New Veeba OS/SS:~Choice of PRIORITY..~:Part-3,page-7.. - Page 2

Hey sina

Woow Sina.. loved it.. 🤗continue soon with a long update waiting eagerly

i knew something like this was soon coming when i saw your topic in the forum last night.😆😆 i was also upset with veera. and for the first time i wanted ranvi to just vanish. my poor baldev he stood two hours in the rain and got sick because of veera and he gets nothing in return.😭
i want baldev to ignor veera in the show... tab usse baldev ki importance samajh ayegi...

ek baat toh bhool gayi!!! just continue this di... baldev in full angry ignoring mode... and bring in a girl if you need. but no other boy for veera. coz that will hurt baldev and he will come to veera... this time all the work should be done by veera... and baldev should sit back and enjoy everything that he deserves... 😈

nice one

oh the os looking intense

[NOTE:Thank u all of u guys for so much love and support!🤗I was so frustrated nd angry dt I was sure I jot down all crap..😒Veera broke my heart,so..🥺And since u all want me to continue wid dis..M doing jst dt..😳M not sure if it will be five parts or more or less,hence OS/SS..😳I will just go wid da flow and public demand..😉So tell me guys how much hurt do u want Veera to be..I will try to do sth about it..😈M nt so good at writn painful emotional scenes though..But I will try..😳So out wid ur demands all u Veebians!😈]

Part-1,page-1:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110516596

Part-2.

It's hard to understand the human mind.Difficult to break the codes of the complex machine that is human mind..But fairly easy to read and understand someone you love with your whole heart..

But was it?

Veera learned it the hard way..Or should it be said,that she will learn it the hard way..

Like Baldev had predicted,Veera did not get a chance to explain to her Veerji,the reason of not wanting to marry..Nor could she tell him that she was mad in love for Baldev..That the one who mattered most to her was Baldev only.

And of course destiny always had something different planned for you when you least expect it..

Veera went to meet the guests,as her Veerji dragged her along with an immense grin.Such a happy expression that Veera felt she would rather die than remove that smile from her Veerji's face..

Her Veerji,he meant the world to her..His happiness her everything..

The real identity of the guests were kept a secret from Veera,but of course Veera knew..

She did not want to insult her brother,so she met the guests..

But as soon as they left,she pulled her brother away,telling him she needed to talk to him in private..

Veera took her Veer to her room,where he turned away while she blurted out her feelings..She told him she was in love with someone,and hence could not marry someone else..

She just did not have the courage to say Baldev's name..

Her brother was of course speechless,but asked her who the guy was,that if it was that Karan..

Karan..That name brought a gush of laughter from her..She shook her head and said it was not Karan at all..

And in her heart she knew it could never be Karan at all..She had never felt even 5% of what she felt for Baldev for Karan..Karan had been a mere crush,or infatuation,because she thought him perfect..

No Karan or anyone could take place of Baldev for her..No one could even come close..

Baldev was perfectly flawed,and completely imperfect for her,and yet he owned her heart,her soul and could move her body and mind like no other could..

Even the thought of him sent a glowing warmth through every pores of her body..Such was the effect of his love on her..

Quickly she reassured her Veer that she would tell him about the guy,when the time was right..That for now she just did not want him to look for guys for her marriage..

A confused Ranvi promised her to do just that,already worried who the guy might be,as he left the room..

Veera sighed out in relief that she had overtook a bog obstacle,and the next step would be to call Baldev and tell him,she had told her Veerji about their love..

She called at least ten times,but no one picked up the phone..

Frowning she wondered if he had already fallen asleep..?But he usually did not sleep so early..?!In fact he NEVER slept without talking to her..

A soft smile came to her lips,as she thought how he usually fell asleep while talking to her on phone..And how she loved to hear his soft breathing through phone for sometime before she cut the line..At those times,she always felt she was right there beside him..And wished she could touch his handsome face,or run her fingers through his thick hair..But of course she could not..

A number of times he had also surprised her with nightly visits in her room,and those were usually the best times for her..

Suddenly she sat alert,was he planning to surprise her with one of those nightly visits again,and hence he was not picking the phone..?!

Her eyes shone with excitement,and a big smile came on her lips..She loved the constant surprises he kept n giving her..He pampered her so much..That at times she almost forgot her Veerji,who had pampered her his entire life from babyhood..

Her eyes moved to the cute teddy bear that Baldev had gifted her a week ago..

His husky voice still rang in her ears making her blush..

"Main to abhi teri baahon mei haar roz so nahi sakta..To mere jagey pe iss teddy ko hi jhappiya aur pappiya de dena..?Samajhlena ki main hi hun..

[I can't sleep in your arms regularly yet..So in my place you can hug and kiss this teddy instead..?You can imagine it's me..]"

Veera had flushed tomato red at his words..And when her hand had touched his while giving the teddy Veera had felt a fireworks explosion start instantly..

She had gotten lost in his beautiful dark eyes,the way she always did..What was there about this man that pulled her so..?Why could she not stay away from him..?

And his most loved attribute was he always forgave her..No matter what..

Veera sometimes felt guilty,like now she was thinking why she had not said Baldev's name to her Veerji..

It was better if she told this sometime later..When Veerji had fully accepted she loved someone,she would tell him..

Really Veera?Or is it by any chance that you are ashamed of Baldev not being educated like you,and hence you are afraid to let the world know about your love for him..?Why all the hide and seek Veera..?

Veera felt more guilt at the taunt from her inner voice,but silenced it by saying it's not true..

She hugged the teddy tight,while her mind flashed the time he had hugged her in Poland..And then the time he had re-proposed and she had accepted,with an excited hug,he had hugged her back..

