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Sneha Chheda

@snehac2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#271

hey great work
beautifully penned down
cont soon
thanz for the pm

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

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Posted: 11 years ago

#272

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Chitra.

@..MiStLeToE..

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Posted: 11 years ago

#273

Very ashamed at the speed at which I am reading!Still at chp 5-_- Reserved :D I promise to Unres Shenz!Bear with me. . .

Unres
All throught I thought why Sharon is reacting like this?Cant she just talk to Swayam?But now I know that her Doings are so justified.Shenz,first of all the opening part of this update was so Breathtaking for me. . .Sharon's hurt pain you described it so beautifully. . .The small effirts like searching the key trembling hands crying. . .I dont know why but if left me shuddering.It was Awesome.She gave her everything to Swayam but Swayam maybe unintentionally but he did broke his trust.Bet!!!!Phewww...Its hard!
Wonderful update.

Edited by ..MiStLeToE.. - 11 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#274

Originally posted by: ..MiStLeToE..
Very ashamed at the speed at which I am reading!Still at chp 5-_- Reserved :D I promise to Unres Shenz!Bear with me. . .

Never mind. take your time. The next one would be little slow, or probably more than what I expect it to be.

Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

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PRACHI

@prachi_vrushan

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#275

omg it was so emotional that was a bet just because of that crap bet they r separated n yes here Sharon is right!!!

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Manisha Bhardwaj

@Rockingbhardwaj

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#276

so this was the bet..

if it is true then swayam is a disgusting person..

n if it is not then jack is gonna pay..

sharon's emotions were very well penned down shenz
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loved it..
update soon
thanks 4 d pm

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anubhutijain

@anubhutijain

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#277

Awsome update! Finally reason revealed. ...

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rosy kohli

@rosyrkohli

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#278

res

unres

i m really happy wit tis update

sharon's pov, her believe on swayam

which changed to hurt n pain was very well penned

i was more shocked to read abt swayam's bet 😲

it was really pathetic on his part

waiting for next update

do update soon 😛

Edited by rosyrkohli - 11 years ago

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#279

It was cos of a bet😲

really wanna know whether its a mu or is t true😳

oh no poor sharon

continue soonish😳

Edited by aishu3003 - 11 years ago

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Nishi

@.nerfherder

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#280

Res..wil unres soon..jst 2 chaps lft to read.
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Amazing update shenz.
the way you described Sharon's pain was really great. All of this was because of a bet?
Swayam is a strange guy. was this only a bet for him or something else?
well im eager to read more..
Amazing writing. :D

Cheers
Nishi

Edited by Nishi.Kss - 11 years ago

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