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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar



I'm going awweest now! And this next update is almost done. šŸ˜•


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Chapter Sixteen

Later that evening, Sanyukta was standing in the kitchen, engrossed in cutting vegetables, when she felt a pair of strong arms wrap around her waist from behind her. She felt warm lips on her neck and she smiled. She turned around to face Randhir.

Before she could say a word to him, he captured her lips in his in a passionate kiss. His hand crept up her legs, under her dress and Sanyukta moaned. It was true that she was sore, but right now she was willing to forget all of that... he just made her feel so damn good. That morning was more painful and it was less tolerable, but now she wanted him badly.

"Don't you want dinner?" she mumbled against his lips.

"I'm having dinner," he replied almost inaudibly, causing her to giggle.

He released her from the kiss and sucked on the soft skin of her neck gently, causing her to blush. She closed her eyes, enjoying the feel of his lips on her body.

"We should do this after dinner," she breathed out, finding it hard to concentrate on what she was saying.

He let go of her and smiled sweetly. "Okay, I'll help you," he said.

"You'll help me Randhir?" Sanyukta asked, feigning shock.

"We'll get to eat faster," he told her. "Tell me what to do!"

Sanyukta put him in charge of cutting the rest of the vegetables and turned on the stove, starting on the spices.

Soon they had finished cooking and had set the table. After Sanyukta served the food to both of them, she sat beside him.

"How is it?" she asked, waiting for him to eat first.

He put a spoonful in his mouth and chewed.

"Very good," he said after swallowing it, smiling with approval. "You are amazing Sanyukta!"

She looked down and smiled, feeling her heart leap at his compliment. It felt like forever since she had been complimented by him, before last night anyways.

"You helped," she muttered, blushing, wanting to give him credit too, especially since he deserved it.

"Here, try some," he said, wrapping his fingers around some rice and holding his hand out for her to eat from.

Her heart beating wildly, she leaned forward and allowed her lips to wrap around his fingers, taking the food he had held out for her.

"Yum," she said with approval, causing him to smile.

She mimicked his actions and started to feed him too. Smiling, they both fed each other until they were done.

"That was even tastier from your hands," he told her flirtatiously, making her blush once again.

She put her fingers in her mouth, licking off the pieces of rice that were stuck. Randhir saw the action and walked towards her, an aroused expression on his face.

"That's hot," he whispered in her ear, causing her to shiver.

He brought his fingers to her lips too. "Here, have this too."

Blushing even more deeply, she licked his fingers clean before he grabbed her hand with his. "I should make sure it's clean," he told her seductively, bringing her fingers to his mouth.

Why was he so irresistible? Before he could waste anymore time, she decided that she couldn't take it anymore. She wanted him now. She pulled her hand away and crashed her lips against his, wanting to taste his mouth again. His hands crawled around her waist and she pressed her body closer to him. She knew he wanted her and he wanted her badly - she could feel it.

"Mhm Randhir, dishes," she whispered against his lips, not wanting to let go.

"Later," he said, his hands slipping under her dress and up her back, unhooking her bra.

"Okay," she breathed out, removing his shirt and letting it fall to the ground.

His lips traveled to her ears and nibbled on her earlobe, causing her to gasp and press her body as close to his as possible.

"R - Randhir," she stammered, as he kissed her cheek.

"Yes?"

"Will we do it here? In the kitchen?" she asked.

"Why? Any complaints?" he replied to her with a smirk.

She shook her head. "No... not at all, I'll clean up tomorrow morning before I leave," she told him absent-mindedly and proceeded to kiss his lips. She was referring to the meeting that she had been scheduled to attend during the day.

Before her lips could even brush over his, Randhir pushed her off him, and she staggered backwards, her mouth falling open.

"Randhir?" she asked him, shocked.

Without saying a word, he pulled his shirt back on, grabbed the car keys and stormed out of the house, leaving Sanyukta alarmed.

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Edited by ilovepyaar - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved...as always xD
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Omgee!?

Okay...this was hawt...as always...but what the hell is wrong with randhir!?

I am starting to fret now...

You describe scenes so vividly...

I just am amused like forever...but what the heck is wrong with rd !?
OK!!! Is it because he thinks she will leave him forever? :O

Smart mešŸ˜ŽšŸ˜†

SaafišŸ¤—<3

Amazing as always... =)
Edited by DamselinDistres - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar


Mhhhmmm... I know this is super sexy... so I am excited to read it... I bet you're gonna make me blush... again... heheh.

