New Veeba OS/SS:~Choice of PRIORITY..~:Part-3,page-7..

[NOTE:U can go ahead and call me crazy!Which I truly am!😆But today's rotten episode made me jot dis down..Do give me ur views if I shud go ahead or leave it..😕Like seriously if it's boring,I'll stop..]

~Choice of PRIORITY..~

Part-1.

Veera walked upto Baldev who was waiting for her by the forest where he had asked her to meet him..

Her heart beat fast like always,as she went closer to him..This one guy had the ability to change her entire life in seconds..

Little did she know that he was going to do something of the sort today itself..

She sighed ,and tried to recover her breathing,as she stared at his handsome profile..From this far she could not see his eyes.But she knew when she would go and stand right there infront of him,the expression in those eyes would melt her insides to liquid..

Finally Veera gathered her wits a bit,and walked upto him..

He looked at her when she came into view,but strangely his face was solemn..His handsome face did not brighten up with the cute smile he usually greeted him with..

"Dev..?"She called him with a wobbly smile,and walked closer to him..

He just nodded and still did not smile back..

Veera was now completely baffled at his strange reaction..

She lightly touched his shoulder,and he moved away,which fell like a tight slap on her face..

He had never done anything like this before,ever since they had let each other know of their love..!Why was he suddenly,behaving like this..?!

"Baldev,tu-..?

[Baldev,you-..?]"

"Tune mujhse koi gaal chupayi ki Veera..?

[Did you hide something from me Veera..?]"He asked in a cold remote voice..

"Nahi to!Ye tu-..

[No!What are you-..]"She broke off in mid-sentence as he turned angry eyes at her..His face held a "

"Jhoot!Phir se jhoot!Teri shaadi ki baat chal rahi hai na tere ghar pe..?

[Lie!Again lie!They are talking about your marriage in you house,aren't they..?]"

Veera opened her mouth and closed it again..She was not sure how to respond to that..It was true her family were talking about it,but she had told them she did not want to marry just yet..

And she was sure,they did not continue further about it..

"Paar Dev,maine kaab ki mana kar ditta un saabko!Maine kaha ki main abhi taiyaar nahi hun..

[But Dev,I have refused them a long time back!I have said I am not ready to marry yet..]"

"Aur agar wo phir bhi teri shaadi thik kaaradein to-..?

[And if they still fix your marriage then-..?]"His words were so cold and sure,that Veera felt her heart stop at his words..

She shook her head trying to disagree,but never got the chance..

"Veera tere liye teri Veerji saab hai,nahi..?

[Veera for you your Veerji is everything,right..?]"

Veera nodded her head in agreement,not understanding what he was getting at..

"Tu unhe kabhi naa nahi keh sakti,hai na?

[You can't say no to him ever,right?]"

Veera nodded in agreement..

"Toh ab agar tera Veerji tere liye koi ladka chune aur tujhe kahe ki usse shaadi karle,tu kar legi..?

[So now if your Veerji choses a guy for you and tells you to marry him,you'll do it..?]"

Veera dumbly nodded her head,and then shook it again,realising what she was doing..

"Main-..Main unhe samjhaungi ki-..

[I'll-..I'll explain to him that-..]"She gulped and looked nervously into his searching deep eyes..

"Ki main abhi shaadi nahi karna chahti..

[That I don't want to marry yet..]"Her words strangely made him laugh out loud..And Veera felt uncomfortable at the sound of the laughter..

"Phir bhi tu unhe ye nahi kahegi ki tainu mujhse pyaar ho gayi hai..?Ki tu shaadi sirf mujhse karna chahti hai..?Kiu..?Kiu ki mein nalayak aur gayer zimmedar hun..?Kiu ki tainu sharm ati hai,mainu apni aashiq kehne pe..?Kiu ki tu parilikhkhi hai,aur main unpar gawar..?

[But still you won't tell him,that you have fallen in love with me..?That you just want to marry me..?Why..?because I am useless and irresponsible..?Because you are ashamed to say that I am your lover..?Because you are educated,and I am illiterate? ]"He gritted out angrily..

Veera tried to console him and deny what he was saying,but could not as he moved away..

"Veera..Tu teri Veer nu kabhi na nahi keh payegi..Kabhi mainu chun nahi payegi saab ki upar uthke..Kabhi mere takleefein vekh nahi payegi tu..

[Veera..You can never say no to your brother..You cannot rise above everything and chose me..You cannot see my problems and hurt at all..]"He said softly as he looked away..

Veera was taking a step towards him,when his words stopped her..

"Aaj tainu ladke wale vekhne aayega..Teri Veerji hi bulaya hai unhe..Gunjan ne bataya mainu..

