New SwaRon OS: Flaws [Last Part - Page 3 Updt 7/1/14]

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jiya

@act12

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: shantanuswayam
Amazing...
I want to know the reason behind swayam's behaviour...
Plzzz update soon...

Thank you. I hope the next part cleared out everything for you. Hoping that you like that one too. Thanks for the comment.

Originally posted by: medhasarkar
cool

Thank you!

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@Slayerkajal

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Awesome update ...
Loved it..
Loved the part when they were at the park...
Their convo and sharon's statements about what he should do or what she did or what everyone should do when they r in that situation was really amazing...
Do write more...

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Ankita

@cutepiesiya

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

flawless ur story 2nd last para taught me lesson first love not be ur last...learn frm this which helps in future...

thnx alot sooo sooouch

beautiful n awesome wid mindblowing moral...

love u...

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prateek

@prateek.007

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Hey Jiya,

Honestly it is very first time that i am reading ur work..As i never get any chance to read..But actually i heard a lot about ur writing from my old IF buddies..And now i am pretty much sure that my friends were so true..U have such a different n magnificent way of writing..I remember i had read ur one one shot before,And now it is amazing..Loved the way u adjusted such a cool plot according to ur imagination..I literally found so many wonders to read SwaRon here..Perfectly done with the characterization here..The os was quite simple but a mixed combo of emotional n painfull touch..And trust me,this is a huge impact on the particular reader,like me..So everything was beautifully conveyed including moral of the story..And also i commend ur way to write statements..Beautifull dialouge delivery here..So in all,Great done

Now i hope that i will get ur PM whenever u think to explore something with pen n paper..And yeah if possible then please provide me link to ur other works as i remember u had one FF,which is most popular..