MG Time pass teen age love story of maaneet part 23- on 153 - 28 jan - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update maan tapori style lovely feel bad 4 father good maan know how hard his father work now maan also feel bad 4 his father
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3

maan feel so much hurt in his mind she ask with shaking voice mujse ku chupaya , pinky say wo tuze tension nahi dena chati thi main aur baba maan just hug pinky and cried why you both are so good tum dono itne ache ku ho from tomorrow I will took any part time kal se apun koi part time lene wala hai to apne baap ko bolna sirf 6 hour driving ok

pinky just slap his forehead ku tera baap nah hai kya maan just look hear and there and say di yaha nahi marne ka koi dekh lega to area main apna wat , impression kam ho jayega , phir apunse kon darega


pinky , bas kar maan bhai (tapori wala Bhai ) both just went to sleep

next morning maan just went to meet rahim chacha with his friend who suggesio him rahim look to him and ask , dandi to nahi marega na , har roje aana padega



maan apun har roje aa jayega chacha worry nahi karneka



ok than start with today iwill show today , from tomorrow you have to go yourself ok

rahim - i will travel to whole world but iwant to bring you hear



it is chawle of very educated people if you went late anywhere its ok , but don't ever come late hear ok get it

maan - not get it with attitude

maan boss- ok let go I will tell you and both went near room of some one after distribute paper to other

maan boss just stop and say just read name plate

maan start to read

Mohinder Handa s.s.c , H.s.c. ,B.s.c.


Bhbha automic research center (new lipic) means Clark

maan ,yaar how much he study who is this

maan boss - this is house of SHAKAL danger man you give paper very slowly without making any noise

maan just nodded in yes and try to put paper on bolt of door , but his hard luck it make noise

maan boss - you make blunder

just than a man around 50 open door he don't have any hair on his head

maan - ek bhi bal / hair nahi hai

Mohinder - what

maan - no no iqbal nahi hai aj to main aa gaya paper dalne

Mohinder - what is problem , when you giving paper don't make any sound , can I circulate this notice in your paper business

maan - na na wo news paper galpatala (slip) from my hand so

mohinder - what a language

maan boss - naya hai wah 9 ( he is new )

maohinder - kya naya hai wah , tu kya bol raha hai , main kya bol rah hu , I am talking about lauguage it should be clean with proper pronunciation

Mohinder took news paper in his hand and say look how make this paper dirty

maan boss naya hai wah

Mohinder - kya naya hai wah , tu kya bol raha hai , main kya bol rah hu , I am talking about his action , if you don't get than go their where you come from , that dirty place ok , what is your name

maan - my name is maan

Mohinder - kya galat namm rakha hai ma baap ne , Maan hone ke liye Self respect hona chiye get it

maan - I don't have mother

Mohinder that good or else she get pain to have boy like you and now just get out

both just literally run from there , maan ask chacha kya ishka bachpan se hi screw gir gaya hai kya , itna bada lecture sirf door sound ke liya iski to main

rahim chacha - laungauge maan

maan - bhasha suudhh jane so itna clear to apun ko ish janam main bol ne ko nahi aane wala SHAKAL the villain both just laugh loudly

After distributing all paper maan went to collage gate MM ko jo dekhana tha

other side geet reach in collage her all friend participate in dance but geet cant restriction she just watching

just than all girl hard some noice from gate entrance all just went near to saw , geet is not ready but all just pull her there that boy dance wala talking with gate keeper with tapori language

gate keeper - just show me your id , id card dikha aur ander ja

maan - tum apins id maang raha hai apunse ( you want id from me )

naam suna hai kya mera Maan singh khurana

gate keeper - nahi suna

all just laugh on him

maan - majak udata hai mera hum garib hui to kya hui hum dil se ammir hai hum kale hui to kya hua hum tere chaane wale hai maan look to geet and contiun arre hawa se , pani se , apen wife se puch hai kya id all just clap on him

maan - chalo ek ek karke sab side ho javo ,pado likho bade bano aur mar javo , are hum jiyenge apni marzi se , marenge tum per apni marji se chal hawa aane de and maan just went from there

geet and her friend look him with open mouth kya kya suna ke chala gaya

geet friend just pull her chal geet kya ladka tha aur kya language

one girl lakin mast bola na , poor geet in some magic just say huuu

othe just scold her and go away that girl come newr geet and say wo sab tumare liye tha , geet look with shock chi chi babaji kuch bhi

But thought of maan start to come in her mind she start to think about it her teen age ...she found it different from her house atmosphere , his careless nature , she always in tense in front of all how many time and for how many thing she want to protest but her nature not helping her ...she love dance but for parent she stopping herself

precap

geet standing in front of mirror rumal on her neck like tapori and saying

hum garib hui to kya hui hum dil se ammir hai hum kale hui to kya hua hum tere chaane wale hai arre hawa se , pani se , apen wife se puch hai kya id all just clap on him

maan - chalo ek ek karke sab side ho javo ,pado likho bade bano aur mar javo , are hum jiyenge apni marzi se , marenge tum per apni marji se chal hawa aane de

and she turn and froze in her place , her parent standing there with shocking face like they saw some ghost



adi v/s ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it allot!!!!!
geet copying maan🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update dear..
feeling sad for maan father...
pinky is his sister...
cont. soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesm kya jawab diya maan ne bt geet's father is too stright precap is amazng waitng 4 it update it soon mahi
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Posted: 11 years ago
wsom updt
love maan and mohinder convo
nice nme fr moinder shakal
geet lost n maan care freee atttitude
loved it
precap look intrsting
cont soon
thnx fr pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update mahi
maan following geet to mandir.
glad that maan try to help his father. ok this is for part 2
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Posted: 11 years ago
and this one for part 3.
first i must say kaya dhansu part hai.
😆
and now geet will also copying maan...🤣
oh yes thatSHAKAL🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
precap is too good lolz geet coping maan🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hey grt updte...
Tapori maan is jst grt ...languge is too funny ...
N maan mast atty in geet collg is funny ...
Geet copyn maan wl b fun to read...waitn

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