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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
hate this Geet! Poor Maan! Geet playing him very well! All she wants is 2 b famous n reach success by using him! He has feelings 4 her! update soon! Well written
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82
fabulous update dear :)
really superb :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
part 4
nice part...
poor Maan...
and Geet is using him so well...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
Mein aagayiii😎


Me commenting...understanding it is ur problem😆

Part-3

All the while, I am just worried about my Maan

The way he wants to make her happy unknown to the reality

Arre waah Sam & Geet together, but instead of Sam its Geet whom I hate the most😆, but I guess Sam may play some role in bringing truth out vowing to her J...ahhh here I go with too much thinking

ohh...how much I was cursing and hating Geet all through Maan's performance and their talk after that...I was like oh my poor Maan...yaar he is so very happy but this cruel-devil is gonna break his heart very badly using her charms and deeds

OMG...itna fast, fast...they expressed their feelings and he is all lost in her already. Lucky she..her plan is working really fast

Precap: Are we going to get a glimpse of present as in Geet as superstar or past where she had succeeded her first try for fame or got an opportunity I mean
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
Awww...thats a lovely banner dear and the words on it so true only the one who gave pain can heal it (in extremes cases😉)...want to see them together already

Well coming to the update, all I can say is I hate Geet so very much. Never ever hated Maan even when he was so heartless😉😆, but seeing Geet doing all this with him is so painful. You show her so cruel and heartless for me...great writing👍🏼

Hmmm...what is she planning now...sounding so serious and want to meet him, poor he

She defo would look cute in that dress😳

She is such a schemer, taking every step carefully...not wanting any lapses till she reaches her goal, her dream...and making him trust her words

Awww...cherry is cute and sweet...how dare she say tacky

OMG...WAAH, what a way to make an entry into her dream world thru him and the song so perfect SB...she knows how and when to play her cards very well.

Yash is smart, even he gets it...but yeh majnu ko kaun samhaye

I wonder how and when Geet realizes her mistake and love and Maan finds the truth...can't wait for that

Awesome updates yaar...waiting for more as always
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
awesome updates...plz add me ...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
nice story👏👏