Chapter Sixteen

Later that evening, Sanyukta was standing in the kitchen, engrossed in cutting vegetables, when she felt a pair of strong arms wrap around her waist from behind her. She felt warm lips on her neck and she smiled. She turned around to face Randhir.
I can see this scene... awh. I think we all have a fantasy.. that when a girl cooks... that she gets hugged from the back! 😳

Before she could say a word to him, he captured her lips in his in a passionate kiss. His hand crept up her legs, under her dress and Sanyukta moaned. It was true that she was sore, but right now she was willing to forget all of that... he just made her feel so damn good. That morning was more painful and it was less tolerable, but now she wanted him badly.

Hahahaaha! Againnn?! hehehe!

"Don't you want dinner?" she mumbled against his lips.

"I'm having dinner," he replied almost inaudibly, causing her to giggle.

He released her from the kiss and sucked on the soft skin of her neck gently, causing her to blush. She closed her eyes, enjoying the feel of his lips on her body.

mhmmm😳😳😳😳😳😳

"We should do this after dinner," she breathed out, finding it hard to concentrate on what she was saying.

He let go of her and smiled sweetly. "Okay, I'll help you," he said.

"You'll help me Randhir?" Sanyukta asked, feigning shock.

"We'll get to eat faster," he told her. "Tell me what to do!"

Sanyukta put him in charge of cutting the rest of the vegetables and turned on the stove, starting on the spices.

Soon they had finished cooking and had set the table. After Sanyukta served the food to both of them, she sat beside him.

Awh... he's helping her in the kitchen. That's beautiful.

"How is it?" she asked, waiting for him to eat first.

He put a spoonful in his mouth and chewed.

"Very good," he said after swallowing it, smiling with approval. "You are amazing Sanyukta!"

She looked down and smiled, feeling her heart leap at his compliment. It felt like forever since she had been complimented by him, before last night anyways.

"You helped," she muttered, blushing, wanting to give him credit too, especially since he deserved it.

"Here, try some," he said, wrapping his fingers around some rice and holding his hand out for her to eat from.

Her heart beating wildly, she leaned forward and allowed her lips to wrap around his fingers, taking the food he had held out for her.

"Yum," she said with approval, causing him to smile.

She mimicked his actions and started to feed him too. Smiling, they both fed each other until they were done.

"That was even tastier from your hands," he told her flirtatiously, making her blush once again.

Flirty Randhir...😳😳😳😳😳😳

She put her fingers in her mouth, licking off the pieces of rice that were stuck. Randhir saw the action and walked towards her, an aroused expression on his face.

"That's hot," he whispered in her ear, causing her to shiver.

He brought his fingers to her lips too. "Here, have this too."

oh my gosh... I am blushing. what even.ā˜ŗļø

Blushing even more deeply, she licked his fingers clean before he grabbed her hand with his. "I should make sure it's clean," he told her seductively, bringing her fingers to his mouth.

Naughty... what the... you're making me feel even more embarrassed! gosh... licking fingers... that's just too creative yaar!

Why was he so irresistible? Before he could waste anymore time, she decided that she couldn't take it anymore. She wanted him now. She pulled her hand away and crashed her lips against his, wanting to taste his mouth again. His hands crawled around her waist and she pressed her body closer to him. She knew he wanted her and he wanted her badly - she could feel it.

hehehešŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜³

"Mhm Randhir, dishes," she whispered against his lips, not wanting to let go.

"Later," he said, his hands slipping under her dress and up her back, unhooking her bra.

"Okay," she breathed out, removing his shirt and letting it fall to the ground.

His lips traveled to her ears and nibbled on her earlobe, causing her to gasp and press her body as close to his as possible.

"R - Randhir," she stammered, as he kissed her cheek.

"Yes?"

"Will we do it here? In the kitchen?" she asked.

"Why? Any complaints?" he replied to her with a smirk.

She shook her head. "No... not at all, I'll clean up tomorrow morning before I leave," she told him absent-mindedly and proceeded to kiss his lips. She was referring to the meeting that she had been scheduled to attend during the day.

Before her lips could even brush over his, Randhir pushed her off him, and she staggered backwards, her mouth falling open.

Mhhmm. I see what you did. He just told him that she'll leave. And that triggered his memory or if he doesn't know about the meeting...he thinks she's going. I think it just triggered his memory... and now his trust issues came in between and made him push her off.

"Randhir?" she asked him, shocked.

Without saying a word, he pulled his shirt back on, grabbed the car keys and stormed out of the house, leaving Sanyukta alarmed.

He left... because he remembered his inner turmoils again. He is frustrated that he got carried away... and he isn't sure what's going to happen.

