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Wonderful story. Update soon 😊
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Chapter 3

Scene 1

Kalpi woke up and stretch she turns to her left and saw Raghav still sleeping. Smiling she remembers what happened last night, she blushes and got up going to the bathroom, when she came back out she grabs Raghav shirt and walks down stairs to make breakfast.

Raghav woke up to the smell of something cooking. He turns around and saw his wife gone. Smiling to himself he went to the bathroom and took a shower, once done he wore his suit and head downstairs. He walks to the kitchen and was very amuse.

In the kitchen was kalpi making breakfast in his shirt, her hair down and still wet from the shower and not only that she had the radio on dancing to the tune. Quietly he walks behind her and puts his arms around her, and his head on her shoulder smelling her hair. Kalpi was surprise but soon relax.

"Good morning Raghav." She says

"Morning" He says back

"Come, you have to eat before you leave for work."

"Seeing you like this makes me wanna stay home" he says putting his hand on her stomach

Kalpi blush and turns around, making her hair hit his face. "You can't stay home, you have to work." She says

"I can just work at home." He says making kalpi shook her head. She was about to grab his food when the spoon she put on the plate fell on the floor, not realizing her action, she picked it up, when she did that Raghav shirt came up. Raghav seeing this took of his tie, and unbutton two of his buttons. When kalpi got back up he came to her and picks her up surprising her.

"Raghav what are you doing?" she says with the spoon in her hand

"I'm canceling work today, my wife needs my attention." He says taking her up the stairs to there room.

Panicking she says "Raghav we cant, you have work, you've missed so many work days." She says

"Sammy can fill in for me." He says before shutting her up with his mouth and then closing the door

Scene 2

Vitthal was in the balcony, thinking about kalpi when kamla sat next to him.

"How can you let this happen?" she says "how will she fulfill our dreams now?" she says to vitthal

"Kamla you have to let it go, our dream doesn't matter now, our daughter is happy that all that matters." He says

"No, she will not live happily. Raghav is bad luck." She says

"Raghav is a good person kamla, you've seen it yourself."

"No he broke paki heart, he's no good" she says

"Kamla you need to get it thru your head, kalpi is not our daughter, she's someone else." He says

"She's like a daughter to me vitthal; I can't see her in pain." She says

"Kalpi knows I only did it so she can be strong. "She says

"Look if I hear you say paki's name in this house, I will kick you out of this house and you can go live with paki." He says shocking kamla

Vitthal left her there on the balcony while he grabs his stuff to go to the temple.

Scene 3

Paki was in her house crying, her mascara running down her face. Her mother knocks on the door but she wouldn't open. Her dad was worried and so was her grandmother. Paki was hugging the picture of Raghav close to her heart, she was sad and heart broken.

"He was supposed to marry me." She says "how can kalpi take the man I love away from me?" she says getting of the bed.

"I mean how Raghav can choose her over me. I'm prettier and rich."

She walks towards her pictures and saw kalpi pictures there too; mad she took her scissors and cut her face removing any signs of her being in the picture. Then she saw her mirror and how messy she looks, taking her perfume bottle she throws it at the mirror letting the glass crack and pieces falling off.

Watching the glass fall she says "this is how I'm feeling inside Raghav, you shattered my heart into pieces, and I don't think anyone can fix it back except you." She says she saw a piece of glass and took it; there she cut herself, letting the blood drop on the floor. She took her blood and put it on her hairline, than she looks at herself in the mirror

"See Raghav now we can be together, I am now Mrs. Pakhi Singhania, just wait for me we will be together." She says

Neetu hearing something broke, starts yelling her name, knocking on her door so she can open. When she didn't she kept pushing the door to open it, sahil and the others came to her to help her open the door, when it still wouldn't open they look at one another. Suddenly the door opens and paki walks out, her hair messy, her mascara mark on her face and cheeks, she was still wearing her wedding dress and they saw what looks like a sindoor on her hairline, when she started walking they saw blood dripping from her wrist. Everyone was shock and worried.

"Paki let me help you, your wrist is bleeding." Says Neetu but paki ignored her, sahil and the rest of the family walks with her to the kitchen, they tried to help her with her wrist but she refuses.

"I want to feel this pain; this blood is what links me and Raghav together." She says than showing her forehead. Everyone was tense at what she said.

She went in the kitchen and grabs some apples. Then she peels it and starts cutting it, everyone scared that she might cut herself again.

"Kalpi took everything from me." She says while cutting the apples

"Now I will take everything she has, I don't care how I do it, as long as she disappears." She says slamming the knife inside the apple harshly.

"Even if I have to kill her, to get my husband back I will." She says slamming the knife down. Everyone was holding there breath when the knife almost cut her finger but when it didn't they all relax but tense at what she said.

chapter 4

To be continued...