[Today the boy's family are gonna come to see you..Your Veeji has called them..Gunjan has told me..]"

"Veera..Aaj tainu phaisla karna hai..Ki tu mainu chunti hai ya teri Veer nu..Kisse tu na bolegi..Aagar aaj tu teri Veer di gaal sunkaar ladkewale ki saamne chali jati hai,to kaal se tu mainu tere saath phir kabhi nahi payega..Tu thik karle,ki karegi tu..

[Veera..Today you have to decide..That you will chose me or you Veer..Whom will you say NO to..If you listen to your Veer today and go infront of the boy's family coming to see you,then from tomorrow you will never find me beside you..You decide,what will you do..]"He finished in the same determined voice,and turned to leave..

He had taken two steps,when he turned to give her a last look..

"Waise meri Beeji bhi mere waaste kudi dhundh rahi hai..Aaj agar tu apni Veer nu na nahi keh payi to main Beeji nu haan jaroor keh dunga..Mere liye bhi mere Beeji saab kuch hai..

[By the way,my Beeji is also looking for girls for marriage for me..Today if you cannot say no to your Veerji,then I'll for sure say yes to my Beeji..Even for me my Beeji is everything..]"He walked away as his words echoed in the surrounding,as a stunned Veera stood silently..

Her heart gave a painful squeeze,at the ultimatum he had given her..

Who was she going to chose..?! What was she going to do..?!

She had to talk to her Veerji..!But what if he got hurt..?!She could never hurt him..!But how could she hurt Baldev..?!Maybe Baldev will understand and forgive her..Like he had so many times..

Veera..What if you lose Baldev for good this time,just because you were not strong enough to declare your love for him..Could you live with that..?Are you ready to see cuddling to someone else..Holding someone else..Looking into someone's eyes like he did with you..?

"NO!!!!"She screamed out,as even the thought of it seemed to tear her heart out..She felt a heavy choking feeling at the center of her heart..As if something was squeezing all the blood out of it..She felt she was having difficulty in breathing too..

But what was she going to do..?How was she going to get herself out of this..?!

How will I say no to Veerji..?!

And how will I live without Baldev..?!Veera suddenly covered her face and sobbed out in pain..She was suddenly stuck..What was she going to do..When it was the choice of Priority,how could she chose one over the other..?!

Part-2,page-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110545439

Link to my VEERA works😈:

Tehsina's VEERA Writng Index:Come,Live The Love..:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/102274391

INDEX:

Part-1:Above!

Part-2,page-3:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110545439

Part-3,page-7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110687015

Awww girl I fell for this story the instant I read the title and your monologue!!!! 🤗 there is not even a question you ought to continue it!!! At least you can bring out an angry determined Ballu in this unlike the crap we get to see!!!!

Awesome!!!pls pls pls continue 😃

Yes definitely continue this without a doubt.

Loved it, this is so plausible in the show and could be an amazing to watch vishal acting out ur scenes as baldev.

Awesome!


and I can so see veera in the show bring torn and thinking just how yiu have written that baldev will forgive her, because he always has.

I love you for this! Please continue soon,cannot wait!!!! ❤️ it...

Omg awesome yaar itne ache ideas ate kaha se hai?? Superb just loved ur ss/os plzzz do continue 😊 😊

u still rock -- i barely get time top catch up.. continue -- loved baldevs ultimatum...thanks hun for the pms❤️

Sina...speechless..much required medicine after yesterdays crap. I should send this link to cvs,,unko jara bhi sharam aati hai ki nahi...bas wohi dekna hai...what all nonsense they manage to dish out...dimak ka dahi banake rak diya
Dear partner dont leave her, punish her, let veera suffer...I really want her to realise ballu's worth and love, want her to go down on her knees and tell him that she loves him and cant live without him. Her veerji can take a back seat now. She needs his blessings nothing else.
Lovely write up...loved it...reading it even before brushing teeth...atyachar kar diya cvs ne last night episode ke naam pe

Tehsina!!!!!!!!👏👏👏 Aur kitne fans chahiye tumhe?😡...the full forum is already lattu on your writing😆... I am so jelly of you...seriously dear a very "Thank you" for penning down such an awesome OS...and something which is very much plausible...and I am damn sure that such a situation will arise in the show as well where she has to choose between her love and her Veerji after their love grows stronger. And I am excited to know how you want Veera to handle her priorities...😳 Looking forward for the next part...jaldi update karna...😳... Love you dear for spoiling us with such awesome stories 🤗🤗 Your stories help me keep the passion for Veeba ignited within me😳 whenever I am not satisfied with the show😳