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Edited by kri1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Oops ye kya hua
Hmm interesting
Thanks for the pm
Do pm me the next time also
Loads of love
Mahak
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Posted: 11 years ago
what happened to rd?
is he againn scared of losing her!?
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Posted: 11 years ago
Omg what happen now..abhi to itna cute the dono then what now.

Update soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update
they are getting more romantic with each other
can't wait to see how rd reacts about her going to a meeting and he thinking that she is going to leave him again
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ilovepyaar

Chapter Fifteen
This chapter is rated mature, but not as mature as the last one. More on the slightly mature side - maybe rated R. Read at your own discretion.
okay okay... I know. I didn't review 15... it's bad. BUT BUT BUT! I AM NOW... and I am ready to be redder than a beet root! BRING IT ONNN!

When Sanyukta woke up that morning, Randhir wasn't in his bed. She got out of bed immediately and picked up her clothes from the ground before running into Randhir's shower. Her body felt sore.
woah. okay... he wasn't there. not good.

I'm in your shower ;),
she texted to Randhir before turning on the tap and stepping inside, drenching herself. She was hoping that he would join her because all she wanted to do was to get closer and closer to him. Last night felt ethereal, something she hadn't expected. She didn't think that she would have it so easy. She was prepared to work a lot harder to win back Randhir's love and trust.
Texting him that she's in the shower...😳 She wanting to get him with her! hahahah!
Okay... you made another alert... Prepared to work harder to win Randhir's love and trust... and getting it easy! hehehe! I like how you weaved in the foreshadowing! heheh! It's still not all good. lol, knowing what you wrote and knowing what Randhir is like, I know for sure that he's not going to give in... so yeah. not good.

She waited for fifteen minutes, but she didn't get a response from him so she sighed and wrapped Randhir's towel around her body.
No response... another flag. šŸ˜•

Stepping out of the bathroom, she made it to her own room before putting on a spaghetti-strapped summer dress that reached the middle of her thighs.

Walking downstairs, she saw the maid in the kitchen and asked for Randhir, but the maid told her that he had left the house in the morning itself. Frowning, she dialed his number, but it went straight to voicemail.
THE FACT THAT HIS NUMBER WENT STRAIGHT TO VOICEMAIL. ANOTHER FLAG... I think I am solving a puzzle... because all of these signs lead to one thing... Randhir isn't being entirely honest with her and his own feelings.

She sat in the living room and turned on the tv, feeling restless. Where could he possibly go on a Saturday morning?

A few hours later, she heard the door unlock, and she turned off the tv quickly, running towards the entrance.

"Randhir," she said, sighing with relief as he walked inside and took off his shoes. "Where were you?"

He brushed past her and walked to the living room before sitting on the couch. Sensing something was wrong, she followed him and sat on his lap, wrapping her arms around him and hugging him tightly.
He's trying to hint that something is not right... but she's too busy feeling lovey dovey! heheh!

"Sanyukta, what are you doing?" he asked her, sounding confused.

"Am I doing something wrong?" she asked, tightening her grip on him.

"The maid is at home," he whispered.

She felt herself blush and got off his lap before sitting right beside him.
"Let's go up then," she said, reaching out to hold his hand, but he removed it from his lap quickly and walked upstairs.
SEE! YOU ARE POSTING RED FLAGS ALL OVER THIS MASTERPIECE WHAT IS GOING ON.

Confused about what happened, she followed him upstairs, wondering if he had a problem with something. She wanted to be there for him if he did. She followed him to his room and locked the door behind them.

He sat down on the bed and Sanyukta walked up to him and sat on his lap, her arms circling his neck once again. She kissed him on the cheek.

"Is everything okay Randhir?" she asked, feeling his arms wrap around her body. She felt his head rest on her shoulder, and she rubbed his back gently.

"Sanyukta," he whispered, holding on to her more tightly. She could feel the emotion in his voice, and she suddenly feared that something bad happened.

"Randhir, what happened?" she urged, stroking his hair lovingly. "Please tell me."

He pulled back from the hug a bit and looked into her eyes, and Sanyukta could see fear in them.
I know what he's thinking... he's super confused about letting her back in. and then he also is like he wants revenge...but at the same time... he still loves her loads... so ... his inner turmoil is making him show fear... because not knowing is making him fearful.

"I need you," he told her desperately, "Please don't ever leave me."

She shook her head and placed her hand on his lips. "I'll never leave you," she whispered sincerely, "I promise."

Then it hit her that the reason that he was like this was because he had trust issues. It wouldn't be so easy to gain faith in her once again, even if he was trying. She had to make him believe.
HAHAHAHA! I knew it... he didn't know whether to trust Sanyu and bring her back in his life.