That hug had changed her world..The warmth seeping from his hard male body to her soft one,had lighted up her world..That was when she knew how much this guy meant to her..

His one hug had lighted up her entire being,and had given an all new meaning to her world..That hug had completely moved her axis,and made her hook,line and sinker all for him again..

She had felt such embarrassment take over her,afterwards when they moved apart,and had been unable to look at him for quite some time..

After that day they had not hugged again,maybe both had been afraid and a bit unsettled by the clear attraction they felt for each other..

Now at that moment Veera wished he was here..Cause she wanted to hug him tight,right then..She wanted to feel the confidence seep in from his body to hers..She wanted to be cuddled and reassured that everything would work out,that he was there for her,no matter what..

She called him up again,restless to talk to him,but again no one received the call..

She sighed and lay down on her bed,expecting and hoping that he would come into her room any time soon..
She fell asleep just like that,but no one came..Nor did a husky voice said a sexy "Hello ji..Good morning ji.."to her when she called him in the morning too..

Veera could not even have a proper breakfast,and nor did she notice her family giving her worried looks..

She got out of the house unmindfully,still trying his number a couple of times,but still no response..

She saw Jaggi,and instantly called out to him..

"Jaggi!Tune Baldev ko dekha ki..?

[Jaggi!Did you see Baldev..?]"

Jaggi suddenly looked confused and a bit awkward at seeing her..

"Wo..Wo Paji to apnein ghar pe hi honge shayaad..Maine to nai vekha subha se..

[He..Paji might be in his home maybe..I did not see him since morning..]"He mumbled and left before Veera could ask him further questions..

Veera frowned at his weird behavior and thought to let the matter go..

But she was shocked on reaching the house,as she noticed a lot of hustle bustle in the house..

What was happening here?!

On asking a man bringing some packets from outside,Veera felt her world was crumbling down..

Without further thought,she ran upto his room,and banged her way in..

Baldev was standing infront of the mirror,and combing his hair..He was wearing a purple sherwani the same one he had worn on his parent's anniversary..

"Dev..?Ye saab ki hai..?!Main ye ki sun rahi huun..?!

[Dev..?What is all this..?!What am I hearing..?!]"She whispered out in a choked voice,her eyes almost brimming full already..

Baldev did not turn to look at her too,as he fixed his sherwani.

"Wahi jo saach hai..

[I said what is the truth..]"His words fell like a bomb on Veera,who went completely still..

His next words clawed at her insides until they were torn to shreds of pain only..

"Tu iththe kiu ayi hain..?Tere hone waale pati kya kahenge..?Aur mere hone wali voti ko bhi pasand nai hogi ki koi aire gaire mere kaamrein wich kabhi bhi ghuss jaye..Tu ja iththe se..Dekh nahi rahi..?Main biji hun..Mainu vekhne ladki wale aayenge..

[Why did you come here..?What is your husband-to-be going to tell..?And my wife-to-be will also not like that anyone enters my room whenever they want to..You go from here..Can't you see..?I'm busy..Bride's family will come to see me..]"

At that moment Veera felt she had been slapped tight on her face..She wanted to say so many things to him..Scream,shout,beat him for an answer,but she could barely move..

She took in a painful breath,before choking out the only sentence she could manage from her dry constricted throat..

"Par tu-..Kiu..?Dev..?

[But you-..Why..?Dev..?]"

That was when he turned to look into her eyes..His dark beautiful eyes,held all the fury in the world,and also hurt..

Veera wanted to weep out and beg him to forgive her,abut no words would come out..A painful heavy sensation had settled on her heart,which was getting heavier by the second..She was having difficulty in breathing too..Her face now completely pale,her nails digging sharply onto her palm,and yet she did not wince..

But she winced when he said the next painful words..His words tore at her insides..His words felt like a sharp salted knife,that rubbed her wounds raw,and made her bleed profusely..

He moved closer to her,to look deeply into her eyes,as he said the last sentence..

"Kiuki main apni Beeji ko na nahi keh saka..Tu to mere bhavnao ko achchi tara samjhegi..Tu bhi to na nahi keh payi na..?Mere mana karne ki bawajoot bhi to gayi thi na ladko walo ki saamne..?Ek vaari NA nahi bol saki mere khaatir..?Saari zindagi saath nibhane ke liye HAAN kaise bolegi..?

[Because I could not say No to my Beeji..You are going to understand my feelings very well..Even you could not say No right..?You went infront of the boy's family despite my saying no to you,did you not..?You could not say NO for me,even once..?How will you say YES to live with me forever..?]"

His eyes glinted with the pain he had been hiding,but in the next instance he looked away,and showed her the door..

"Oye tu ja ithte se,abhi!Mainu bauhot kaam hai..!

[Oye you leave from here now!I have lots of work..!]"

Veera looked at him for a few seconds,her entire being completely numb..Her hands and feet completely cold by then..

Slowly she turned to leave and walked out of the house..She walked were her feet took her through the streets of Pritampura..

People called at her on the way,some greeted her,but she was not listening..She was lost to everything..Only the pain within her was alive..It was only her heart that squeezed painfully,letting her know of its beating..It was only here eyes,that itched with unshed tears,let her know it was still functioning..It was her lungs that hurt everytime she took in a breath,that made her understood it was still in working order..Otherwise Veera felt she was completely dead..

Part-3,page-7:https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/110687015

gud story i wish they show this in the serial also becoz veera will face difficulty telling abt her love for baldev to her veerji and i want u to make her suffer more and then tell her abt her love to ranvi

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