21st Sep Update!!by ME{need suggestions}

THE CHARACTER OF SIMONE WILL BE PLAYED BY BARKHA..

Josh, Prithvi and Simone reache that place where a woman take their "arti." After a few seconds later angad and kripa enter and that lady also takes their arti. Angad and kripa are shown stitting where kripa offers people to have some coffee but simon does not want to have .and prithvi came with the manegar in a upset mood.. the maneger said that "is show ki population to bohot achi horahi hai thanks to angad kripa.. so we decided to arrange angad and kripa's performance both the dayz..and josh iz not gonna perform in the show as we know that josh iz a international performer but ppl wanna watch angad and kripa together.. Angad gets angry and said that he will not perform in the show.. then josh sayz that its ok angad and coolz him down then he realize and gets ready to perform..

At rehersel hall.. angad and kripa talkin and the choreographer(forgot the spelling) came and said its ok but put more confidence in the performance then angad and kripa reherse on the same title song "Andekhi anjani kia yeh mohabbat hai" then josh suddenly wantz to talk to the chreographer and he said sumthing in his ear.. then angad came and asked them whts happening then josh said u remember my performance in which i came from upside and enterz in the centre of fire.. so angad gets excited and said yes.. and josh said y not add this in ur performance it will make the performance more better.. then angad gets ready and prithvi said i cant understand its dangerous but angad iz all set for that stunt..

Then it shows the fire extinguishes bottles on the table for angad's performance.. then a Circle of fire iz fired and angad in a rope ready to do the stunt..then sum1 stoles the fire extinguishes bottles from the table and angad then slowly slowly coming down from the rope then suddenly sum1 cuts the rope and angadz gets out of control kripa simone and josh everyone got tensed and kripa shouts(as usually) Angad!!.. and then prithvi suddenly come and saves angad.. but angad got hurt on his back then everyone came there and kripa shouts.. sumbody call the doctor..

OUCH!!.. BAck Hurts!! JOSH AND PRITHVI'S ARGUMENT

Angad On a Sofa with a back pain..and kripa in tension..josh and prithvi also present there..then doctor says that angad will be fine tommorow but he hav to rest today..otherwise his backbone will hurt more and doctor will not responsible for that.. then angad said that howz it possible tonight iz my show then doctor sayz that if his backbone hurts more then hez not responsible for that.. then prithvi started blaming on josh abt all this stunt's idea and accident but josh accused that he only wants to make angad's entry and performance more better then prithvi gets disturbed and left from there after saying that yes maybe its his fault that he thinkz abt angad!!then kripa also leaves from there

WHT A FRIENDSHIP!!

Josh said sorry to Angad and angad said its ok as its just an accident.then the maneger came and said wht will gonna happen now as angad iz not in a position to do this show.. angad said he'll try his best and he tryz to sit but the back hurts..then josh said that if therez nothing matter then he'll perform in replacement of angad as he watches angad's reherseling with kripa so its eazy for him to perform..then the maneger agrees and angad also agreed with him..and happy!!

NOT THAT GOOD BUT STILL NOT BAD FRIENDSHIP!!

Kripa and Prithvi..:.. prithvi said sorry to kripa that he misbehaves with josh..kripa said its ok as its josh's fault.. then the maneger came and said go and get ready for the show.. kripa and prithvi gets shocked and kripa said that is angad ready to perform..then maneger said that no..josh iz gonna perform in replacement of angad kripa gets more shocked..

Angad AGRrees kripa TO DO THE SHOW WITH JOSH

Angad as usually on Sofa in the dressing room..having rest..kripa came and said that she will not perform with josh at all..coz josh iz the one whoz responsible for the accident..then angad told her that she hav to performm but kripa said"mai yeh show nahin karongi nahin karongi" but angad succeed in getting kripa ready to do the show then kripa leave from there after saying that Take Care !! and angad in a smily face

OLD PERFORMANCES..!!(faltu)

then they showed Josh's old performance of that "Dus Bahane"and then A lil of "Kambakht Ishq"one performance of josh and kripa..

KRIPA DUNT LIKE JOSH.. NOT A ROCKING PERFORMANCE..

then angad having rest on his bedroom then josh came and angad said Rocking performance and kripa also came their then the maneger came and told josh that after this performance he got 10 more show's offerz and josh and angad gets happy and angad said thatz gr8 congrates!! and kripa leave from their..!!

PYAAR OR DOOSTI.. WHTEVER

Angad and Kripa.:.angad said that whts the matter with kripa why shez blaming josh for all this as josh iz his best friend ..hez very important for him as kripa iz his love and life josh iz also important for him!! and kripa gets rude and said that i m right and angad iz saying all this coz josh iz his friend then angad also gets rude and leaves from their.. after that prithvi came in and told kripa that angad iz right as josh iz not responsible for all this and hez angad's friend so he cant do this and u hav to say sorry to both of them..Kripa agrees and sayz to prithvi that hez right and she'll say sorry to josh and angad

AGAIN PYAAR AND DOOSTI.. Love Never Dies!!..(Love this scene)

Josh and Angad talkin abt this matter.. josh said to angad that maybe kripa iz right shez tensed abt u so thatz y shez behaving like this..but angad said that how can she blame u.. "U"..then kripa came their and said sorry to Josh first then josh said its ok no need of sorry he'll understand!! and then kripa said sorry to Angad ..angad said its ok but still sad then josh said comeon guyz now hug each other.. this matter iz solved now!!

Mobile ka ZAMANA HAi!!..(lolz)

Angad And Kripa came close then angad kissed on kripa's forehead and SUMONE CAPTURE THEIR PIC IN THE MOBILE..and then they they Hug.

The END

send me suggestions whether i hav done a good update or not .. actually i want to put daily updates in my group myself.. not from india-forums so just want suggestions how can i improve my updates!! as my english iz not that well😡Dunt forget to tell okz

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