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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Okai firstly happy belated birthday to both u gals may u have a great year ahead.

Coming to the story .. so sorry sans for being late.. but as u knw I lost interest from d3 completely some time back.. but oh well after Reading This na chahte hoye b I git Reminded of the D3 we all loved and the magical swaron I use to die for... interesting title btw 'ps.i hate you' ooper ser ur comedy moments are just beyond perfect man 'machar se yud main haar gya' :v hilarious .. I purely loved Sharon throughout unlike these days in D3 she was proper in her real character not lik giw ameeta made her so f**king confusing and all goodie -_-

Awesome stuff

P.s. ammie loves sans :* ;)

Edited by AJ.morgan - 11 years ago

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prakriti mondal

@prakriti4u

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

I already told u how much I loved it!
actually I love whatever u write by default!
I dunno somehow ur write ups are always so different so fresh so new and so bloody entertaining!
I love how u keep the essence of the characters intact! love how u use the gang to make the story entertaining! nd love the comic lines u input! like " tu ek macchar se
yudh mein haar gaya" " tum
swayam ki raksha nahi kar
sakte the" lol freaking hilarious 😆 and so creative 👏 Keep writting such awesome stuff *Proud GF* 😎

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: AJ.morgan
Okai firstly happy belated birthday to both u gals may u have a great year ahead.
Coming to the story .. so sorry sans for being late.. but as u knw I lost interest from d3 completely some time back.. but oh well after Reading This na chahte hoye b I git Reminded of the D3 we all loved and the magical swaron I use to die for... interesting title btw 'ps.i hate you' ooper ser ur comedy moments are just beyond perfect man 'machar se yud main haar gya' :v hilarious .. I purely loved Sharon throughout unlike these days in D3 she was proper in her real character not lik giw ameeta made her so f**king confusing and all goodie -_-

Awesome stuff
P.s. ammie loves sans :* ;)

thank you :* ps- me loves u too 😆

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sanskruti marathe

@Sanskruti_tanha

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: prakriti4u
I already told u how much I loved it!
actually I love whatever u write by default!
I dunno somehow ur write ups are always so different so fresh so new and so bloody entertaining!
I love how u keep the essence of the characters intact! love how u use the gang to make the story entertaining! nd love the comic lines u input! like " tu ek macchar se
yudh mein haar gaya" " tum
swayam ki raksha nahi kar
sakte the" lol freaking hilarious 😆 and so creative 👏 Keep writting such awesome stuff *Proud GF* 😎

thanks means alot 😳

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Sehr_VruShan

@Sehr_VruShan

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Doll you again rock baby ⭐️
I loved it so much though I don't understand some shudh hindi words but I really loved it. Amazing concept and very well written👏👏
Nil and Vicky's masti was seriously hilarious
ans what to say about Swayam and Sharon
This reminds me of Palki Ma'am 😭
They way to protrayed love and hatetred of Sharon was seriously MAGICAL!! 😳
You are such and amazing and creative writer 👍🏼
Keep writing
Love you 🤗

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Muskan Verma

@Muskan_SwaRon

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

As usual, it was fab and so cute OS.
Idk y but the title made me laugh 😆
Swayam ko malaria 😒 I loved how you showed Sharon's concern for Swayam. I have always loved seeing such scenes and reading too 😳 Nil and Vicky's masti was too good 😆 I loved it 🤗

I hope you will continue 🤓
Me loves you 🤗