Rehan!- A Scribbled Poem!

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had received a cue from farz_parachute, that scene when Rehan gifts that gajra to Sanam!
If you hate this, blame her, curse her via PM or scrap.😛 Juliet didn't wanna post! Honestly! But Oh Well! Farz has volunteered to take the blunt for this one.
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Rehan !

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

That only infinite circle

I never will out fall

To become your someone

Like you own my all

Searching my vacant vast

A token that is like you, pure

One string of that white garland

Binding to my heart, soul to endure

"Sanam Mein apake liye kuch laya hoon... Yeh Gajra!"

To my world, "You" denote its axis

Dancing a giggle, you hold and allure

Vacant doesn't seem empty any longer

Hope, mirth, faith, LOVE

...coiled and bestowed.

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me

Love,

Juliet!

(Red Treasure - The land of love.

Coiled and Bestowed - When Sanam coils the gajra in her braid..)

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i have no idea about this scene... 😕😆

but...

what i just read was BEAUTIFUL !!!!! ❤️😳




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Juliet...
I am so glad you posted this separately.

Share your talent with us, lady. Don't hide it.

This was so beautiful. Just perfect.

My heart bleeds for Rehan...

I know I keep saying this to you, but I honestly don't know how you do it. You are AMAZING!

Lotsa love, always
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bring it in sistah.


Imma get no hate mails.



I better not.



And Rehan. All he wants is to make her happy.



:')


#that proposal.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Juliet!!!

This was really very cute and lovely!!! 😊

Lovely piece of work!!! 👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG 😲

Why on earth do you think anyone would hate this?!

Only a crazy and stupid and idiotic person will.

My God ^^

This is just SO beautiful ❤️

Matlab you rendered me speechless (and there are very few can do this to me :P)

You're just a very very very beautiful writer.

That scene was...

And you took it to altogether another level!

Thank you Farz for sharing it with me. Of course you won't get hate mails for it 😆

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me


To become your someone

Like you own my all 👍🏼


To my world, "You" denote its axis 👏


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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was beautiful,
BTW hate is in vogue... Sanam ko Aahil se Nafrat hai...
Aahil ko Abhi sanam ke liye mohabbat se Nafrat hai...
Hamain billi ki nafrat for Aahil se mohabbat hai...
Isliye ki farak painda hai
..
Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

It was really good. Keep writing.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

That was beautiful,
BTW hate is in vogue... Sanam ko Aahil se Nafrat hai...
Aahil ko Abhi sanam ke liye mohabbat se Nafrat hai...
Hamain billi ki nafrat for Aahil se mohabbat hai...
Isliye ki farak painda hai
..
Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

It was really good. Keep writing.




Yeahhh mannn!!!


Hate indeed is the feeling of the hour!!!



And.



Juliet


Just so you know


I've got THREE.



Three love letters.



You're amazing. Say it.

Say- I Juliet, am amazing.


Say it. Now!

One more time.


Good.


Now write some more.


I'm sure two hours is up. ;) Yes. I keep track of time.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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First of all I really love your name! :) Juliet! Thats what your name is right? You're absolutely LOVE! <3
This piece was just gorgeous! So pure and heartfelt. I could tell this could only come from a heart which is full of many feelings. Your heart is an ocean of all this. Coz I think writing is the purest form of expressing one's feelings.
Okay, I am not from #TeamShehzadi, but then loving a beautiful piece like this doesn't require any obligation like that, does it? ;)
This was purely a marvelous piece, and I would be so glad if Farru keeps giving that little push like she did this time. Farru, you listening? ;) I don't care if its for Rehan, I LOVE YOUR WORK! A fan already! <3
I wish someone writes like this on Aahil :( 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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On the contrary, I think this is perfection. And thank you Farz for stimulating Juliet to give us this beautiful piece of writing. I may not be a big fan of Rehan but you simply made me feel his love. Succinct, simple and yet touchy. I love the tender vitality of this piece. :)
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