AbhiGya FF: Badasurata saundarya

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Summary: abhi a popular rock star came back to india after so long. his grandma deciding abhi needs to settle down went to a match maker and they match him up with pragya. pragya family made sure she was isolated from the world, because of her childhood. she was always home school and was very educated. anyone that would see her would insult her calling her ugly. abhi thinking pragya was Bulbul agree to the marriage. after the wedding took place he was gonna lift her veil but her mother told him he cant, because its tradition, that the groom will not see the bride until their in the bedroom. making abhi smile. abhi will soon come to learn that he got the wrong picture. how will abhi react to pragya? how will tanu react to abhi marriage? and what will daadi do? come and find out in Badasurata Saundarya



Prologue

Abhi was on the plane talking to Daadi. she was happy that he was coming back after so long. she hasn't seen him since he graduated high school, even then he was always popular. she remembered when abhi won the cricket game, the first person he shout out to was her. taking of his hamlet and running to her screaming " we won Daadi-ma! we won!"
she remembered how happy he was showing the trophy and picking her up spinning her around. smiling she looks at abhi still talking to her about his music.

" Daadi, you should have seen it, i was so amazed to see so many people at my concert." he says

" Abhi" she says cutting him off and getting his attention

" yes Daadi" he says

" have you thought about settling down?" she asks making abhi uncomfortable

" i can't settle down, my career just begin" he says

" abhi please, your twenty-six now, its about time you find a good wife." she says

Abhi signs and look at his grandma, she looked so helpless and fragile. he wasnt ready for marriage but seeing his grandma pleading face and fragile body he decides to give in.

" fine Daadi-maa, i will get married." he says making her happy

" i'm so happy abhi, i will make sure i pick a bride that won't care about your money and will take care of you, just like me" she says

" i trust your judgment, Daadi-maa, and i hope to see you soon" he says before ending the chat. he thought about his decision and run his hand thru his hair. he remembered his ex-girlfriend tanu, breaking their relationship off for the fifth time. this was no exceptional, he had told her to come with him but she refuse. so without contacting her he left for india.

" i can never understand the opposite sex, one minute they want you the next they don't. but then they get jealous when you move on." he says making the old man sitting next to him look at him funny. he turns to look at the old man and says " don't you think so Dadaji"

when he nod his head abhi smiles and puts his arms around him saying " i like you already, Dadaji."

" females have too much problem, thats why when my grand kids ask me questions or my wife, i just drink some alcohol and say some gibberish." he says, then said " making them leave me alone."

abhi laughs and says " you know what Dadaji, i should take your advice." he says

" you drink whisky?" he asks

" of course i do, i wish i had some right now." he says

" well, today is your lucky day. because i have some now." he says to abhi making him surprise

" can we really drink that here?" he asks

" of course i've been doing it for years." he says making abhi smile. the old man calls one of the flight attendant. when she came he asks for two cups. once she gave him the cups he gave one to abhi and opens the beer pouring a little bit for himself and abh. they both drank it all and talk about stuff until the plane landed. once they got out abhi says goodbye to his new friend and walks outside, looking for his limo. as soon as he step out fans crowded him, some had banners others had cameras taking his picture. the reporters were recording him asking him questions about his life.

To be continued...



I'm planning on putting a song for this story, once i know how to add music on here. but if you do know, can you tell me because i really want to upload some videos and music on here.



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Yanci, nice to see you here! Story looks great, good start! I'm interested to see how Pragya reacts to Abhi and vice versa. Love the character of Dadaji, very suitable 😆

Story seems familiar, what all were you inspired by?

To add music you could add a link to Youtube. To add a Youtube video, copy the embed code under the 'share' menu on the video's youtube page.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow..Simply Beautiful.. 👏 👏.. Do continue.. 😃 Eagerly waiting..
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Beautiful!!! Thank you! Waiting for more 😃!!!!!