maan is truly in love😊




geet is faking😡




update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 5
Maan seprated himself from his Misty with a lot of diffeculty. He shot a glare at Yash. Yash giggled.
''Geet I must say very impressive.''
''So can I be in Maan's band.''
''Yes you are in.''
''Thank you''
''We will have a press meet tonight and we will introduce you after two days.''
''Perfect.''
''You two will have to sing together.''
''Do you have any song in mind.''
''Yes.''
He told him how he wanted their performance to be. They nodded. When Yash left Geet looked at Maan.
''Oh Maan I am so excited I can't believe we will be working together.''
Maan smiled.
''Yes Geet even I am really excited, but let me drop you home as I have to get ready for tonight.''
She nodded. They walked outside but not holding hands as Geet didn't want the press to click their pics together, like that. Maan dropped Geet home when she walked in she saw Sam sitting on her bed as they had started sharing a room.
''Geet did Maan the Maan Singh Khurana just drop you and what are those rumours of you two dating.''
''Uff nothing I am just using the fool.''
''What.''
''Well Sammy I can do anything to be famous and if it means dating Maan for a while I will.''
''He is hot you know so why don't you stay forever with him.''
''He might be hot but he is such a bore.';
''Really.''
''Yeah.''
''Can I have him once you dump him.''
''Sure honey he will need a shoulder to cry on.''
They both laughed. At night Maan messaged Geet to turn to televison on at channel aaj tak. She did as he said.
''Maan sir who is this girl, is it your new gf?''
A reporter asked.
''No it's the new memeber of out band we will be introducing her after two days.''
''But the way you where hugging her it seemed you where mixing work with pleasure.''
''No no it was just a friendly encouracing hug.''
The quations con but Geet got bored and swicted off.Maan called Geet up.
''Hey Misty.''
''Hey Maan.''
'''Misty I hated the way I had to lie.''
'''Hmm I know Maan but it's just a matter of couple of days before the world will know me as yours.''
''Oh my cherry I can't wait for that day.''
Ehh again that tacky name she thought.
''Yes Maan neither can l.''
''Geet I will pick you up at 4, tomorrow.''
''Why.''
''We have to rehearse for the song we need to perform.''
''Alright.''
''Bye love.''
''Bye Maan.''
She hung up and turned to Sam.
''Oh this guy is so hard to stand out.''
''Why he is such a hottie.''
''Whatever.''
Having said that she walked into the shower. At night love sick Maan called her up again. Geet looked at the caller id.
''Oh GOD not again.''
''What happened.''
''He is calling.''
''Then pick up if you want your plan to work you need to give him your full attention.''
''I know.''
Annoyed she picked up.
''Hey Maan.''
''Misty I was missing you and I am sure my Misty was missing me too.''
She made a I am going to puke face Sam supressed her giggle and gestured her to put the call on speaker, Geet did so.
''Yes Maan I was missing you too.''
She said while rolling her eyes making Sam laugh more to stop her laugh she hid her face in her pillow.
''So Geetu what if I come an pick you up and take you for a romantic long night drive.''
Geet mounted a what the f**** to Sam, who mounted her to say yes.
''Oh Maan I would love to I will be waiting for you.''
''Well Geetu come downstairs as I am standing under the building waiting for my cherry.''
''Oh Maan give me 10 min I am coming.''
She hung up.
''Geet you have really winded him arround your finger.''
''Well that's the affects of Geet handa's charm.''
''So his cherry get ready to do more magic on him''
''Yuck Sam don't call me that, gosh why does he have to be so tacky.''
Sam laughed.
''You still want him after I dump him.''
''Yes as he is hot.''
''Whatever.''
Geet put on a causal yet sexy dress.
When Geet walked outside Maan just kept looking her her curls where falling on her cheeks, that he walked towards her in trance and tugged them behind her ear.
''You look breathtaking.''
Having said that he leaned towards her and kissed her cheek. Geet smiled at the ground. Maan put his hand around her waist and lead her to his car. Geet was acting all shy shy, while inside she was grinning at the affect she had on Maan.While Maan just couldn't keep his eyes off her. He kept looking at her angelic face. When Geet was about to step into the car he stopped her. She looked at him confused.
'' Jaan if I will ride today I am scared we won't come back alive as I won't be able to concetrate on the road.''
''Maan aap bhi nah.''
''Misty I am saying the truth so instead of a long drive lets have a long walk.''
Geet nodded sweetly and put her hand in his. Maan felt his intense stare on her while they where walking. She noticed he really couldn't keep his eyes off her. But not only his eyes he couldn't stop touching her either he would lean at her every second it seemed and kiss her cheek. She didn't want to stop him as she wanted to go on the top so badly so she let him do whatever he wanted, being it kissed her cheek or carrising her waist. They kept walking for a long time, when Geet started getting worried he kept kissing her cheeks what if someone clicked it, this guy didn't knew when to stop. So she slightly pushed him.
''Maan please stop.''
''Kya huwa Geet don't you like my touch.''
''nhai Maan I have already given my heart and soul to you it's just that what if someone clicks a pic.'
''Oh Geet today I want you all to my self without anything to worry about.''
''Maan but.''
''Relax Geet come with me.''
He led her to a lillte appartment.'
'''this is the first thing I bought when I started to earn money.''
''It's lovely.''
He made her sit on the bed.
''Geet I am so happy today.''
''Why so maan.''
''Jaan I told dadi about us, she said she will make sure your parents agree. Geet she will make everything right.''
What the hell no he can't be serious has he lost it. Shit Geet cursed Maan more in her head.
''But Maan inti jhaldi and my parents only believe in arranged marraige, remember.''
''Geet relax Yash gave me and dadi a amazing idea and we have it all planned.Dadi will accidently meet your parents become friends then she will be shocked to know we work together and at the end she will point out that we look great together.''
Great this guy is a lunatic and this Yash what;s wrong with him Geet thought.
''Jaan tell me the adress of your parents.''
OMG how can I tell him I don't want to marry you.Time to distract him Geet.
''Of course Maan I will but tonight let's talk about us.''
She said pulling him towards her and she kissed his both cheeks. Before they both knew it they had crossed all there limits. 'They where both lying next to each other silence prevailing in the room, untill Maan spoke up.
''Misty we really need to marry quik now.''
''Oh Maan I love you so much and I don't want anything else but before getting married I want to work a couple of years and I swore to my daarij to not work once I will marry if he lets me chase my dreams so can't you wait, I am yours already Maan.''
He leaned forward and kissed her cheek.
''Anything for you jaan.''
He dropped her home, when she entered her room Sam who was sleeping woke up.
''So how was the drive with mister boring.''
Geet sighed and told her everything.
''You what Geet have you lost it. You went to far.''
''I don't care Sam I will do anything to get what I want nothing can stop me from becoming famous and if Maan would have started doubting me I would have a problem.''
''But geet selling your soul like that, you shouldn't have done that.''
''I SAID I DON'T CARE.''
she yelled and walked towards the shower banging the door close.
I have already banked two upadates for Maan ki princess but I will only update if my 5 pages qoute gets filled. So if you want a update of that ff you know what to do same goes for this one give me LONG SEH BHI LONG COMMENTS AS IT'S SO HARD TO TYPE SUCH KIND OF PARTS and short comments aren't really motivating.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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tia
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aley wah
Tia first n wowww
second too
yipeee
thx god u updated😆😆😆

Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago
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tia ka maanu jaanu😉
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i so much want to kick that girl hard on her a** for calling my maanu a fool nd bore
kamini using my maanu
n saying cherry name tacky how dare she call my cherry name tacky huh idiot
maanu is all fida over her n want to get marrid to her but she is all lost in her dream
n wt a bit** she has become sold herself in her dream.. well little happy it is maanu with him.. cant even imagine geet doing all this with someone else..
god she not even regretting she can do to any extent
gosh my mel can write all this never though but really have to say good going..
its really different seeing geet behaving so selfishly and can cross any limit but love to hate her
want more
Edited by Tia-AFreeBird - 11 years ago

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