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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: Dewdrops.ShaKun
it was short but yet... it was touching...
i loved every bit of it...

perfectly described... <3 <3

Thank you dear😊

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: NEAK.KAJEN
Beautiful Just Beautiful! Its Saddening OS but the way you have describe the situation is Surreal! Update another too!

Ah I am flattered reading that😆 Thank you so much!

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: Thats.me.Guni
Amazing os. Deep feelings...
If writing more such brilliant stuff brings back ur touch, then u shud surely write max no.of stories dat u can cz i wud luv to read more of ur write-ups.
Gr8 job done.

Thank you dear. Sure, I am all set to write more stories😆

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

Sparkler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: akankshaArsha
GALLERY BANA DE ADI... Bola na thodi der ruk🤣
nd i forgot to ask...shenz ke review honest...u mean to say maine jhoot bola...???...haaawww...dekh li teri dosti Chup kar, Drama Queen. maine bola Shenz di se kuch seekh ke kaise pata kare kya accha hai kya bura🤣

Nautanki Queen mai hun, meri jagah lene ki koi zaroorat nae hai.

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: PrOjeCtA
Wonderful os!
Love d way u hav described hr emotiins. Beautiful

Thank you dear😊

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Hera Flames

@Flame.Of.Rose

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: trishikarajput0
nice os...

really love the presentation...

love it

thanx for pm

Thanks a lot.😊

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akshara

@--Akshu--

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

I liked it Adi I really like such OS
I loved the meaning of it the concept behind it
So write more plz
Sorry for short comment 😆

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Maneet

@moon_cupcake

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

😳

Why do you write such stuff?? Next time se warn be the genre before. Tab hi mein padhungi...you know a I don't like aise stories...now my mood is kharab...write something happy and make me happy. And kripya karke apne stories ki length ko badhaye...

By the way this was nice...emotional and tragedic tha...

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seetha74

@seetha74

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Flame.Of.Rose
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My dear friend ...me seetha , a compassionate reader and an occasional writer ---love the way you expressed the pathos of a wounded woman's heart felt feelings and pain . The narration is really very good ...but ...but it seems you have given an abrupt end to a wide range of feelings ?! It seems ...what I want to say is ...yes longing to read more good and meaningful expressions from you !!!