[Dark+Thriller]The Sanyal's Salvation*Chap15 UpdatED Pg46 PMs SENT*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi guyz,

I am Chandni. I have been a silent member of this forum.
However, if everyone would be interested, I would like to pen down a story.

I have been watching Sadda Haq for quite some time.

Off lately, a bit on-off, but what remains constant is my liking towards Randhir Singh Shekhawat. I read the written updates and if the episode has Randhir in it .. I watch the episode. So yeah I am a lot tilted towards this character.

Well, umm.. to be honest, though this a woman centric show .. the character which actually clicked with me was of Randhir.

I won't blame harshita.. but its the CV's fault that Sanyukta's character still doesn't appeal much to me. She is helpful to everyone but still she doesn't touch my soul.. She doesn't make me ponder the way Randhir does. Funny.. but that's how it has always been , with me atleast.

But kudos to the CVs as well coz Randhir's character seems the most soulful and soul stirring character to me.

So this story will have more of Randhir and his family's point of view. Hence the title has
" Sanyal's ". Its more about their family.

Sorry for being biased ... but if at all it appeals to all of you.. Shall i go ahead and start posting in a couple of days time?

Suggestions most welcome..

Thanks,
Chandni


Index:-

Prologue - Page 1
Chapter1 - Page 2
Chapter2 - Page 2
Chapter3 - Page 3
Chapter4 (Part-1) - Page 4
Chapter4 (Part-2) - Page 5
Chapter 5 - Page 6
Chapter 6 - Page 8
Chapter 7 - Page 9
A/N - Page 10
Chapter 8 - Page 11
Chap 9 Teaser - Page 15
Chapter9 (Part-1) - Page 17
Chapter9 (Part-2) - Page 20
Chapter 10 - Page 22
Chapter 11 - Page 27
Chap 12 Teaser - Page 30
Chapter 12 - Page 32
Chapter 13 - Page 36
Chapter 14 - Page 40
Chapter 15 - Page 46

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yaar apne approvals/disapprovals reply kar dena.. I'll get to know then.. If everyone is interested on not.. ??!! ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yes you are right even I started watched ng the show for randhirs character only the way his character developed from MCP to caring I really loved it. Yours is a nice concept please go head with ur ff


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey!Chandni
Welcome to the SH forum & SANDHIR dreamland❤️
love ur update dear👏⭐️
Love
Bushra
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you guyz for the warm welcome.. 😊.. Will update the prologue by the End of the Day.. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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So many views n just 2 replies other than mine.. lol.. only m replying.. 😭
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Chandni
would love to read it
Randhir Singh Shekhawat🤗
plz post first soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi All,
Before posting the prologue.. few words...

1. This story is about Randhir and a third person.. No.. not a romantic alliance.. Friends.. He genuinely needs a friend... 😊
2. Romance will be there... Sandhir .. 😊 and a love track for Randhir's friend. 😊
3. No love triangles will be there.. as i hate love triangles.
4. Some portions might be really emotionally draining..
5. Abusive words would be there.. 😆.. Coz I use them pretty often.. 😆

So here i Go with the prologue.

Prologue

It was not just a deserted street with almost invisible street lights. It was the state of God's two favorite children. Engulfed in sadness... emptiness... looking for a flicker of light... It was not the violent winds that shook the trees ... Hell... even the poles of Roorkie were swaying... It was the turmoil, the sway their souls were bearing... Life's a bitch... At least to these two...

Heavy rains... No... It seemed the skies were crying. And why wouldn't they. ??!! .. THE Randhir Singh Shekhawat was looking at them and asking them questions. Not just questions, heart and gut wrenching questions. Well, almost every second person on this damn planet asked questions to them... But they were not Randhir. He never cried... Yet today he was crying on his knees... Why wouldn't the skies cry with him? Their favorite child was Broken. It was hell in the heavens.

Nerve wrecking thunders... Scary lightning... No... It seemed the skies were howling. And why wouldn't they. ??!! .. SHE was NEITHER looking at them NOR asking them questions. She was just walking with her head low and cold emotionless eyes fixed on the ground. Nothing scares her... Winds rumbling ... like ghosts howling, yet nothing scares her. At that moment, no ghost was as cruel as life was to her. But that's her problem...

That's when it became the skies' problem... why wouldn't she talk to them,curse them,when almost every second person on this damn planet asked questions to them... But SHE WAS NOT THEM. She never cried... She never asked questions... So why wouldn't the skies cry for her?

What's the solution then??!! ... Only one... So the nature waited with bated breath for the two Star crossed FRIENDS to collide and pick each other up.



Suggestions Most Welcome.. Do tell me how is it.. Shall i continue..??


Edited by Moony87 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey... even I watch show only for randhir..
If he is not in d epi... I dun watch it...😃

Urs is a nyc concept...

Update soon n plz pm me😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice concept & brilliant prologue

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