"Where were you this morning Randhir?" she asked him, cupping his cheek.

"I went for a drive," he said, looking away from her.

She nodded and kissed his forehead.

"We'll give the maid the day off for the rest of the day, okay Randhir?" she asked him. "I want to spend the day with you. I want to do everything for you myself. I want to cook for you."

He looked into her eyes as if he was searching for something, then ended up nodding.

"Good," she said, stroking his cheek. "Now, please smile."

He smiled at her and hugged her tightly once again. Her heart melted. She knew that it was hard for him to trust her, but she was determined to do everything that was in her power to regain that faith. She was wrong, and she was ready to pay for everything.

It is sad... she is really ready to make them two work out... and rd is just not sure...

She got up from his lap and was about to leave when he grabbed her wrist to stop her. Turning around, she noticed his eyes beg her to stay. Walking back to him, he tugged on her wrist, pulling her down on the bed on top of him.

"Randhir, that hurts," she gasped, feeling her body hurt from the soreness.

"What happened? Are you okay?" he asked her, sounding concerned.

HAHAHA! HER BODY HURTING! Naughty! hehehehe!

He tucked her hair behind her ear as she nodded. "I'm okay Randhir, just a little sore from last night."

The fact that he's so concerned... is a green light... tucking hair is green light!

At the mention of last night a cocky smile occupied his face. He turned the both of them over and kissed her on the lips fiercely. Slightly wincing in pain, she kissed him back with equal force, wanting to devote her whole being into making him happy.
I ...hmmm.. another thing. She feels that making him happy is one of the things that is what's going to make things okay... true. but not that kind of happy in that sense.

Pulling back he looked into her eyes. "You are only a little sore right... does it hurt a lot?" he questioned, raising his eyebrows.

She grabbed his shirt and pulled him back down on top of her, smirking. "Randhir Singh Shekhawat, don't make your Sanyukta wait in bed," she said giggling.

HAHAHAHAHAHA!šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰šŸ˜‰

Without saying a word, he attacked her neck with kisses, pulling the strap of her dress down and kissing her shoulders. He put the strap back up and looked into her eyes once again, seeming unconvinced.

"Are you sure?" he asked her.

Awww awww awww!

She nodded. "Yes Randhir!" she said, willing to sacrifice every bit of her own pain for him.

He smiled and tugged her dress up, bringing his face down to kiss her thighs. She grabbed his bedsheets tightly, feeling more pain than desire, but she didn't say a word, because she didn't want to be an obstacle for him anymore.

uh oh... not good. red flag... on Sanyu's part

When he entered her under her dress this time, she felt her eyes begin to tear up. It was very painful, but she took deep breaths and held him against her, the warmth of his body being the only source of comfort she needed. Sensing that something was wrong, Randhir stopped what he was doing and examined her face.

"Sanyukta," he said, shocked that she was crying. "What happened?"

"Don't pull out!" she warned.

Randhir looked at her with concern but hovered over her motionlessly.

"Please continue Randhir... if you love me you'll continue," she told him.

"For me or for you?" he asked her suspiciously. "I'm not going to do something you aren't okay with."

"For me dammit!" she yelled, holding him tightly. "Please Randhir, don't stop! I'm telling you myself that it's more than okay."

He hesitated for a few moments and then nodded before continuing. Soon he finished and collapsed on the bed beside her. He pulled her close to him, as she winced in pain again with the force of the pull, but she leaned into his chest, inhaled his scent and smiled.

She loved doing things for him, even if it was at her own expense. It gave her a strange sense of satisfaction.

Hmmm... I don't know... I still think... I don't know. We'll see!

"Sanyukta," Randhir asked her quietly, "You're okay right?"

"I can't be more okay than this," she whispered, meaning it.

She might not have felt okay physically, but mentally, she was more than okay.
Awh! That makes things better.

She kissed his neck before getting off him and fixing her dress. "I'll tell the maid that she has the rest of the day off," she told him with a smile. He nodded and kissed her hand before getting up with her and pulling his pants on.

She was glad that she could do something for him, and in her mind, she was starting to make up for all the pain that she had caused him all these years. She wouldn't tell him though, because if she did, it would only hurt him more, and she couldn't let him be hurt. No, she would pull him out of his darkness now, and not let him delve deeper into it.

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AW! I love the ending... she would pull him out of his darkness! that's so sweet... BUT BUT BUT. you posted so many red flags that I am scared yaar! heheh!
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Sorry my like button aint working..
As usual amazing chapter..
But in the end..Yeh kya hogaya?
Everything was completely fine..achanak se what happened?
I think Sanyu's words reminded RD abt sumthing
Update soon

Neha

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