
This is soo good. Waited all weekend for part 5.. I was constantly checking to see if it was posted.. lol anyways looking forward to reading part 6. Continue soon :)
Dhwaniiam thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#70
Loved it .. Update soon
Please do PM me

Related Topics

Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock · 6 months ago

It was one of those rare calm nights in Delhi, the kind that carried a soft breeze, the scent of blooming mogra, and a strange kind of silence...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: ChanChanMan · 4 years ago

I dare you to post a thing about anyone other than DivAn.

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Im_sherlock · 6 months ago

On the show, we all know how Raman tried to give hints to Ishita about his feelings and desires, by keeping a box of condoms in her drawer. An...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Devanshi14 · 5 months ago

Chapter # 01 Title: “Pehli Baar Ishq Hua” Raman and Ishita had been married for months now—contractually, yes—but slowly, silently, love had...

Expand ▼
Ye Hai Mohabbatein thumbnail

Posted by: Manan_Pani_fan · 9 months ago

Exclusive:; Harshad Chopda and Shivangi Joshi likely to play leads The Sony TV show produced by Balaji Telefilms has seen major developments...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".