Rehan!- A Scribbled Poem! - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tamara27

Juliet...

I am so glad you posted this separately.

Share your talent with us, lady. Don't hide it.

This was so beautiful. Just perfect.

My heart bleeds for Rehan...

I know I keep saying this to you, but I honestly don't know how you do it. You are AMAZING!

Lotsa love, always

Tammy! Muaawwwh!
Love you! That's all!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Tammy! Muaawwwh!

Love you! That's all!


Love you, Mighty Mum 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: farz_parachute

Bring it in sistah.


Imma get no hate mails.



I better not.



And Rehan. All he wants is to make her happy.



:')


#that proposal.

Yes Rehan!
He was that still back waters with fierce under currents.
She was that boat!
Ok pathetic and for peevs... This would make a lot more sense..
But you know what I mean. He holds her in place, makes her travel pleasant.
Now you got to convince me this Aahil and I will write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Aishwarya--

Hey Juliet!!!


This was really very cute and lovely!!! 😊

Lovely piece of work!!! 👏


Thanks for all the encouragement.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: SabrinaMalik

OMG 😲


Why on earth do you think anyone would hate this?!

Only a crazy and stupid and idiotic person will.

My God ^^

This is just SO beautiful ❤️

Matlab you rendered me speechless (and there are very few can do this to me :P)

You're just a very very very beautiful writer.

That scene was...

And you took it to altogether another level!

Thank you Farz for sharing it with me. Of course you won't get hate mails for it 😆

If wishes were horses

Mine just galloped free

Unveil a land of red treasure

Where you belong to me


To become your someone

Like you own my all 👍🏼


To my world, "You" denote its axis 👏


Thank you! Thank you!
Gushing! Blushing! Jumping! Happy Dancing!
Feels like QH1 days again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: gossipgirlxoxo

That was beautiful,

BTW hate is in vogue... Sanam ko Aahil se Nafrat hai...
Aahil ko Abhi sanam ke liye mohabbat se Nafrat hai...
Hamain billi ki nafrat for Aahil se mohabbat hai...
Isliye ki farak painda hai
..
Banke Gajra Tere Balon May Bikhar Jaaon Main
Misl Kajal Teri Aankhon May Sanwar Jaaon Main

It was really good. Keep writing.

YOU WROTE THAT!
That is so good deep sting!
Hate! An avalanched emotion!
Iss Pyar ko! Did me good in a very bad way!
From what I hear please make it go there again.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: farz_parachute




Yeahhh mannn!!!


Hate indeed is the feeling of the hour!!!



And.



Juliet


Just so you know


I've got THREE.



Three love letters.



You're amazing. Say it.

Say- I Juliet, am amazing.


Say it. Now!

One more time.


Good.


Now write some more.


I'm sure two hours is up. ;) Yes. I keep track of time.

I will write...Sell me Aahil!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Perfectionist2

Yes Rehan!

He was that still back waters with fierce under currents.
She was that boat!
Ok pathetic and for peevs... This would make a lot more sense..
But you know what I mean. He holds her in place, makes her travel pleasant.
Now you got to convince me this Aahil and I will write more.


Sorry, I can't convince you with Aahil. Not right now, anyway.

I want more from him. I expect more... and when I get my more, then only can I give you something.

Maybe tonight... although I do think he's just going to pi** me off even more. His one line cracked my heart open... but I need to see how we got there first.

For now, Rehan is the all deserving. And he may continue to be for quite some time.

Await the rant at about 23h00 CAT 😆

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