UNPREDICTABLE LUV #2 (closed) new link added- pg-1 - Page 60

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

bacho thand rakho😆

ker rhi hu

Originally posted by: ruthshalini

its hot here😉

Originally posted by: aisha...11110

tabhi toh keh rhi hu thand rakh bass ho he gya

Originally posted by: arpita1226

Yaar how much time more

Originally posted by: SARA4444

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Originally posted by: rima4ever

outstanding update

Originally posted by: rima4ever

thanks for the pm

What a mind blowing beginning... I am seriously speechless... What an update... I read this chapter... about weak ago... but still I feel I just read it... I still remember many beautiful moment of the updates... The way receive letter... and the best part she wake up right on time... just five min before the her special day

Love how he told her to come up and said there is no need to mention his name... touched my heart... I knew he is going to something special. I pictured Jodha... How she would have run without shoes in excitement... entire porch decorated with roses... aww... this Jalal is way too romantic... It was her birthday... and that day was very tuff day for her... she needed to cry out to get over the past... poor Jalal... He must be feeling vulnerable to make her cry on her birthday... When she screamed out loud with her pain and tears my heart cried ... What a mind blowing writing aishu... U deserve clap for that para... What a intense painful scene... What she has gone through ... remembering everything and blurted out with tears... thank god for that... I love how he answers her...and try to make her understand what happen was destiny not her... Poor Jo got unconscious... but glad that is normal.

Finally fun time... Jodha sweetly open chocolate box... and Mirza surprise with this cheap gift..hehehe ... Jalal knows is Jodha ... she wants love...she looks happiness in little sutff... (baby elephant ) heheheh than a necklace ...vow... he know what girls loves... I love how she got shocked with each gift...and when she screamed... mirza was so confuse with her behavior ... and cute little veer... really very cute... gift.. he so thoughtful and he knows what she love... what reaction she will have seeing each gift...

U don't miss anything... vow... I love clarification between santaram ... ek hi din me Jalal ne kya kuch nahi kiya Jo ke liye... vow... he gave her memories back... her photos... superb... yaar... I have no words left...

I love how he took away her tears... and they got disturb... oooppps... Abhi vo ladki ko aana tha... kya naam hai any way Jalal ki sis...

Hamida ne to bas usko apni bahu maan hi liya hai...purkho ka haar de rahi hai...vow... but good she didn't took this expensive gift... and Jalal understood it too...

He took her to her parent house... yaar yeh Jalal ne kitna kuch kiya vow... and dress... aur uspe itne sare compliments... Jodha to bichari mar hi gayi... besharam ladki kitana Sharma rahi thi...heheh

Vow... birthday party... What a surprise... and the way he said... I love U... I was like what... he finally did it... amazing... the way Jodha was doing dance... she is really cute...

Finally he propose her for marriage... I was really lost in them... While writing I realized I still remember most of the part of the chapter... How can I forget about their precious kiss... Jodha has to do some drama... I love their first kiss... gooses bumps...

U R mind blowing writer... U can write about romance... comedy... love... emotion... and everthing... Keep writing ...and sorry for late comment... mafi dedo baba...

Originally posted by: shahbhavini

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