Edited by angelk1 - 11 years ago
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OMG ..🐷 she turned into psycho completely ...update soon Waiting know What next
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THQ 2 u anglek sine 4m 2 days I'm searching 4 this
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Good chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Please continue with it.
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awesome update...pls update asap...😳
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Sheman is full on Psycho... Continue soon
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oh god she completely turned to psycho🤢 ..
love ur writings😊 ..
plz continue soon ..
plz pm me when u update ur writings😊
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Chapter 4


Scene 1


Raghav and kalpi woke up the next day feeling good. kalpi getting up to take a shower wraps the blanket around herself. raghav leans back and says " why are you hiding kalpi, its nothing i haven't seen before" he says winking 😉 she turns around and blush ☺️ then she says " even though you've seen everything i still have my dignity." she says then said

" besides if i walk around without the blanket you will never let me leave this room." she says making raghav smirk. he got up and walks towards her than he wraps his arms around her and says " your right, but i cant help it i love you so much." he says making kalpi keep her guard down. as soon as she turns around and puts her arms around him for a kiss. he took the blanket off. making her use her hands to cover herself.

" Raghav" she says😳 " give it back right now." she says making him raise the blanket higher above his head.

" if you want it, you gonna have to come get it." he says making kalpi walk towards him, trying to get the blanket back. raghav move closer to the bed and kalpi moves closer to him, forgetting her modesty. she rich up trying to grab the blanket only for her to slip and fall bringing raghav along with her. they both fell on the bed with kalpi on top of him and raghav arms wrapped around her waist.

they both look at each other forgetting about their little problem. the song tum hi ho started playing. raghav smiles and says " i never knew you like taking control kalpi" ruining the moment they had and making kalpi blush☺️. she was about to get up when raghav flip her over surprising her a little. then after words he kissed her passionately.




Scene 2

paki was making food for raghav, she couldn't wait to see the look on his face when he sees what she made for him. while cooking neetu walks in the kitchen. she looks at the foods her daughter was making and was about to take one when paki points the knife at her saying " do not touch something that doesn't belong to you."

" if its not for us then who is this for?" she says making paki smile

" this is for my husband raghav" she says making neetu laugh

" have you gone crazy paki, raghav is not your husband he's married to kalpi." she says making paki angry😡. she slams the knife on the cutting board and says " me and raghav are married, in our relationship there is no kalpi. she doesnt exist."

neetu shook her head and grabs an apple. then she left the kitchen, while leaving sahil came to her and asks her how paki was doing she says " our daughter is crazy🤪, i don't know which side of your family she got it from." she says before leaving

sahil looks at the kitchen where paki was he could see how happy she was making food and wrapping it up. this is all my fault, why of all the people she had to fall in love with raghav. this must be a punishment for killing his dad. he thought then says " don't sacrifice my daughters humanity because of my sin, please let her go back to the way she was. i'll do anything" he says


paki gather the lunch box and head out to raghav office. when she reached there sammy saw her. he walks to her and says " pakhi? what are you doing here"

" i came to bring raghav lunch." she says smiling 😊

" why? did raghav asks you too?"

" well no, cant i bring lunch for my husband." she says making sammy confuse

" i thought kalpi was married to raghav not you." he says

" no , turns out their marriage was fake. so raghav came to me and married me." she says

" oh.. well raghav is not here but i'll be glad to give him the food." he says making her smile

" you do that sammy, make sure he eats everything" she says before leaving

sammy watches her leave and then calls raghav who was busy tending to kalpi. when he didn't answer, sammy calls again this time he answers " hello?"

" raghav, this is sammy." he says

" what is it sammy i'm very busy" he says sammy could hear kalpi in the background and smirks knowing exactly what is going on. " hello sammy?" he says snapping him out of his day dream.

" oh yah, paki came to the office and brought you some food for lunch" he says

" throw it away, i don't want it." he says

sammy was about to tell him about what she said when raghav hang up the phone on him.


Scene 3

later on that day, kalpi finally was able to leave the room. she went to the bathroom to take a shower, while raghav put some clothes on. just when he was about to grab his phone, it rang. he picks it up and says " hello?"

" hello raghav" says paki

" yes paki, what is it?" he says

" did you eat my lunch i bought you?" she asks

" no, i didn't come to the office today." he says making her disappointed

" well, i will just make you some later on for dinner." she says

" no no its fine paki. kalpi will make me something to eat later on" he says making paki squeeze the phone.

" ok dear, i'll come and visit tomorrow." she says before raghav could tell her no.

he hand up and was about to downstairs he got a text message. he opens it and looks at it. he was surprise and mad, their on the message were naked pictures of paki on the bed with what looks like a sindoor and blood was coming from her wrist. he quickly deletes it so kalpi wont have to worry. after they were all deleted he close his phone shock at what he just saw and tense because he was confuse.


To be continue...

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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG Raghav shocked?? I was super shocked!!!!!!!😲
Pakhi has crossed the limit of psyhcogiri now she srsly needs an asylum!!!

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