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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice prologue
Plz continue soon and pm me.
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what do you mean mina? this was based on my creativity and besides this is just the prologue. you haven't seen my full potential yet 😊 and the only fanfiction i read on here for kumkum was yours with abhi and pragya coming to mutual understanding. you should continue that one still. because i wanted to see everyone reaction to abhi and pragya holding hands and tanu thought towards their mutual understanding.
Also i want to add a playlist here but could you go in detail like you did for me before so i'll know how to post the song.😊


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Originally posted by: angelk1

what do you mean mina? this was based on my creativity and besides this is just the prologue. you haven't seen my full potential yet 😊 and the only fanfiction i read on here for kumkum was yours with abhi and pragya coming to mutual understanding. you should continue that one still. because i wanted to see everyone reaction to abhi and pragya holding hands and tanu thought towards their mutual understanding.

Also i want to add a playlist here but could you go in detail like you did for me before so i'll know how to post the song.😊




Well then you are very creative 👍🏼 Thanks for your comments, I'm still thinking about how I can add to that story. You should check out some of the other AbhiGya stories, they're all quite good - the links are on the first page of the AbhiGya Appreciation Thread. I'm sorry I've never posted a song so I don't know any more detail!

Hoping to see the next part of this soon! 😊
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Thanks Mina and i'll check it out once i've finished updating all my stories.
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Part 1

Pragya was in her room reading her book when Bulbul walks in.

" Didi" she says stretching out the word, pragya puts her book down and says " what is it Bulbul?"

" i need a favor from you" she says sitting on the bed and looking at her.

" what kind of favor?" she asks making bulbul smile

" you see, my boss assign me to hold a festival for the foreigners, who came to sign a contract with his company. but before they can do that, they requested that we show them how wonderful india is." she says

" so what does that have to do with me?" she asks

" well" she says laughing a little " i was hoping you open the show, by singing" she says

pragya looks at her sister and says no, making bulbul plead some more.

" i can't bulbul, i've been in this house for ten years, i can't break the tradition i have started." she says

" come on didi you have an amazing voice, its about time you come out of that shell." she says, then gets of the bed and get on her knees begging her sister to do it.

" PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!" she says

pragya looks at her sister, then signs and nods her head. making bulbul hugs her happily while saying thank you. once she was done she left the room. while leaving sarla appeared in front of her. " so did she agree?" she asks

bulbul pretends to be sad but then she change her facial expression and happily says " she said "YES!!!" making sarla smile.




Elsewhere, fans and reporter surrounds Abhi asking him questions. abhi took some pictures and when he saw his car appear he went inside. fans were still going crazy even when the driver drove away, they still kept screaming how much they love him.

" that was crazy" he says while putting his seat belt on

" welcome back my friend" says Purab

" thanks, you know you should have came with me to london." he says

" you know i had to take over my fathers business." he says

" yah well, you're still my manager you have to book my concert." he says

" of course, so how was london?" he asks

" amazing, the crowd was huge and everyone loved me." he says making purab smile

" thats good" he says, Abhi looks at purab and started remembering the good times.

" what?" says purab

" how is your relationship with Aaliya?" he says making purab uncomfortable

" we came to a mutual agreement, and decided that our relationship wasnt working out." he says surprising abhi

" you guys were so in love." he says

" i know, what about you and tanu. i heard she followed you to london." he says

" well our relationship is rocky, i ask her to come with me to india but she refuses." he says sadly

" i'm sorry Abhi, i'm sure she has her reason." he says

they both talk and catched up on what they missed. when they arrive at Abhi place Daadi did the ceremony, welcoming him. Abhi hugs her and then he went and hug his sister. he was about to go to his room, when Taiji asks if he brought them any gift from london. he looks at her and says " there's no need to buy gifts when you can use my money all you like." he says upsetting her.

he walks to his room and puts his bag on the bed. just when he was taking his shirt off, daadi walks in. he puts his shirt back down and went to her. then he hugs her again " i've missed you so much Daadi-ma." he says making her smile

" you must be tiered Abhi" she says

" no, i want to see how much this place has changed." he says

" thats good" she says , abhi moves away from her and walks to his bag, then he took out a beautiful saree and jewellery. he walks to his grandma and gives her the gift.

