One Shot - Controlled. - Page 5

Originally posted by: --Akshu--

I liked it Adi I really like such OS
I loved the meaning of it the concept behind it
So write more plz
Sorry for short comment 😆

Originally posted by: lovely7010

😳

Why do you write such stuff?? Next time se warn be the genre before. Tab hi mein padhungi...you know a I don't like aise stories...now my mood is kharab...write something happy and make me happy. And kripya karke apne stories ki length ko badhaye...


By the way this was nice...emotional and tragedic tha...

Originally posted by: SEETHA.K

My dear friend ...me seetha , a compassionate reader and an occasional writer ---love the way you expressed the pathos of a wounded woman's heart felt feelings and pain . The narration is really very good ...but ...but it seems you have given an abrupt end to a wide range of feelings ?! It seems ...what I want to say is ...yes longing to read more good and meaningful expressions from you !!!

Originally posted by: shalini_arsha

that's beautifulll aditi... :) u expressed her emotions beautifullly... :) :* i m jzt totally in lov wid this.. :D

Originally posted by: -RKV-

Such a beautiful OS (: I loved it you're an immensily talantef yert creative writer

Originally posted by: tinatartari

Awesome..quick nd cute bt sad..

Originally posted by: ARandKJFan

Res :3

Oh, I didn't unres. 😆 Yes you didn't😆

I actually even read it only now. 😆 Brilliant you is! It is brilliant maasi, it really is. Really? :') The emotions are expressed beautifully. And the girl, reminds me of myself to some extent. I fell you niece😆 Also, I love how you've added a tinge of reality, how the society always favors the one who seems broken.Society is a bitch -_- But this was amazing maasi. You have a way with words. Awie, thank you. Seriously after Shona its you after whom I am gonna run for comment ab, you better be honest about my works😆 Humari family mein sab itna accha likthe hai, Naani, you, Adii, Maa, Maasis, Bhabhi, cousins, sab ke sab. 😆 Yahan tak ke step mom aur pati bhi 😆 Seriously, talented family hai xD I know, right?😆

But seriously, I loved it <3 And I love you maasii :') Me too niece :') ❤️

Love,

your favorite niece 🤗