" this was the first thing i saw in london, and it made me think of you." he says making daadi smiles

" thank you abhi, but i have so many things already, i don't think i can take this." she says

" please keep it Daadi, it will make me happy" he says

" fine" she says, just when abhi was gonna ask her something, purab walks in and informs abhi about the festival and how its starting soon. daadi left the room and abhi changed and got dress, after he was done they left the house.



Meanwhile, pragya was backstage, she didn't know what to do or where to begin. she was surprise when she step out of the house, and found her trauma gone, she wasnt scared of stepping outside anymore and facing other people. Bulbul watching her asks the makeup crew to get her ready. they went to pragya and took her to the dressing room. their they started dressing her, after words they put makeup on her. when they were done, they turned her around to look at herself. pragya gasp when she saw she turns to look at the girls and says " is that really me?"

" yes you're very pretty" one of the girls said

" yeah very beautiful" says another

"your gonna grab everyones attention" says bulbul walking in

" thank you everyone" she says then said " i'll make sure i try my best on stage"

" thats good, because we're about to start." she says



Elsewhere, abhi and purab came to the festival. they could see a large crowd around the stage. they walk their, waiting for the show to start. purab excuse himself and leaves to go and talk with the foreigners. once he was gone abhi walks to the front, he sat down and waited. a guy came on stage and started talking about india tradition and culture, after words the curtains open. some people started whispering while the guys whistle.
abhi was surprise to see a beautiful girl on stage. she was standing there looking nervous.
i know how this is gonna turn out. he thought shes gonna get so nervous that she either runs of the stage or make a fool of herself. he thought, he was about to leave when the music started playing and she said the first verse. he turns back around surprise, then says to himself " i guess i will stay to hear the rest." he said before sitting down

Oh, Oh, Oh, Oh
pragya ran to the front of the stage then ran to the other side. getting everyones attention.

sach main kahati huun yaar, ho jaayega re pyaar

she rock her body side to side while moving her hands.

tu mujhko aazmaake dekhna,
kisi Indian se dil lagaake dekhna

then she points to the crowd smiling.

ek baar to India aake dekhna
kisi Indian se dil lagaake dekhna

she fell on the floor in a sitting position with one foot standing and one of her hand on it. she smiles flirtatiously and turns her head to the side then she looks straight. abhi managed to catch her eyes. they both stare at each other but then she got up and continue dancing and singing.

hai Taj Mahaal India mein hai qutub minaar India mein,
chaandni chauk india mein mausam ki bahaar India mein

the background change showing what she was talking about, this impressed the foreigners.

Laila Majnuun India mein soni mahiwaal India mein,
betaab hai dil India mein badmast khayaal India mein

she continues rocking her body side to side while the dancers appeared in the back ground. wearing traditional indian outfit.


kho jaayega qaraar ho jaayega re pyaar...
tu mujhko aazmaake dekhna

they continued to dance


ek baar to India aake dekhna
kisi Indian se dil lagaake dekhna

she danced with the dancers while they repeat the song.

ghungru paayal India mein man ka sangit India mein,
ganga jamuna India mein chaahat ke git India mein

after words the dancers ran of the stage and new dancers appear.

bhangra garba India mein masti ka khumaar India mein,

faagun ke gulaab India mein saare tyohaar India mein,
kar mera etbaar ho jaayega re pyaar...


she continues to dance and when she spins her body she accidentally slip falling of the stage and landing on abhi lap. the crowd gasp and bulbul was worried. the foreigners on the other hand thought that it was part of the show. abhi and pragya stare at each other and the song Raabta started playing.

To be continue...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for the pm

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